Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-14016 Effect of weekend admission for acute aortic dissection on in-hospital mortality in Japan : a nationwide study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kato Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, even if the manuscript describes an original topic, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 10/08/2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a retrospective observational study in which 33706 patients admitted for acute aortic dissection in 953 certified Japanese hospital were analysed in order to find a correlation between admission day and in-hospital mortality. The patients were categorized according to the day of hospital admission and the analysis was performed comparing the patients that were admitted in the hospital and treated (surgically or medically) on weekdays, Saturdays and Sundays/Holidays. Thereafter, the analysis was carried out by each day of the week. The study showed that the patients with acute type A aortic dissection admitted on Sunday/holiday had a significantly increased risk of in-hospital mortality. In contrast, the patients admitted for acute type B aortic dissection didn’t show a difference in terms of in-hospital mortality according to the day of admission to the hospital. The topic of this study is very interesting and the potentialities of the analysis, including a large cohort of patients, are higher. The manuscript is well written, with proper English. However, there are some points of discussion: 1. The abstract should be divided in the appropriate sections. 2. The method of categorization of patients used to perform the analysis was described in the section “Data definition”. It should be moved in the section “Study setting and patients selection”. 3. In the section “Measurement”, it was described only the primary outcome of the study. This item should be improved. 4. The information regarding the patient’s selection and the definition of population analysed in the study, in association with the flow-chart of the patient selection process, were reported in the section “Results”. It should be moved in the “Methods” section. 5. The Table 1 and Table 2 showed the characteristics of the patients according to sex and to Stanford type. The variables analysed are few. In particular, many pre-operative variables, including cardiovascular risk factors, that could help to understand the risk profile of patients are not analysed. 6. In Table 2, they reported that 8065 patients (23.9%) of the overall population were “Unknown”. This group of patients should be removed from the analysis. 7. In Table 2, the authors reported that 58.2% of acute type A aortic dissection were treated surgically. How were the remaining patients treated? 8. The type of aortic surgery performed is not reported. 9. The post-operative complications of patients underwent aortic arch surgery should be added. 10. The authors reported in the limitation of the study the lack of the pre-operative, intra-operative and post-operative information, but these data are important to comprehend the risk profile of the patients and the results of the study. 11. The Table 3 reported the logistic regression analysis for in-hospital mortality for weekday, Saturday, Sunday/holiday and for every 7 days of the week. The two different analysis are reported in two different tables that should be numbered separately. Moreover, in these tables the results are difficult to understand. 12. Among acute type B aortic dissection, both surgically and medically treated patients were included. These two types of patient population could not be considered in the same group. The patients with acute type B aortic dissection surgically treated have anatomic and hemodynamic instability requiring urgent surgical/endovascular treatment. Instead, patients medically treated are stable and had lower risk of morbidity and mortality. 13. In order to find a correlation between admission day and in-hospital mortality, it may be more interesting to analyse in detail the single population of patients admitted in the hospital for acute type A aortic dissection and treated with emergent surgical operation. In fact, as the authors of this study also report, the acute Type A aortic dissection seems more vulnerable to “weekend effect” than the acute Type B aortic dissection medically treated. Reviewer #2: Congratulations for selecting one of the most important diseases in CTS. Methods As far as I can tell, you have used ANOVA for comparing weekdays vs weekends. Have you performed ad hoc analysis in order to determine where the significant results peak? Or pairwise testing with P-value correction. You use frequently stratified analysis term: make describe it under statistical analysis Results Table 2 lacks a statistical test between Type A and B. In both logistic regression analysis your weekdays vs sunday/holiday is containing saturday? In stratified analysis p-value and CI reporting there is discordance: if CI contains 1 results can not be significant, please do revisit your analysis From table make clear comparing groups with its p values I truly and honestly think there is something else, only week day can not explain the complexity of the AAD mortality. It could be interesting to understand time of admission (morning shift or evening shift), shortage of professionals, ect. Please do share your depersonalized data. Reviewer #3: 1. Aortic dissection type-A and type B have very different severities and they are very distinct disease entities: most A need big open surgery and most B need only endovascular or non-surgical treatments. They should not be mixed in the same article. If it does, please make sure to discuss them separately. 2. Here the grouping was defined as "admission date". Please specify in more detail. Was it referred to actual clock time or admin time? Was your date starting from 8:01 am or 0:01 am? For example, was 1 am on Monday classified as Monday or Sunday? By admin time, Monday starts from 8am Monday but manpower at 1 am Monday still belongs to Sunday. Please clarify. This confusion will cause a huge misclassification. 3. Here in the Title "weekends" always include Saturdays. But in your manuscript, Saturdays were not treated the same as Sunday or holidays. If your major grouping was Sundays/holidays vs weekdays/non-holidays, please revise your Title accordingly--it's not "weekend" effect! Revised to "holiday" effect or maybe some other better term. Please clarify. 4. What are the non-weekend holidays in Japan? Please specify. Also, was there any holidays celebrated differently in different parts in Japan--namely, was there any holiday off in some parts but non-off in other parts in Japan? In this nationwide study, this geographical holiday variations must be considered if any. 5. The outcome of "in-hospital mortality" needs more clarification. In Asian culture, some family prefer the patients to die at home What if the dying patient, alive when leaving hospital, was transferred home to die naturally. Was it "in-hospital mortality"? Also, how about the OHCA cases? If they were resuscitated and able to be diagnosed as aortic dissection, were they included or excluded in the study cohort? If these OHCA aortic dissection cases were supported by ECMO throughout the course until withdrawal, were they (dead before arrival to hospital) considered "in-hospital death"? There are some confusions requiring clarification in the manuscript. Please address them properly. Reviewer #4: the study sounds interesting but difference between groups (weekend and weekday) are missing and the final results should be adjuasted for differences. Table 1 reports difference according to gender which is not the issue under evaluation. Without a correct adjustment no conclusions can be traced ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Robert J. 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PONE-D-21-14016R1Effect of holiday admission for acute aortic dissection on in-hospital mortality in Japan : a nationwide studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kato Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 10 days. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors modified the paper based on the suggested changes. In particular: 1. The abstract was divided in the appropriate sections. 2. The information regarding the patient’s selection and the definition of population analysed in the study were included in the appropriate paragraph. 3. In the section “Measurement”, it was described exhaustively all the outcomes of the study. 4. In the Table 1 and Table 2 the pre-operative variables, including cardiovascular risk factors, were added. 5. The 8065 patients (23.9%) included in the “Unknown” section were removed from the analysis. 6. The type of aortic surgery performed and the post-operative complications of patients underwent aortic arch surgery were not added to the analysis. However, the authors explain that these types of information were not available in the database and this problem was mentioned as one of the study limitations. 7. The authors divided the patients into four groups (Stanford type A and surgical intervention (-), Stanford type A and surgical intervention (+), Stanford type B and surgical intervention (-), and Stanford type B and surgical intervention (+)) in the stratified analysis, as suggested. Thus, the readers could better understand which kind of patient’s population is more vulnerable to the “weekend effect”. Reviewer #2: Methods Not clear what stands for surgical intervention (-) or (+), make clearer statements. Results In all tables in caption or footnote the specific test has been used for comparison. In Figure 2 try to use different types of plot, for example boxplot! And provide an ad hoc test for better weekday separation and significance. Reviewer #3: The revision addressed the concerns and issues I uncovered in my previous reviews. The issues of time definition and potential selection bias were addressed or acknowledged. Reviewer #4: I have no more comment. The authors adequately addressed all the comments. The manuscript is now improved ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Marianna Berardi Reviewer #2: Yes: Rafik Margaryan MD, PhD Reviewer #3: Yes: Robert Jeenchen Chen, MD, MPH Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-14016R2 Effect of holiday admission for acute aortic dissection on in-hospital mortality in Japan: a nationwide study Dear Dr. Kato: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Alessandro Leone Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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