Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-17643Molecular chlamydia and gonorrhoea point of care tests implemented into routine practice: systematic review and value proposition developmentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fuller, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: he article is a systematic review of published literature on the implementation of point-of-care tests (POCTs) for Chlamydia trachomatis (CT) and Neisseria gonorrhoeae (NG) infections into clinical settings. The paper is well-written and helps to consolidate research findings across many different clinical settings (STI clinics, general practice, and community-based outreach) and in a variety of global health contexts (high-income and low- and middle-income settings). The systematic review identified 28 relevant articles on implementation of CT/NG POCTs, all of which were using the Gene Xpert platform. The device did not meet all criteria set forth by target product profiles or REASSURED, but it met many on those two lists. The findings show how the implementation of CT/NG POCTs depend on the local context and the different stakeholders in various settings. Reporting on implementation outcomes varies across studies, which makes it difficult to compare, but the authors provide detailed data on the various outcomes measured and how they might impact different settings. The discussion is appropriate to the study and data presented. Overall, a well-done article on a very interesting topic. There are a few suggestions that would improve the manuscript. 1. The authors do a good job of describing their methods for screening manuscripts and data extraction. However, it is not clear how they conducted their search. They could provide their search terms and methodology, which would make it more clear to the readers. 2. There were 278 articles identified and after screening, 252 were excluded. The authors provide the inclusion and exclusion criteria in Table 1, but it would also be helpful to understand how many articles were excluded for those reasons. Perhaps they could provide percentage for each of the categories listed in Table 1. The authors could provide this information in the Fig 1 flow diagram exclusion box. This would help the reader understand the exclusion process. 3. While the discussion is appropriate, it would be strengthened by providing some additional context to readers about how the results and the synthesis of evidence that the authors completed in Table 4 could be used by different decision makers. For example, in paragraph 5 of the discussion (lines 325-328), the authors discuss their key finding - how the adoption and implementation of tests depend on the setting and stakeholder roles, which are critical to identify before implementation begins. Perhaps the authors could give some examples or scenarios to illustrate this point and to make the use a bit more clear. Similarly, in paragraph 2 of the discussion (lines 296-302), the authors also make an effort to highlight their development of value propositions to help decision-making; this section might also benefit from being more explicit in how they envision decision makers using their value propositions. Perhaps these two paragraphs could be combined to give additional context and to make these important findings more clear. 4. In lines 360-362, the authors encourage researchers implementing POCTs for CT/NG to report their results. Do they authors have any specific guidance or recommendations on conducting those future research studies (eg - what to measure, how to measure, outcomes to report, etc). That information would be very helpful considering one limitation the authors noted was the heterogeneity of measured outcomes between studies, which made it difficult to compare. 5. Recommend avoiding the use of RHS as an acronym, as it is not a common acronym and is only used three times. 6. In Table 3: Could consider labeling Column “Outcomes assessed” instead of “Impacts Assessed” 7. Table 4: In Impact on Outcomes row, it seems that “Potential to increase appropriate antibiotic treatment for infections” and “Potential for reduced time to results and treatment to reduce unnecessary antibiotic” would also be relevant for sexual health services and outreach services columns. But they are not listed in those columns. 8. Small grammatical issues: - Line 284 typo “NT” instead of “NG” - In abstract, would say “One author” instead of EC, as it was not immediately clear by reading the abstract that this was one of the authors. - Line 70 – recommend not starting sentence with a digit Reviewer #2: 1. This manuscript looks more like a narrative review to describe some interesting points from the literatures on POCTs for CT and NG. 2. The paper is based on published studies and conference abstracts, but the strategy used to search the literatures are not quite clear for me although it is known two databases were used. 3. The authors mentioned that search strategy was formed to answer several proposed research questions. What strategy was used and was different question based on different search strategy? 4. It is not quite clear if these included studies are those studies on POCT evaluation or those on POCT implementation or both? The purposes of these two types of studies are different. For example, the results shown in Table 2 (The Cepheid CT/NG GeneXpert fulfils some, but not all, TPP and REASSURED criteria) seem to address the findings from evaluation studies while Table 3 is on implementation. There have been a few published systematic reviews and meta-analyses on evaluation findings of molecular POCTs. 5. As the authors mentioned, the (RE)ASSURED and TPP criteria are proposed to guide the R&D of POCT-based diagnostics. The question of “Do molecular CT/NG POCTs implemented in routine practice fulfil the (RE)ASSURED and TPP criteria?” seems more relevant to POCT characteristic or performance issue rather than implementation one. For example, the element E (equipment-free) in (RE)ASSURED, it is not possible that POCT does require an equipment and in routine practice the equipment is actually not required. 6. For example, “Implementation of the Cepheid CT/NG GeneXpert demonstrated that faster (and appropriate) treatment was achieved in all settings” – this is actually relevant to one characteristic (getting results in 90 mins) of Cepheid CT/NG GeneXpert. “Faster treatment was achieved” does only mean the local adherence to the POCT process to initiate the treatment in 90 mins. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Molecular chlamydia and gonorrhoea point of care tests implemented into routine practice: systematic review and value proposition development PONE-D-21-17643R1 Dear Dr. Fuller, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Catherine E Oldenburg Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-17643R1 Molecular chlamydia and gonorrhoea point of care tests implemented into routine practice: systematic review and value proposition development Dear Dr. Fuller: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Catherine E Oldenburg Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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