Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 17, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-23313 Do exhausted primary school students cheat more? A randomized field experiment PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Keller, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below the reviewer's comments, as well as those of mine. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. Additional Editor Comments: I have now collected one review from one expert on the field, whom I thank for their detailed and thoughtful feedback. I was unable to find a second reviewer. However the review I could collect is very detailed and I am myself familiar with the topic of this manuscript. Therefore, I feel confident in making a decision with only one review. The reviewer thinks that the paper has potential, but suggests a major revision. I agree with the reviewer, therefore I would like to invite you to revise your work for Plos One. Apart from the reviewer's comments, I would like to add two additional comments. I have noticed that you do not review the literature on time pressure and cheating, which I think is very relevant (Gunia et al. 2012; Shalvi et al. 2012; Capraro, 2017; Lohse, Simon & Konrad, 2018; Capraro, Schulz & Rand, 2019). Moreover, there is one review article (Capraro, 2019) and one meta-analysis (Kobis et al. 2020) on the role of System 1/System 2 on cheating and other social behaviours, which I think are relevant too. I am looking forward for the revision. Capraro, V. (2017). Does the truth come naturally? Time pressure increases honesty in one-shot deception games. Economics Letters, 158, 54-57. Capraro, V. (2019). The dual-process approach to human sociality: A review. Available at SSRN 3409146. Capraro, V., Schulz, J., & Rand, D. G. (2019). Time pressure and honesty in a deception game. Journal of Behavioral and Experimental Economics, 79, 93-99. Gunia, B. C., Wang, L., Huang, L. I., Wang, J., & Murnighan, J. K. (2012). Contemplation and conversation: Subtle influences on moral decision making. Academy of Management Journal, 55(1), 13-33. Köbis, N. C., Verschuere, B., Bereby-Meyer, Y., Rand, D., & Shalvi, S. (2019). Intuitive honesty versus dishonesty: Meta-analytic evidence. Perspectives on Psychological Science, 14(5), 778-796. Lohse, T., Simon, S. A., & Konrad, K. A. (2018). Deception under time pressure: Conscious decision or a problem of awareness?. Journal of Economic Behavior & Organization, 146, 31-42. Shalvi, S., Eldar, O., & Bereby-Meyer, Y. (2012). Honesty requires time (and lack of justifications). Psychological science, 23(10), 1264-1270. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper studies the effects of ego depletion on cheating using an online experiment involving Hungarian students aged 9-16. Self-control is depleted using a cognitively demanding task; cheating is measured on a variant of the dice-roll task. The authors find that there is an ego depletion effect, as those who depleted self-control are more likely to cheat. There is no consensus in the literature on the ego depletion effect. The authors contribute to the literature in three main directions: 1) they design a task that goes beyond the common sequential task paradigm; 2) they focus on a cheating outcome; 3) they exploit a large-scale experiment involving more than 1,000 students. I generally like the research question and the experimental setting. The empirical analysis is very simple but neat. I report below some comments, in no particular order, that I hope can help to improve further versions of the paper. - I learn from Table A4 that the age range of the subjects is 9-16. Since the text repeatedly refers to "primary school students", I expected the subjects to be younger. I think some comments should be made on the Hungarian education system that, as far as I understand, is quite peculiar. Moreover, I believe that information on the age range is more relevant than the school level. For this reason, I would like the text to refer to the age range from time to time. I realized what the age range is only looking at Table A4. - Three different definitions of cheating are considered. The third one (cheating toward less valuable objects), however, is irrational and probably measures mistakes rather than cheating. I suggest you to completely remove the third definition from the analysis. - Two sentences in the text raise concerns on the representativeness of the sample. First, the pool of potential subjects perform worse at school and has lower status than the average Hungarian ("On average, students’ test scores and socioeconomic status is lower in our sample than the Hungarian average (see Table A1 in the Appendix)." Second, those who agreed to participate to the experiment perform better at school than those who did not agree to participate ("On average, students who participated in our survey had better grades and better school behavior than their classmates (see Table A2 in the Appendix)." I would like to read comments on how the non-representativeness of the pool of potential subjects and the self-selection into the sample may affect the results. - You write "In sum, we tempted students to report a higher number than they had rolled to receive a more desirable object". However, if I understand correctly the task, students are tempted to report a lower number (the lower number, the better the prize). - Is there a reason why you chose to have the treatment group twice as large as the control group? - Below Table 1 you write that "Descriptive statistics and the coding of baseline control variables is shown in Table A2 in the Appendix". I think you refer to Table A4. However, I do not see there a definition of each control variable. In particular, could you describe the variable "Number of books at home"? I expected this variable to take natural values (0, 1, 2, ...), but I realize it also takes negative ones (see Table A4). Based on the table, it seems you standardized the variable. Why? - Table 1, columns 1-2. The coefficient is significant only at 10%. Many researchers would tell that a 10% significance is is not a significance, especially if you consider the large sample size you have. From the comparison of all the columns, it seems you cannot get significant results here because of the noise brought by those who cheated toward less valuable objects. - You write "We modified the standard dice-roll experiment to collect individual data about students’ dishonest behavior while keeping their identities hidden.", but you do not go more in detail. I hope you did not deceive subjects, as deception in experimental economics is (as a matter of fact) banned. I would like to read a comment on this in Section II. - Why did you use a linear OLS model rather than a non-linear logit/probit model, which is more appropriate when you deal with binary dependent variables? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-23313R1Do exhausted primary school students cheat more? A randomized field experimentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Keller, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The reviewer suggests one final comment before publication. Please address this comment at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to receiving the final version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors paid attention to my previous comments and did a good job in revising the paper. Please notice that on line 311 you refer to Table 1, whereas the correct reference is now Table 2. I have no further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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