Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 7, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03097 Relationship between urban morphology and land surface temperature – a case study of Nanjing City PLOS ONE Dear Dr. shusheng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer 2 Summary: The paper presents an application of MGWR to Landsat-derived LST across Nanjing. This is potentially useful to other researchers as an application case study that can inform future work on similar problems. I recommend "major" revisions primarily b/c I'm asking for a bit of additional statistical analysis. But I am confident that the authors can address my comments. Section 3.2: Since the purpose of this paper is to compare MGWR to GWR, it would be useful if the authors could expand this section to provide a bit more context. Has MGWR been applied to similar problems elsewhere? What is the theoretical motivation for applying MGWR to the challenge of LST prediction in an urban environment? Section 4.1: The first long paragraph is mostly unnecessary b/c the results are summarized in a table. I suggest that the authors remove this paragraph in favor of a short paragraph that highlights any particularly interesting features of these results. A similar comment applies to the Section 4.2 text that presents the numbers preported in Tables 4 and 5. Section 4.3: Is MGWR better than GWR by a statistically significant amount? A test of statistical significance could be added to "Table 4" of this section (which I think is actually Table 7 in the manuscript). Section 4.3: Are the R2 statistics provided here for data that were used in fitting the MGWR and GWR, or for holdout data? While AIC is useful, it would be better to see how the models compare in out-of-sample prediction. Also, why is R2 and adjR2 the only metric used? What about MSE, or some other indicator of magnitude of error? Section 5: It is unusual to have a "Conclusions" section between Results and Discussion. Perhaps this could be restructured to be a Section 4.4 "Summary" of results? p. 26, top line: there's an incomplete sentence here. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. 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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, This paper is overall interesting. However, the major revisions are required in terms of English, references, logic and structure. Please see the detailed comments in the attachment. My pleasure to see your revised verison. Reviewer #2: Summary: The paper presents an application of MGWR to Landsat-derived LST across Nanjing. This is potentially useful to other researchers as an application case study that can inform future work on similar problems. I recommend "major" revisions primarily b/c I'm asking for a bit of additional statistical analysis. But I am confident that the authors can address my comments. Section 3.2: Since the purpose of this paper is to compare MGWR to GWR, it would be useful if the authors could expand this section to provide a bit more context. Has MGWR been applied to similar problems elsewhere? What is the theoretical motivation for applying MGWR to the challenge of LST prediction in an urban environment? Section 4.1: The first long paragraph is mostly unnecessary b/c the results are summarized in a table. I suggest that the authors remove this paragraph in favor of a short paragraph that highlights any particularly interesting features of these results. A similar comment applies to the Section 4.2 text that presents the numbers preported in Tables 4 and 5. Section 4.3: Is MGWR better than GWR by a statistically significant amount? A test of statistical significance could be added to "Table 4" of this section (which I think is actually Table 7 in the manuscript). Section 4.3: Are the R2 statistics provided here for data that were used in fitting the MGWR and GWR, or for holdout data? While AIC is useful, it would be better to see how the models compare in out-of-sample prediction. Also, why is R2 and adjR2 the only metric used? What about MSE, or some other indicator of magnitude of error? Section 5: It is unusual to have a "Conclusions" section between Results and Discussion. Perhaps this could be restructured to be a Section 4.4 "Summary" of results? p. 26, top line: there's an incomplete sentence here. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-21-03097R1Relationship between urban morphology and land surface temperature – a case study of Nanjing CityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. shusheng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jun Yang Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): After reading through authors revision, I found authors have made most revisions. However, it cannot meet the requirements. 1. For instance, several abbrevations have been used in the abstract, but it does not provide the full name. 2. Authors have inserted the solid references to support their argument in the context. However, such references have not been updated in the last Reference section. Authors have to address this problem. I will further check this in the next round of review. 3. Authors may be interested in the following references: Yang, J., Wang, Y., Xue, B., Li, Y., Xiao, X., Xia, J. C., & He, B. (2021). Contribution of urban ventilation to the thermal environment and urban energy demand: Different climate background perspectives. Science of The Total Environment, 795, 148791. Luo, X., Yang, J., Sun, W., & He, B. (2021). Suitability of human settlements in mountainous areas from the perspective of ventilation: A case study of the main urban area of Chongqing. Journal of Cleaner Production, 310, 127467. 4. Moreover, authors are required to provide a document of 'responses to reviewers' in which authors' responses are provided point-by-point.. 5. Therefore, please reply to me in the next round based on the document of 'responses to reviewers'. Both the first-round and second-round responses should be provided. 6. Section 6 should be shortened to provide key information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: After reading through authors revision, I found authors have made most revisions. However, it cannot meet the requirements. 1. For instance, several abbrevations have been used in the abstract, but it does not provide the full name. 2. Authors have inserted the solid references to support their argument in the context. However, such references have not been updated in the last Reference section. Authors have to address this problem. I will further check this in the next round of review. 3. Authors may be interested in the following references: Yang, J., Wang, Y., Xue, B., Li, Y., Xiao, X., Xia, J. C., & He, B. (2021). Contribution of urban ventilation to the thermal environment and urban energy demand: Different climate background perspectives. Science of The Total Environment, 795, 148791. Luo, X., Yang, J., Sun, W., & He, B. (2021). Suitability of human settlements in mountainous areas from the perspective of ventilation: A case study of the main urban area of Chongqing. Journal of Cleaner Production, 310, 127467. 4. Moreover, authors are required to provide a document of 'responses to reviewers' in which authors' responses are provided point-by-point.. 5. Therefore, please reply to me in the next round based on the document of 'responses to reviewers'. Both the first-round and second-round responses should be provided. 6. Section 6 should be shortened to provide key information. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their responses to my queries, and I am happy to recommend the manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Relationship between urban morphology and land surface temperature – a case study of Nanjing City PONE-D-21-03097R2 Dear Dr. shusheng, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jun Yang Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Accept Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper is now well written. The English is good and the results are robust. Therefore, it is now acceptable. Reviewer #2: As I was satisfied with the authors' response to my comments in their first revision, I will defer to the other reviewers and editor on any remaining issues. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-03097R2 Relationship between urban morphology and land surface temperature –– a case study of Nanjing City Dear Dr. Yin: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jun Yang Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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