Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-12316 Effects of Velocity Based Training vs. Traditional 1RM Percentage-based Training on Improving Strength, Jump, Linear and Change of Direction Speed Performance: A Systematic Review with Meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I was waiting for a second reviewer who finally was not able to send the review report. Therefore, following your request, I am sending you the revisions of one reviewer while clarifying to you that another reviewer will be invited in the second review of revisions. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: First of all, thank you for the opportunity to review this well-written meta-analysis. The methods are clearly presented and the results are also interpreted and discussed accordingly. Nevertheless, I have the following specific comments: Site and Line numbers would simplify the review process considerably. Abstract: “However, VBT can achieve a similar training effect with lower training volume and stress.” → Even though I agree with this statement, this is not a result of this meta analysis Keywords: I would recommend using keywords that are not already used in the abstract. This may increase the reach of the paper. Introduction: “VBT was a resistance training intervention that uses velocity feedback to prescribe and/or manipulate training load based on the perfect inversely linear relationship between load and repetition velocity, and nice correlation between velocity loss and maximum repetitions, as well as the %maximum repetitions and level of fatigue in sets,two new variables were adopted for prescribingthe training load in VBT, one is the initial fastest repetition velocity in sets to set the load instead of%1RM, the other is the velocity loss threshold (VL) to terminate the set instead of the traditional fixed repetitions sets.” → This sentence is way to long. Please rewrite this. “More recently, some scattered researches have been carried out on comparing the training effects of VBT vs. PBT.” → A reference is needed for this sentence. “One possible explanation is that the effects of the resistance training intervention on physical performance could be affected by several participants’ characteristics such as the initial training status or chorological age, while the other is the differences in resistance training variables such as the exercises, duration, periods, intensity and volume. Specifically, some studies adopted the fixed repetitions schemes to terminate the set in VBT group, whereas others used fixed velocity loss value either separately or in combination with the former.” → I would expect such explanations in the discussion section. Methods: The representation of the search strategy is somewhat confusing. why, for example, was "endurance" searched for? A tabular representation might be easier to read and understand. “Quality of evidence” Is this not (at least partially) redundant to the Pedro score? “Statistical analysis” → I would mention CHI^2 and I^2 only after the Ramdom effects model has been described. The formula for SMD is wrong (or is displayed incorrectly). Results: were the reference lists of the resulting 6 studies checked for potential additional studies? please avoid redundant information between text and tables/figures. Also there are some irrelevant informations like (“The MD was calculated.”) “LVP with 60%1RM was chosen because 1m/s (60%1RM) was usually used to evaluate the performance in resistance training. “ → This sentence needs a reference. Discussion: Recheck spelling & grammar Table 3 is not necessary. In comparison to table 2, no additional information is provided here. The symmetry of the funnel plot could be additionally checked by egger's p Value. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-12316R1 Effects of Velocity Based Training vs. Traditional 1RM Percentage-based Training on Improving Strength, Jump, Linear and Change of Direction Speed Performance: A Systematic Review with Meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Daniel Boullosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: This is a valuable study on an interesting topic in the sports sciences field. However, there are some issues that I feel need to be addressed to bring the study up to publishable standards. Mainly, writing should be reviewed by a professional proofreader or a native-speaker, specially the Discussion section. Moreover, some changes are required throughout the this section in order to provide a deeper explanation of your findings. Number lines would help review process. Please see my specific comments below: Abstract: I would change “linear speed” to “linear sprint”. Linear speed is already performance. It would be like jump height. Therefore, it would be better to use: linear sprint throughout the manuscript. Abstract. Methods. SD has not been previously defined Abstract. Results. Why sometimes you show MD and others SMD? I would use only SMD. Please see my specific comments below. Introduction Third paragraph. These research to date… should read: these researches… Therefore, A systematic review with… should read: Therefore, a systematic… Methods Search strategy. syntax was shown in supplemental table 1… should read: syntax are shown… Risk of bias assessment within individual studies Two authors (The second… should read: the second Brughelli et al [23]…should read: al. Statistical analysis Since MD can be highly influenced by sample characteristics. Would not it be better using always SMD? SMD can amend some of the problems shown by MD, since it includes SD in the calculations. Both algorithms of MD and SMD in speed and COD outcomes was adjusted…should read: were Results Search results At last, 6 studies included in the qualitative…should read: were included Risk of bias assessment All of studies got high scores… should read: All studies or all the studies Studies’ Characteristics characteristics of 6 studies included in qualitative analysis was…should read: were Among which, Only 1 study…should read: only Quantitative analysis load velocity with 40%1RM. Shouldn’t be 60% 1RM? Discussion IMHO, I miss you highlight the methodological differences between both approaches throughout the Discussion, especially in the Practical Applications section. Thus, you may help readers to better choose the proper method. Strength performance improvement in musclular strength…should read: muscular similarities of biomechenics to a various…should read: biomechanics PBT ( ES = 1.25) With the…should read: with Please rewrite this sentence: This likely accounted for subtle decreases in load adjusted in accordence with targeted velocity velocity testing device. although the…should read: device, although …. and placebo effect from the velocity testing device. although the research conducted by Chen et al. and Held et. al. did not provide the velocity data of training repetitions [20, 29], it could be inferred that participants might perform even higher repetition velocity due to enhancing motivation and competitiveness from feedback of velocity[12]. Please split or rewrite this sentence Furthermore, Interstingly,…should read: interestingly and 48 hours in VBT was superior…should read: were VBT should produced a better…should read: would produce while it was likely for PBT to…should read: it is likely With respect to the effects in faovr of VBT. This sentence should go on. more repetition…should read: more repetitions at maiximum intended velocity…should read: maximum threshold type Ⅱ fiber which have a greater relative hypertrophy than type Ⅱ fiber…should be: type II and type I, respectively for above metioned factors…should read: mentioned device[44]. this finding…should read: This Considering the methodology involved the use of post minus pre intervention value in our meta-analysis, it could. Please use comma when necessary 4.2 Jump performance and muslce fiber type composition …should read: muscle development [45] and muscle-tendo …should read: muscle-tendon Furthermore, Banyard et al. reported that the mean deviation of sessional repetition velocity was greater for the PBT (-13.6 ± 6.8%) contrasted to VBT (-0.2 ± 5.2%) [22]. You should explain why these authors reported this and how can influence jump height adaptations. is also evdence: evidence intervetion exercise: intervention resistance training [47], The higher movement… should read: the Linear Speed and CODs performance Evidence showed that the squat strength and sprint performance existed very large significant correlation ( r= -0.77; p = 0.001) [48]. This sentence is hard to follow above metioned: mentioned may also impaire resistance: impair in both group… should read: in both groups [18]. This negetive effects may: negative This negligible results: these still needed to distingush the difference: distinguish CODs (ES = 0.67-0.79) favorited VBT compared to PBT [22]: favored for this results: these may be the same as above metioned such: mentioned recovery. this implies that pactitioners are… shoud read: This implies that practitioners… 4.4 Limitations all results was graded: were Conclusion less excaustive nature: exhaustive TABLES Table 2. Song Chen 1995. I cannot access to this reference. But did they use as a reference load? the maximal power load? or all of them trained at the same velocity? It is strange that they compared PBT and VBT in 1997 when the first publications about using VBT instead of PBT are from 2010. I guess they compared power-based training, but this is not the same idea, since the use power, not velocity, for monitoring and programing the training load. Some of the abbreviations described in the footnote are not used in the table. Table 3. I miss some of the included studies here FIGURES Figure 3A. I guess this should be Song;, C. and M. qiwei, Effects of fixed velocity training methods on load velocity profile. Journal of Beijing University of Physical Education, 1995. 18(3): p. 81-88. Figure 3D. how have you calculated the weight in Fig. 3D? It is weird that a study with 10 subjects means the 1.9% and other with 12 the 72.4% and the third one with 15 subjects and only the 25.7% of the total weight. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-12316R2 Effects of Velocity Based Training vs. Traditional 1RM Percentage-based Training on Improving Strength, Jump, Linear Sprint and Change of Direction Speed Performance: A Systematic Review with Meta-analysis Dear Dr. Li: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Daniel Boullosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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