Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-24007 Safety and Efficacy of Esaxerenone in Hypertensive Patients with Heart Failure with Reduced Ejection Fraction PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Iwahana, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: All issues raised by expert reviewers are required. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comment: Iwahana et al. conducted a retrospective study to investigate the safety and the efficacy of esaxerenone, a novel non-steroidal MRB in subjects with hypertension and heart failure with reduced ejection fraction. After a short term (35 days) and mid term (167 days) follow-up, no serious adverse event (hypotension, hyperkalemia, hospitalization for health failure) was observed. A small number (n=7) of patients showed a worsening of renal function, though superimposable with the one reported in other major trials and of mild clinical relevance. A slight, non-significant, elevation of potassium was also detected. In terms of efficacy, however, a consistent over time BNP reduction was assessed. Albeit with the limitations implicit in a small retrospective study, the novelty of the drug under observation and the significance of the clinical context make the findings and the paper relevant. However, the authors should amend some flaws, mainly in the discussion section, to make it suitable for publication. Major Limitations: the main limits of this work lie in the combination of being a retrospective study with a very small sample size and no control group. Indeed, this substantially hinder the appreciation of an efficacy effect, and this should be wider discussed in the “study limitation”. Also, cardiovascular events were defined as outcome. However it seems, from the text, that no event was reported (except that one in Figure 1), but this is probably due to the short follow-up. Taken this into account, the authors should also try to considerably mitigate their statement regarding efficacy. Furthermore, the small and specific (Japanese) population limits the generalization of the results. This should be better discussed and, probably, also added in the title. In general, I feel that, as original research article, the limitations of the work are various and of major relevance and should be better addressed. Minor Line 180: modify "initial assessment" with "short term assessment". Lines 229-231: To provide a stronger meaning of safety, I suggest modifying the sentence in “In the present study, no patient presented with hypotension, even if in some patients SBP had been already normalized at baseline with other antihypertensive agents.” Lines 233-235: The paragraph is too short. As stated above, the authors should make at least a major effort here if they intend to comment about safety. Maybe some literature quantitative contextualization would be helpful here (i.e. comparison of the effect on BNP levels - absolute or percentage reduction- with other MRB on similar cohorts). I suggest also implementing the data on hospitalization for heart failure here, and also discussing the short follow-up time. Line 234: change “in the initial assessment” with “over time”. Reviewer #2: The Iwahana and co-authors manuscript aimed to investigate the short- to mid-term safety and efficacy of esaxerenone in hypertensive patients with heart failure with reduced ejection fraction (HFrEF). The present study was a single-center, retrospective observational study conducted in Chiba University Hospital, included a small number of patients and part of then were converted to esaxerenone from another MRB – this observation was pointed in the discussion section. Although these points, the present study suggested that esaxerenone is safe for hypertensive patients with HFrEF, with a low incidence of hyperkalemia and hypotension. In addition, esaxerenone was found to be beneficial for heart failure in terms of BNP level reduction. Major comments: 1. To reinforce the esaxerenone efficacy for heart failure the authors could compare the echocardiographic data before and after short- to mid-term esaxerenone treatment. Please, analyze these echocardiographic parameters. 2. The authors could include diastolic parameters in the echocardiographic analysis and evaluate the role of esaxerenone in these parameters. Minor comments: 1. Please, add each Statistical analysis applied in the table and figure legends. 2. Please, change the supplemental figure to the regular figure 4. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Safety and Efficacy of Esaxerenone in Japanese Hypertensive Patients with Heart Failure with Reduced Ejection Fraction: a retrospective study PONE-D-21-24007R1 Dear Dr. Iwahana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vincenzo Lionetti, M.D., PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have brilliantly answered to all the issues raised; thus, I do not have any further comment. The paper is now, in my opinion, suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-24007R1 Safety and Efficacy of Esaxerenone in Japanese Hypertensive Patients with Heart Failure with Reduced Ejection Fraction: a retrospective study Dear Dr. Iwahana: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Vincenzo Lionetti Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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