Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 10, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28477 Contribution of “Complete Response to Treatment” to Survival in Patients with Unresectable Metastatic Colorectal Cancer; Retrospective Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bulut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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5. During your revisions, please confirm whether the wording in the short title is correct and update it in the manuscript file and online submission information if needed. Specifically, the current short title on the submission form includes "Running title:", which is redundant. Additionally, the short title does not provide much information about the content of the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: There are multiple grammatical and typographical errors throughout the manuscript that make it difficult to easily read. These should be reviewed prior to resubmission to improve readability of manuscript. The authors performed a retrospective review of patients diagnosed with unresectable Stage IV colorectal cancer at a single institution to determine how different treatment strategies affected patient outcomes (overall survival, progression free survival), based on whether patients did or did not attain complete response (CR) to treatment. The authors report that patients who underwent primary surgery had a higher rate of obtaining CR. Patients with liver metastasis and bone metastasis were unlikely to obtain CR. Patients with CR had longer median survival times and progression free survival. Additionally, patients who underwent first line treatment with fluoropyrimidine or irinotecan also increased overall survival, while number of metastatic regions reduced overall survival. While I believe this study and results are interesting and important, the data is presented in somewhat confusing fashion and the conclusions that are drawn are not always clearly presented. Authors should include in the abstract the type of study this was (a retrospective chart review). There are multiple places in the manuscript were it is stated p=0.0000. While this may be correct from a rounding standpoint, from a statistical standpoint, I believe it would be more correct to state p<0.001. What exactly do the authors mean by "primary surgery"? In the Methods section, they state that any patients who underwent metastectomy during treatment were excluded. Does "primary surgery" indicate surgery as the FIRST step in their treatment? Or rather that the patient underwent surgery of their primary tumor? What surgeries did these patients undergo (resection, debulking, diversion) etc, and what were the indications for these operations? Colon and rectal cancers are grouped together in this analysis, but I do not see any mention of radiation treatment for patients with rectal cancer. Was this not included in their neoadjuvant treatment? It be interesting to see a subgroup analysis of colon vs rectal cancer to ID any difference between the two groups. In discussing the significant results from Table 2 - the way in which the data are presented is very confusing and the authors extrapolate new percentages within the text (albiet correct percentages based on number of patients with liver/bones mets or those who did not survive) to discuss the significant findings, but these are different than the percentages in Table 2. Would reword this to make the understanding more clear. In discussing results from Table 6 - the authors interpretation of hazard ratios inconsistently increase or decrease OS (i.e. HR 1.7 for primary surgery increases OS, but HR of 1.375 for met regions DECREASES OS, same for liver vs bone mets). If this is based on how the data was analyzed, it should be described in such a fashion that this is understandable, otherwise, it appears that the results have been interpreted incorrectly. In discussing results from Table 7 - the authors should discuss the different hazard ratios and how they each affect overall survival. The way that it is written groups all the variables together without describing their affect (i.e. surgery and chemo increase OS, while bone mets decreases overall survival). In the discussion section, these results are again grouped together without delineating positive or negative association with the multiple variable discussed. The discussion session includes discussion of mCRC in elderly patients, but it is unclear to me exactly how this relates to the data presented in this study? What additional therapeutic approaches to metastatic disease are the authors referencing in the last paragraph of the Discussion section? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-28477R1 Contribution of “Complete Response to Treatment” to Survival in Patients with Unresectable Metastatic Colorectal Cancer; A Retrospective Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bulut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In agreement with the reviewer the authors did improve the manuscript, however, its presentation and readability remain weak points. Unless the presentation is improved, the manuscript may not be accepted in the present form. I would like to encourage authors to answer all comments and put an effort in improving the language. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ludmila Vodickova, M.D., PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Informed consent was obtained from all 222 patients in the study? This is not typical of a retrospective chart review. There are still multiple grammatical and typographical errors throughout the paper that make it somewhat difficult to read, for example (this does not include all the errors in the article, just a sampling): Abstract Background - second sentence is an incomplete sentence Results - in the sentence discussing primary surgery - what two groups are being compared? is completion response the same as complete response? Confusing to change the verbiage Conclusion - mCRC is used without being previously defined in Abstract Materials and Methods "if the primary tumor had been operated" is not correct grammar Abbreviations are used inconsistently throughout the article. If you are using CT to represent chemotherapy, it should be that way through the entire article Overall, the introductions, methods, and results are much improved (and interesting) from the prior version. The Discussion, however, remains disorganized and confusing. The authors include information about novel anti-VEGF, anti-EGFR targeted agents, but these were not included in the study presented and it is confusing how they then tie this to their findings of longer survival times in patients who attained CR. Yes, these new agents are important to include, but I do not understand how this is related to your data? The paragraph starting with " A total of 20,023 patients" seems completely out of order within the discussion and is not clear what first 24 clinical trials are being referenced? Then the discussion switches back to talking about chemotherapy again. I suggest that the authors reorganize the discussion section and ensure that they focus on their findings. Conclusion What results can physicians use when counseling patients with CR? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-28477R2 Contribution of “Complete Response to Treatment” to Survival in Patients with Unresectable Metastatic Colorectal Cancer; A Retrospective Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bulut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. General comments:The authors did a big job in improving the language, the text is now better readible and understandable. Anyway there are still some uncertainties, what the sentence means.Authors referred about metastatic colorectal cancer of two types, liver and bone metastasis. Liver metastasis is the most frequent, opposit is bone metastasis, it is one of rare metastatic site. Is some reason, why authors selected those two types? The authors enrolled 222 patients and evaluated complete response (Yes-No) in 212persons. The percentage for CR group is fitting with 212 persons (e.g. section Results first para, section Discussion, first para). Maybe I would recomend authors to simplify the situation and presented results only from those, who were evaluated from CR point. This is a main aim of the study. In this case Table 1 could be removed. The authors omitted to mention the end of follow up period, the exact date (month/year). Why the authors focused on two distinct group of patients? First, incidentally diagnosed metastatic CRC and second on those with developed metastasis after primary tumor resection? The second group might be associated with chemoresistance or treatment response.128 patients had primary surgery, only 47 had adjuvant chemotherapy, please, add some comment.18 patients had no LVI and 21 patients had no PNI - does it mean that they have only liver or bone metastasis? The study belongs to rather small study, it should be mentioned in the limitation of the study. Particular commentsAbstract:last sentence: ......and the combination therapy regimens... Material and Methodsto add the date of termination of follow up ResultsAs mentioned above, Table 1 could be removed, the text and next table contain all information.Table 3 is also perfectly described in the text and can be omitted. Also because the numbers for Exp(B) in case of bone metastasis are nonsense and numbers in case of fluoropyrimidine are missing.In the text is abbreviation HR, in first appearance maybe should be explained (hazard ratio). Table 6 - there are some empty boxes(cells) in the table, but the significance is calculated. It is confusing. Especially in the case, when is significant result (First line CT(Fluoropyrimidine)). The abbreviation "LAP" is not explain DiscussionFirst paragraph, last sentence....first line CT (combination compare with fluoropyrimidine alone)...Second paragraph: The sentence "Significantly, OS and PFS outliers were lower with increasing age [13]." is not understandable. Does it mean: "OS and PFS number of outliers was significantly lower with increasing age" ?Fourth para, fourth sentence: my suggestion how to reformulate:In the study of D´Angelica et al. on 49 colorectal cancer patients with unresectable hepatic metastasis was reported that only.....Last paraInterestingly, the CR was an independent predictor of survival for about 40months in OS and for about 15 months in PFS. Fig. 1Should be probably "First-line CT (combination with fluoropytimidine)" instead of "First-line CT (combination according to fluoropyrimidine)" Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ludmila Vodickova, M.D., PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I received this manuscript after the first revision. Even though the article has been revised, my feelings are confused. The article focused on determining the complete response in the metastatic CRC. However, everything that the authors studied in their study has long been known, and the conclusions of the study do not contribute much to the already acquired knowledge about the survival of metastatic CRC patients. The authors stated that CR was less common in the presence of liver metastasis and bone metastasis. My question is: If authors focused on mCRC and no lung or other distant metastasis were observed, what is it outcome of this observation? It is not clear whether authors focused on sporadic CRC? What was the end of the study, I mean when the follow up terminated? Why the authors focused on two distinct group of patients? First, incidentally diagnosed metastatic CRC and second on those with developed metastasis after primary tumor resection? The second group might be associated with chemoresistance or treatment response. Is it correct the metastasis interval? 5.93±12.81 (Mean ±SD) The authors stated that there were 20 survivors and median patients follow up was in range 0.3 to almost 132 months. With no defined end of the study, this has no reason to show up. If I understand correctly, 9% of those patients with no primary surgery reached CR while 42% with no primary surgery did not reach CR. This outcome is clear from Table 2 and further again elaborated in Table 3, 6 and 7. Why it can not be only supplemented by additional text only? Besides, 128 patients had primary surgery however only 47 had adjuvant therapy. Why? This should be mentioned. What was the median time to develop metastasis in these patients? Further, 18 patients had no LVI and 21 no PNI, are there really all patients in the study in stage IV? The main limitation is also relatively small population size that might results many of outcomes as false positives. This should be commented. Discussion is wordy and not focused on obtained results. In addition, the article is written in very poor English and the several sentences do not make sense. The article contains unnecessarily many tables and the following text, which comment on everything that can be found in the table and usually comments on insignificant results. Tables 3, 4 and 5 can be omitted and only stated by additional text as it is already. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-28477R3 Contribution of “Complete Response to Treatment” to Survival in Patients with Unresectable Metastatic Colorectal Cancer; A Retrospective Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bulut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors did great job in improving the paper, but there are still some very small things to consider and repair: ABSTRACT: In addition, to is evaluate progression-free survival…– should be: In addition, to evaluate progression-free survival… … In subgroup patients with who underwent primary surgery; the number….should be: In subgroup patients who underwent primary surgery, the number… RESULTS: The sentence: Because only devo metastatic patients were not evaluated; should be deleted Twenty (9.0%) patients were still alive, 222 (91.0%) patients had died .- it is some mistake or typing error, this does not correspond with total number of enrolled patients (222=100%). PFS analysis, based on whether a CR was attained is shown in Table 5 should be . PFS analysis, based on whether a CR was attained is shown in Table 3 Table 4: there are missing values for Exp(B) and 95%CI in the case of: Primary region (Rectum). Histology (Adeno), Differentiation (Good) – all of them are not significant values, it is not so critical, but there are missing also in the case of First-line CT (Fluoropyrimidine), which are significant P=0.007. Row with T0 has no sense. First-line CT (Combination according to Fluoropyrimidine) _ I guess should be: (Combination with Fluoropyrimidine) Table 5 First-line CT (Combination according to Fluoropyrimidine) _ I think it should be: (Combination with Fluoropyrimidine). DISCUSSION: The sentence: However, the vast majority (80-90%) present with unresectable diseases should be: However, the vast majority (80-90%) presents unresectable diseases The sentence: …..whereas it is approximately 2 years in those treated with a combination of irinotecan or oxaliplatin to fluoropyrimidine-based CT. Should be:… whereas it is approximately 2 years in those treated with a combination of irinotecan or oxaliplatin with fluoropyrimidine-based CT. FIGURE 3: First-line CT (Combination according to Fluoropyrimidine) _ should be: Combination with Fluoropyrimidine Decreases in Number of metastatik lesion should be: Decreases in Number of metastatic lesions Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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