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Original SubmissionJuly 8, 2021
Decision Letter - Jun Yang, Editor

PONE-D-21-22241

Land reclamation pattern and environmental regulation guidelines for port clusters in the Bohai Sea, China

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: This paper tries to identify and solve in important question. The methodology is sound and the data seems valid. However, the paper provides too many pieces of information without effectively provide a reasonable link among them and explain how that information could be used in answering the research question and for better land reclamation and environmental regulation for the future of the study region. I have some major concerns listed below:

Information on funding and competing Interests should be placed at the end of the paper before reference list.

Introduction: very poor with limited literature about port cluster, coastal land reclamation, evolution stages, pattern optimization etc.

Study area and research method: very weak! How come we get to Table 1? And what is the justification of adopting equation 1-2? Source?

Results:still simply copy paste from commissioned works.

Discussion: some interesting insights but still lack of coherency with the introduction/literature.

The current section is not directly related to the analysis of this article.

Conclusion and policy implications: it mostly looks like a summary of the work done and the results obtained. Also, there should be some content in the conclusion regarding the limitations of the current research and future work possibilities.

There are more language and grammar issues than mentioned above. I highly recommend using a professional editor to correct them before re-submission.

Some literature to consult:

Demand prediction and regulation zoning of urban-industrial land: Evidence from Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei Urban Agglomeration, China. Environ Monit Assess 191, 412 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10661-019-7547-4

Understanding land surface temperature impact factors based on local climate zones, Sustainable Cities and Society (2021), doi: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.scs.2021.102818

Coupling Coordination Relationships between Urban-industrial Land Use Efficiency and Accessibility of Highway Networks: Evidence from Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei Urban Agglomeration, China. Sustainability. 2019; 11(5):1446.

Reviewer #2: After a very careful reading of the work entitled "Land reclamation pattern and environmental regulation guidelines for port clusters in the Bohai Sea, China", I have found a very well-done work, well presented and organized, clear in concepts and methodology. The topic and context attract attention for many readers from various disciplines. The study is worth to be published in PLOS ONE after conducting the revisions.

1. Please further elaborate the innovation of the paper.

2. The language of this manuscript needs to be revised by native English speaking experts.

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Revision 1

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We are thankful that the EIC and the reviewers have requested a number of additions and clarification, particularly regarding improvements to the presentation of the work and discussion of related literature. We have revised the manuscript carefully and addressed the comments raised by the reviewers. Meanwhile, we also provided a suitable rebuttal to each reviewer comment not addressed.

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Response: We are thankful to the editor comments. The revised manuscript focuses the reclamation area of the 13 ports during 2002–2018, changes of coastline length, and reclamation stages. The findings have vital implications for scientifically regulating the spatial pattern and exploring the utility of port reclamation, and promoting regional sustainable development of coastal zones in dense port distribution. The revised manuscript has no laboratory analysis process and therefore, there is no laboratory protocols. Moreover, we have read the Submission Guidelines carefully in https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Thank you very much.

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(1) Question: Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thank the reviewer’s high evaluation on the manuscript. We appreciate the reviewers' assessment to our manuscript. The reviewer thought that the manuscript is technically sound and the data support the conclusion.

Coastal land reclamation (CLR) has become a frequent approach to alleviate land shortages with the reclamation of port areas being the most prominent. The Bohai Sea is the most concentrated area of port reclamation worldwide. The manuscript applied the remote sensing images and field investigation to address the changes in different type coastlines and the CLR process of these ports in the reclaimed areas of the Bohai Sea. The port land reclamation experienced periods of acceleration, peak, deceleration, and stagnation since 2002, and the planned schedule of reclamation should be constrained. The findings have vital implications for scientifically regulating the spatial pattern and exploring the utility of port reclamation, and promoting regional sustainable development of coastal zones in dense port distribution. We believe that the revised manuscript has broad readers all over the world. The conclusion has been drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

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(2) Question: Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. The manuscript has applied statistical analysis appropriately. We think that the current statements of the revised manuscript will meet the standard that the journal demands and the readers have no difficulties in understanding the content of the manuscript. We express our gratitude's to the reviewer for the helpful comments.

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. We have known that the PLoS ONE Data policy requires the authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction. The data presented in the manuscript has been provided as part of the manuscript. We express our gratitude's to the reviewer for the helpful comments.

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. The manuscript is presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English. More important, the writing expression has been revised by a Native English Speaker carefully from Elsevier. There is no any typographical or grammatically errors. Therefore, we believe the language in submitted article is clear, correct, and unambiguous. Please refer to the revised manuscript. Thank you.

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Reviewer #1:

(1) Question: This paper tries to identify and solve in important question. The methodology is sound and the data seems valid. However, the paper provides too many pieces of information without effectively provide a reasonable link among them and explain how that information could be used in answering the research question and for better land reclamation and environmental regulation for the future of the study region. I have some major concerns listed below:

Information on funding and competing Interests should be placed at the end of the paper before reference list.

Response: Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. The reviewers think that the coastal port reclamation is an important question and the author tries to solve the crucial problem. Port reclamation is the main types of coastal reclamation. However, the spatial extent, percentages, and processes of these newly reclaimed ports are largely unknown. The reviewer think that the methodology is sound and the data seems valid. Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript.

Moreover, we should not blame the port reclamation for several reasons. First, not all the reclaimed area is used as port construction and only 26.3% of reclaimed areas were applied for port construction in Tianjin and Tangshan ports.

Regarding with the link among the information, we have revised the manuscript and provided the research question for better land reclamation and environmental regulation for the future of the study region.

(2) Question: Introduction: very poor with limited literature about port cluster, coastal land reclamation, evolution stages, pattern optimization etc.

Response: Thank the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. We have revised the manuscript in the Introduction and added some literature about port cluster, coastal land reclamation, evolution stages, pattern optimization. Please refer to the revised manuscript. Thank you again.

(3) Question: Study area and research method: very weak! How come we get to Table 1? And what is the justification of adopting equation 1-2? Source?

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. The section study area and research method have been improved based on the reviewer’s comments. In the current version, some detailed information about study area have been added and the source of equation 1-2 have also been provided. Please refer to the revised manuscript.

(4) Question: Results: still simply copy paste from commissioned works.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. The Results section has been modified according to the reviewer’s comments.

(5) Question: Discussion: some interesting insights but still lack of coherency with the introduction/literature. The current section is not directly related to the analysis of this article.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. The reviewer thinks that the discussion has some interesting insight. As for the coherency with the introduction/literature, we have modified the discussion section and related information has been added in the revised manuscript.

(6) Question: Conclusion and policy implications: it mostly looks like a summary of the work done and the results obtained. Also, there should be some content in the conclusion regarding the limitations of the current research and future work possibilities.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. In the Conclusion and Discussion, we have added many sentences to illustrate the limitation of the current research and future work. We believe the revised conclusion should meet the requirements of the reviewers. Please refer to it.

(7) Question: There are more language and grammar issues than mentioned above. I highly recommend using a professional editor to correct them before re-submission.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. More important, the writing expression has been revised by a Native English Speaker carefully from Elsevier. There is no any typographical or grammatically errors. Therefore, we believe the language in submitted article is clear, correct, and unambiguous. Please refer to the revised manuscript.

(8) Question: Some literature to consult:

Demand prediction and regulation zoning of urban-industrial land: Evidence from Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei Urban Agglomeration, China. Environ Monit Assess 191, 412 (2019). https://doi.org/10.1007/s10661-019-7547-4

Understanding land surface temperature impact factors based on local climate zones, Sustainable Cities and Society (2021), doi: https://doi.org/10.1016/j.scs.2021.102818

Coupling Coordination Relationships between Urban-industrial Land Use Efficiency and Accessibility of Highway Networks: Evidence from Beijing-Tianjin-Hebei Urban Agglomeration, China. Sustainability. 2019; 11(5):1446.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’ comments. The three published articles have been added in the reference list. Please refer to it.

Reviewer #2:

(1) Question: After a very careful reading of the work entitled "Land reclamation pattern and environmental regulation guidelines for port clusters in the Bohai Sea, China", I have found a very well-done work, well presented and organized, clear in concepts and methodology. The topic and context attract attention for many readers from various disciplines. The study is worth to be published in PLOS ONE after conducting the revisions.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s To Be Published evaluation on the manuscript. The reviewer thinks that it is a well-done work, well presented and organized, clear in concepts and methodology. Meanwhile, the review believe the topic and context attract attention for many readers from various disciples. The manuscript takes the port reclamation in the Bohai Sea as an example to demonstrate the coastline change, percentage of port reclamation in all the reclaimed area. The manuscript is not to encourage the reclamation in coastal area, but to identify the truth of port reclamation. It has important implication for decision-makers to adopt reasonable reclamation policy in future. We express our gratitude to the kind reviewer for his constructive comments. Meanwhile, the reviewer has provided some comments to improve the quality of this manuscript.

(2) Question: Please further elaborate the innovation of the paper.

The language of this manuscript needs to be revised by native English speaking experts.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. The innovation of the paper has been proposed in the Conclusion and Abstract section. Moreover, the manuscript has been polished by a native English speaking expert. We believe the manuscript has been improved much in language.

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Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

(1) Question: The layout of the paper is very bad, especially the tables and headings.

Response: We are thankful to the Editors comments. The editor thinks the layout of the manuscript is bad and we have made improvements in tables and headings. Please refer to the revised manuscript.

(2) Question: I suggest the results should be better discussed and justified, such as whether they are consistent with previous studies or analyzing the reasons for the empirical results. At present, there are many contents in the discussion section that are not closely related to this paper.

Response: We are thankful to the editor’s comment. The editor thinks the discussion section is not consistent with the results and we have modified the discussion based on the editor’s comments. Please refer to the revised manuscript.

Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

Response: Thank the reviewer’s high evaluation on the manuscript. The second reviewer believe that ‘All comments in the manuscript have been addressed’. We totally agree with the reviewer’s comments. During previous revision process, we took plenty of time revise the manuscript. Each comments proposed by the two reviewers has been tackled correctly. Coastal land reclamation has become a common method to mitigate land shortages in coastal area. The Bohai Sea is the most concentrated area of port reclamation worldwide. We believe that the revised manuscript has broad readers worldwide.

(2) Question: Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: We are thankful to the two reviewers for the helpful comment. The Reviewer #2 think that the manuscript technically sound and the data support the conclusion. The revised manuscript used the Landsat remote sensing images and field investigation to address the changes in different type coastlines and the CLR process of these ports in the reclaimed areas of the Bohai Sea. The port land reclamation experienced periods of acceleration, peak, deceleration, and stagnation since 2002, and the planned schedule of reclamation should be constrained. The results obtained in the manuscript have important implications for further scientifically reclamation, and promoting regional sustainable development of coastal zones in dense port distribution.

(3) Question: Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. The revised manuscript has used the statistical method to identify the reclamation status appropriately. We believe the latest revised manuscript should meet the requirements of the journal. The readers will have no difficulties in understanding the ideas of the manuscript. We express our gratitude's to the two reviewer for their helpful comments.

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Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s assessment toward the manuscript. The manuscript is presented in an intelligible fashion and written in a standard expression. The writing expression has been revised by a Native English Speaker carefully. There is no any typographical or grammatically errors. Therefore, we believe the language in current version is clear, correct, and unambiguous. Please refer to the revised manuscript. Thank you again.

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Reviewer #1:

(1) Question: Although the author has done a lot of revision work, there are still many problems and I cannot recommend it for publication at the present version.

1. The layout of the paper is very bad, especially the tables and headings.

Response: We are thanking the reviewer’s evaluation on the manuscript. The reviewers said that the author has done a lot of revision work. However, there are still many problems that need further revision. Port reclamation is the main types of coastal reclamation. However, we should not blame the port reclamation for several reasons. First, not all the reclaimed area is used as port construction and only 26.3% of reclaimed areas were used as port construction in the Bohai Sea.

The reviewer think that the layout of the paper is bad, especially the tables and headings. We have modified the Tables and Headings based on the reviewer’s comments. Please refer to the revised manuscript.

(2) Question: I suggest the results should be better discussed and justified, such as whether they are consistent with previous studies or analyzing the reasons for the empirical results. At present, there are many contents in the discussion section that are not closely related to this paper.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer’s comments. The reviewer thinks that the results should be better discussed and justified. The discussion section in the revised manuscript is consistent with previous studies. As for the coherency with the discussion, we have modified the discussion section and related information has been added in the revised manuscript. Some information that is not closely related to the paper has been deleted in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2:

(1) Question: This manuscript has been revised in detail according to the comments of the reviewers. The current version is worth publishing.

Response: We are thankful to the reviewer and the reviewer think the current version is worth publishing. The reviewer thinks that the manuscript has been revised in detail according to the comments of the reviewers. The revised manuscript takes the Bohai Sea as an example to demonstrate the coastline length change, changes of area percentage of port reclamation within the port boundary of different ports. The purpose of the revised manuscript is not to agree with the reclamation in China, but to identify the area percentage of port reclamation, i.e., used for port purpose, in the reclaimed area. The manuscript has vital meanings for decision-makers to revise the reclamation policy in future. The ports will play an increasingly important role in the world due to the frequent exchanges of materials worldwide. We express our gratitude to the warm-hearted reviewer for the constructive comments.

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Land reclamation pattern and environmental regulation guidelines for port clusters in the Bohai Sea, China

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Land reclamation pattern and environmental regulation guidelines for port clusters in the Bohai Sea, China

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