Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-17418 Prevalence and Predictive Risk Factors of Hypertension in patients hospitalized in Kamenge Military hospital and Kamenge University teaching hospital in 2019: A Fixed Effect Modelling Study in Burundi PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Iradukunda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please revise the manuscript in line with Reviewers' comments, and particularly address Reviewers' comments regarding the dataset, data and performed analyses in the revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript about Prevalence and Predictive Risk Factors of Hypertension in patients hospitalized in Kamenge Military hospital and Kamenge University teaching hospital is well written with detailed descriptions of methodology and results. Numerous advanced statistical methods have been applied. The Table and Figures are quite detailed. Both the topic of the study as well as the findings are interesting. However, I have some comments about the manuscript, as described below. 1. The attached database has 304 respondents, while the manuscript shows 353. It is not possible to repeat the analyzes listed in the paper. A proper database needs to be attached. 2. The population of respondents is not precisely explained through the structure of wards and patients in hospitals. What are the primary diagnoses for which they were admitted to the hospitals? How was the randomization done in relation to the hospital ward? 3. When calculating the sample size, the prevalence of hypertension was taken to be 0.5, which is a large value. 4. The incidence of Chronic kidney failure is 52.1% (184/353 * 100), which is a high incidence. Additionally, whether Chronic kidney failure is a predictor or a consequence of hypertension. Can these patients be regarded as predictors of hypertension in the study? 5. It is not explained how and based on what data was the General cardiovascular risk calculated and what it refers to. 6. More than 50% of references are older than 5 years. There are newer publications for this topic, so I suggest adding them. 7. How the results obtained on the basis of hospital patients can be generalized to the population of Burundi? 8. Include BMI in the model as an ordinal variable with all categories or compare Overweight and Obesity in relation to Underweight and Normal. 9. Is cardiovascular comorbidity a predictor or a consequence of hypertension? 10. In logistic regression, the odds ratio is obtained, so the results should be interpreted in that way. 11. The paper does not state the level of significance. 12. Delete AIC values from tables with univariate analyzes because they do not contribute to informativeness. 13. In the attached database it is necessary to check the values for: age (range 15-107 years) and BMI (minimum value is 6.72) 14. In Table 3 the p-value for Smoking is 0.081, which is not statistically significant. 15. In Table 1 the sum of all categories in column N is 353. In cell named Total, the value is 309. 16. All numeric values in tables and text should be set to one decimal place. I suggest a revision of the manuscript followed by second round of review. Reviewer #2: The topic of the paper is interesting, always actual and always need new information-up to date. The topic is also relevant in the application of appropriate statistical modeling to identify risk factors. In order for the paper to be publish, it is necessary to change the way of describing the used statistical methods and presenting the results. In the material and methods, it is described how the required sample size was calculated. It only needs to be describe, without writing formulas. In the part of statistical analysis, it should be described why certain statistical tests and analyzes were used. Describe the tests used in the different data collected and analyzed. It is not necessary to show the formulas of the regression analysis used. This is unnecessary if the topic of the paper is hypertension in a certain patient population. This way of writing the methodology as well as presenting the results is matching with the paper whose topic is logistic regression analysis, with example of a study to identify risk factors for the occurrence of hypertension in the observed patient population. The results are needs to be completely changed. Show the tables so that the results are clear to the doctor who reading the paper. Table 1: What 95% CI refers. Table 2: explain what AIC is. Is table 3 required? Fig. 1 and Fig. 2, and Fig. 4 are unclear. Describe the adequacy of the model, and the tests used for testing in the methodology. I don’t think they need to be shown in the results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-21-17418R1Prevalence and Predictive Risk Factors of Hypertension in patients hospitalized in Kamenge Military hospital and Kamenge University teaching hospital in 2019: A Fixed Effect Modelling Study in BurundiPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Iradukunda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you to authors for addressing the comments. Please, carefully review and answer the comments raised by a reviewer. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I suggest that the manuscript can be accepted for publication after a minor revision: 1. The attached database does not have a variable BMI divided to categories (Underweight and healthy, Overweight, Obese) 2. Check all p-values (for example, the p-value for EL in Table 2 is different from the p-value obtained after analysis from the database) 3. Check and correct all errors in the Tables (one of the examples [2.1-12.4-11.15]) 4. Equalize decimal places for numbers – number of decimal places should be consistent throughout the paper 5. Correct typing mistakes, sometimes there is no break, and sometimes it is in the wrong place. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Prevalence and Predictive Risk Factors of Hypertension in patients hospitalized in Kamenge Military hospital and Kamenge University teaching hospital in 2019: A Fixed Effect Modelling Study in Burundi PONE-D-21-17418R2 Dear Dr. Iradukunda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Irena Ilic, M.D., Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-17418R2 Prevalence and Predictive Risk Factors of Hypertension in patients hospitalized in Kamenge Military hospital and Kamenge University teaching hospital in 2019 : A Fixed Effect Modelling Study in Burundi Dear Dr. Iradukunda: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Irena Ilic Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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