Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 6, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-21995 Cross-sectional study on the prevalence of influenza and pneumococcal vaccination and its association with health conditions and risk factors among hospitalized multimorbid older patients PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Papazoglou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. This is an interesting study. Its design is appropriate and the manuscript is well organized, clear and easy to read. However, there are several comments of the reviewers to be addressed. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that responds to the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1) “Furthermore, we used clustered analyses by study sites to take into account the participants' correlation within each site”—it is unclear what exactly was done? What’s more, the relevant results was only briefly mentioned in the Discussion section. Shouldn’t include the site as a covariate in the primary models? 2) “Those who received an influenza vaccination tended to have fewer years of formal schooling”—this is an inaccurate and exaggerated statement on the results since for those with the University level education, the vaccination rate increased. Reviewer #2: Main comment: The manuscript “Cross-sectional study on the prevalence of influenza and pneumococcal vaccination and its association with health conditions and risk factors among hospitalized multimorbid older patients” has been reviewed. The topic of the study is of interest because despite the fact that influenza and pneumococcal vaccination is recommended for people aged 65 and older, the coverage is suboptimal and, therefore, knowledge about factors associated with vaccination in this population is needed. However, the authors only report the results of multivariate analyses and results of bivariate analyses should be shown to the readers. Specific comments: Page 2, line 41: “The prevalence remained low” should be changed to “The prevalence of vaccination remained low” Page 2, line 45: “95% confidence Interval [C] I…” should be changed to “95% confidence Interval [CI]…” Page 2. Line 3: “Streptococcus pneumonia” should be changed to “Streptococcus pneumoniae” Statistical methods and Results: Only Adjusted OR are shown in table 3. Authors should report unadjusted and adjusted OR. In table 2, the unadjusted PR and 95% CI should be included Page 11, line 244: “with prevalence ratios” should be changed to “with adjusted prevalence ratios”. Discussion is too long and should be shortened. In references 8, 11, 12, 16, 19, 22, 23, 24, 29, 31, 33, 34, 35, 39, 45, 55 and 57 the capital letters of all the words in the title of the article (with the exception of the first word) should be changed to small letters. Reviewer #3: The authors tried to identify determinants of inappropriate lack of vaccination in the elderly with multimorbid and taking five or more chronic medications. The topic is crucial to reduce preventable diseases in this vulnerable population. Nevertheless, the reviewer thinks that several minor concerns remain in this current manuscript as follows. Minor points The authors did not mention why they focus on patients older than 70 with multimorbid (3 or more) and taking multi-medicine (5 or more). Older adults are generally defined as 65 or older. Please, mention any reasons for focusing on the targeted population in the study. For both influenza and pneumococcal vaccine, the public subsidy might affect vaccination rates. The system of public financial support might vary across the countries. If the authors have such information, the factor needs to be considered. For both influenza and pneumococcal vaccine, education is significantly associated with vaccination behavior (Table 2). However, U-shaped prevalences are observed in both, which means prevalences are higher in low education (less than high school) and high education (university) than in the middle (high school). Please, discuss some reason for this. In multivariable analysis (Table 3), a significant association with a specialized physician or ED visit (not GP visit) was found in influenza. On the other, such association with GP visits (not specialized physician or ED visit) was observed in pneumococcal vaccination. Please, discuss this difference and its reason. Please, mention the reason for choosing log-binomial regression models. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Cross-sectional study on the prevalence of influenza and pneumococcal vaccination and its association with health conditions and risk factors among hospitalized multimorbid older patients PONE-D-21-21995R1 Dear Dr. Papazoglou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The revised version of the manuscript "Cross-sectional study on the prevalence of influenza and pneumococcal vaccination and its association with health conditions and risk factors among hospitalized multimorbid older patients" has been reviewed. The authors have adequately addressed my comments. Some minor mistakes should be addressed in the section of References: Reference 35: the capital letters of all the words in the title of the article (with exception of the first word) should be changed to small letters. Reference 39: Because the name of the institution is written in French “belgium” should be changed to “Belgique”. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-21995R1 Cross-sectional study on the prevalence of influenza and pneumococcal vaccination and its association with health conditions and risk factors among hospitalized multimorbid older patients Dear Dr. Papazoglou: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Ray Borrow Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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