Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 27, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-21033 Association between inflammatory cytokines and immune-checkpoint molecule in rheumatoid arthritis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Migita, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by the reviewer. I think that it is of special importance to pay attention to his general recommendation to highlight the main conclusions of your study, peraphs with choosing to delete some graphs. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Reviewer Recommendation and Comments for Manuscript Number PONE-D-21-21033 Matsumoto et al. represents measurements of Gal-9, sTim-3, IL-6 and TNFa and radiographic staging in 132 patients with established and actively treated RA. The key finding is that different associations between serum cytokines and soluble immune-checkpoint molecules is altered by their ACPA-status and in general differ between patients notably on different treatments. In general, an interesting subject but with the descriptive data included in the present paper it is difficult to draw any robust conclusions on the relationship between serum cytokines, soluble immune-checkpoint molecules and ACPA-status. A short method sections furthers challenges the conclusions being made. Interesting data that would be of interest to the field but that in its current form needs revisions to increase the impact and sharpens the conclusions. MAJOR COMMENTS • In light of the hypotheses – why measure Gal-9 (which is neither an immune-checkpoint molecule nor a cytokine)? Further Gal-9 is not mentioned in the introduction or background session. Why Tim-3 out of multiple interesting immune checkpoint molecules (PD-1, 4-1BB, OX-40 ect). – please elaborate. • Due to the cross-sectional study design, it is difficult to relate these measurements to progression of RA as indicated in the last part of the background session. Further, on page 20 in the discussion it is stated that … these data suggests that the interplay between inflammatory cytokines and checkpoint molecules may differentially contribute to the RA inflammation and articular destruction processes and page 3 in the conclusions …They may be usefull markers for predicting the phenotype and personalized treatment of RA. But since possible interactions, phenotypes or personalized treatment were never studied by the present paper together with the cross-sectional design of the study makes these statements a bit speculative. Association is not the same as causality. In this light the multiple sections on interactions and possible biomarker potential are a bit speculative and not well substantiated by the data presented. In general, consider aligning the hypotheses and conclusions to better reflect the descriptive design and results being presented. • Biologics are grouped without mentioning what specific treatment the patients were given at the time of serum acquisition. This is of key importance since many patients receive anti-IL6 or Anti-TNF that would immensely affect the measurements of exactly these to cytokines. Further CRP is not useful in patient on IL-6 treatments. Please clarify the treatments and consider omitting the anti-IL-6 and TNF treated patients from the analyses. • Considerable difference between the age of the healthy controls and the patients please comment on the potential role of this in the present paper. • ELISA: What were the cut-off values? Did you test for interference by rheumatoid factor and heterophilic antibodies? – of particular interest since sero-positive and sero-negative patients are being compared. (Kragstrup, T. W., Vorup-Jensen, T., Deleuran, B., & Hvid, M. (2013). A simple set of validation steps identifies and removes false results in a sandwich enzyme- linked immunosorbent assay caused by anti- animal IgG antibodies in plasma from arthritis patients. SpringerPlus, 2(1), 1–1. http://doi.org/10.1186/2193-1801-2-263) • Why make a continuous variable as ACPA-titers into a dichotomic? – please elaborate. Are there any correlation between the titers of ACPA and the cytokines / soluble immune checkpoint molecules or Gal-9? Would be interesting to address? • TNFα is generally being considered a driver of IL-6 (Charles, P., Elliott, M. J., Davis, D., Potter, A., Kalden, J. R., Antoni, C., et al. (1999). Regulation of cytokines, cytokine inhibitors, and acute-phase proteins following anti-TNF-alpha therapy in rheumatoid arthritis. J. Immunol. 163 (3), 1521–1528.). Please elaborate and discuss the finding that the patients either had high IL-6 or TNF but not both. • If the different serum cytokines, soluble immune-checkpoint molecules and Gal-9 are combined which combination have the highest predictive value towards high disease activity or structural damage. – This could be a need place for the present paper to increase the value/impact of the results presented. • Consider to focus on one aspect and reducing the numbers of graphs with relatively limited importance for the conclusions to avoid data overload and blurring of the key massages. MINOR COMMENTS • • MMP3 is mentioned as a biomarker of joint damage page 6 and in table 1 but never mentioned in figures or the result session later in the paper – consider include or omit completely. • How is moderate or severe disease activity defined?, how is overlap syndrome being defined? • Consider getting the manuscript corrected grammatically to sharpen small errors? • Please relate the cytokine and Gal-9 levels to other publications on RA patients measuring these proteins. • Consider putting your figures in a table to increase the comparison between different correlations and the impact of ACPA and remove figures to supplementary. • Change the scale on the y-aksis of figure 1 to increase the área between 0-100 were the vast majority of the data is situated. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Association between inflammatory cytokines and immune–checkpoint molecule in rheumatoid arthritis PONE-D-21-21033R1 Dear Dr. Migita, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Please find below some suggestions of minor corrections. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pierre Busson, MD, PhD, Res Director Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Suggestions of corrections: - Abstract p.2 line 6 : « …osteoclasts and is involved …» instead of « …osteoclasts and be involved …» - Abstract p.2 line 7 :”…to investigate the relationships between…”instead of ”…to investigate the association between…” - Introduction p.4 line 17 “…involved in negative regulation of …” instead of “…involved in negative regulator of …” - Introduction p.5 line 5 “…A relationship between…” instead of “…The relationship between…” - Materials and Methods p.7 line 6 “…disease activity while the group…” instead of “…disease activity; and the group…” - Results p.10 line 9 “…corresponding to…” instead of “…corresponded to …” - Discussion p.17, line 17 :”…in a fraction of RA patients…” instead of “…in a certain of RA patients…” - Conclusion p.22, line 5 : “…with circulating inflammatory cytokines…” instead of “…with circulating inflammatory arthritis…” Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-21033R1 Association between inflammatory cytokines and immune–checkpoint molecule in rheumatoid arthritis Dear Dr. Migita: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pierre Busson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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