Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-17243 Transcutaneous spinal cord stimulation and the generation of motor responses in individuals with spinal cord injury: a methodological review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Taylor, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. When revising your manuscript, it is expecially important that you explain your inclusion criteria (Why only EMG as outocme measures? Why only studie published between 1995 and 2020?). Besides, you should shorten and sharpen your discussion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you very much for considering me as one of the reviewers of this manuscript and thanks for authors’ hard works. I have a number of comments below. 1) I have found a recent review published: Megia Garcia, Alvaro, et al. "Transcutaneous spinal cord stimulation and motor rehabilitation in spinal cord injury: a systematic review." Neurorehabilitation and neural repair 34.1 (2020): 3-12. Please explain how your review is different and giving more info to readers. 2) Introduction: 2.1 tSCI is not a novel technique regarding “This is a novel modality under the relatively early stages of investigation.” 2.2 Please clarify; a multiple motor pools and auditory commands. 3) Methods: Why did you include only studies between 1995- June 2020? Then you miss out 39 studies published before 1995. Can you update the data till May 2021? Recently, interesting studies are published e.g. - Inanici, Fatma, et al. "Transcutaneous spinal cord stimulation restores hand and arm function after spinal cord injury." IEEE Transactions on Neural Systems and Rehabilitation Engineering 29 (2021): 310-319. - Hofstoetter, Ursula S., et al. "Transcutaneous Spinal Cord Stimulation Enhances Walking Performance and Reduces Spasticity in Individuals with Multiple Sclerosis." Brain Sciences 11.4 (2021): 472. - Benavides, Francisco D., et al. "Cortical and subcortical effects of transcutaneous spinal cord stimulation in humans with tetraplegia." Journal of Neuroscience 40.13 (2020): 2633-2643. 4) Discussion 4.1 Discussion part is too long, better to make it precise. 4.2 “Of the 22 included studies, 7 were case reports, 5 were case series, 3 were crossover trials, 6 were quasi-experimental studies (non-equivalent control group or nonrandomised intervention design) and one was a non-randomised control trial.” Please explain why there is no or very few RCT studies reported between 1995-2020. 4.3 “Due to electrode sites, tSCI cannot target neural tissue for stimulation.” Have you thought about other forms of TENS e.g., interferential current stimulation that can target the neural tissue? 4.4 It is better to have a reference. “FDA guidance documents advise against power densities greater than 0.25W/cm2 due to the potential heat damage to tissue.” 5) Please see minor errors highlighted in the pdf file, especially a few abbreviations (NI, NIL, @). Reviewer #2: This methodological review article provides a summary of published studies incorporating transcutaneous Spinal Cord Stimulation (tSCS) as an intervention for people living with Spinal Cord Injury (SCI), which have used electromyography (EMG) as an outcome measure. There have been several review articles recently published covering a similar topic, however this article brings together both therapeutic and neurophysiological studies, and provides considerable detail on the stimulation parameters used, which sets it apart from other recently published reviews. The authors found that published studies are of poor-fair quality, with low subject numbers, and stated that, due to the wide range of methodological approaches (including stimulation parameters used), they were unable to make methodological recommendations for future trials. Nevertheless, the review provides a helpful addition to the rapidly growing tSCS literature. My main concern with the review is the decision to only include trials that had used EMG as an outcome measure. As stated in the limitations section, “other studies detailing the tSCS parameters may have been excluded”. I did not find adequate justification for the exclusion of tSCS trials that did not incorporate EMG measures, and I feel it is important for the authors to explain their thought process, and justify this inclusion criterion. Further, specific comments are provided below. Page 5, search strategy line 3: there is a typo “was kept broad to in an attempt to…” Table 3: There are several undefined abbreviations (e.g. CR, CS, NI) Table 6: Why is the phase charge for Dy et al. 30 –83µC rather than 25-83 µC? Why is the Phase charge density only calculated for the upper current limits? For Wu et al. I don’t understand how the phase charge 89 µC was calculated. Table 7: The study by Gad et al. 2015 (57) incorporated a carrier frequency, which is not stated in the Table. Gad et al. 2015 is a conference proceeding, which presents a single case study. The same case study is also presented in the journal publication by Gad et al. (Gad et al. 2017; your ref 41), so I wonder whether the Gad et al. 2015 study should be removed from the review. Pages 24-25: It would be useful if the authors could provide a clear comparison between the electrical dosage and characteristics of studies that incorporate carrier frequencies, and those that do not. Is the reduction in charge duration generally compensated for by increased current amplitudes in the studies that incorporate the carrier, or is the overall charge density much lower? I think this is an important point because, as stated by the authors, there is no justification for the carrier, and it would be interesting to know whether the (motor and sensory) effects of tSCS are only dependent on charge density. Further detail on the method used to establish current amplitude (i.e. relative to motor/sensory threshold) for studies that do/do not incorporate a carrier, would also be a helpful addition. Page 40: there is a typo “This is spite of” change to “This is in spite of” Page 42; there is a typo “by Dannet et al. (80)” change to “by Danner et al. (80)” Page 43: “Examples of this approach can be seen in the detailed qualitative (84) and quantitative (85) comparisons of EMG recorded from patients with SCI during stepping in the presence or absence of eSCS”. It might be useful for the authors to briefly describe the procedures used by these studies. It should also be noted that stimulus artefacts are a significantly greater problem for tSCS than eSCS studies, due to the substantially higher currents required. Figure 1 legend: “the two phases having durations of t1 and t1 resp.” should this be t1 and t2? ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-17243R1 Transcutaneous spinal cord stimulation and motor responses in individuals with spinal cord injury: a methodological review. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Taylor, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 16 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Peter Schwenkreis Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have addressed all reviewers' comments appropriately. This revised manuscript is recommended for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all of my comments, with thanks. I have a couple of further (minor) comments following their replies: 1) It would be helpful if the authors are able to provide a reference for the statement "The use of a relatively high frequency carrier waveform in the stimulation pulse is believed to give more efficient signal transfer because the skin-electrode interface impedance has an area-dependent capacitive component which presents less electrical impedance at higher frequency". 2) Given the extended period over which the review was performed, there is an additional article, which I believe should have been included: Al’joboori, Y., Massey, S.J., Knight, S.L., Donaldson, N. & Duffell, L.D. The Effects of Adding Transcutaneous Spinal Cord Stimulation (tSCS) to Sit-To-Stand Training in People with Spinal Cord Injury: A Pilot Study. Journal of Clinical Medicine, 2020. 9(9): p. 2765. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sam Parittotokkaporn Reviewer #2: Yes: Lynsey Duffell [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. 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