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PONE-D-21-23399 When Election Expectations Fail: Polarized Perceptions of Election Legitimacy Increase with Accumulating Evidence of Election Outcomes and with Polarized Media PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Van Boven, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== I asked two experts in the field to review this manuscript. I synthesize their key comments with my own (based on an independent reading) below. Overall, all three of us think that this paper should be published in PLOS ONE, though we differ somewhat in how much more work is needed. The two places that I think need to be revised are the positioning and (at least one of) the analyses. For the positioning, you lean heavily on dissonance theory, which certainly makes sense intuitively, and yet as R2 points out, there are other plausible explanations for why belief in the election’s legitimacy could change with time. Beyond that, there is no direct measure of dissonance, making it that much more difficult to know if dissonance is driving this result or not. I would suggest significantly reducing the exposition on dissonance and alluding to the entire idea as just a possibility, rather than a theory to build on (with these results being confirmation of that theory). For the analyses, I agree with R2’s belief that the polarization effect should (based on your set up) be moderated by in-group media consumption. I encourage you to run the set of analyses that the reviewer suggested. If the results don't support your theorizing, I would suggest that you both downplay the media consumption angle entirely AND report the lack of a result in an appendix. Aside from these two larger issues, I suggest you carefully read and respond to the other comments made by both reviewers as they clearly took the care to provide feedback that would improve your work. On the whole, I think that with these changes, this manuscript has a clear path to publication. Short of something significantly new in the revision, I do not anticipate sending the manuscript back out to review. As always, please provide a detailed summary of the changes you have made in response to the entire review team’s comments. Best of luck. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I was a reviewer for this manuscript when it was previously submitted to a different journal, and I very much appreciate how the authors have altered the paper to reflect and address many of my earlier concerns. I also thought that the new material from Lee Ross nicely motivated the present investigation. What follows are some lingering issues that I think can easily be addressed in a revision: Line 82: Unfortunately, I can’t quite parse the following sentence: “For winners, confirming knowledge that their expected and hoped-for win needs to be psychologically reconciled with any lingering doubts about the candidate’s electability and other perceptions of the candidate’s weaknesses” -- even by manipulating whether “confirming” is intended as a verb or an adjective. Line 102: “The present study also provides evidence for the role of social confirmation in reducing dissonance through motivated reasoning about election legitimacy” – again a bit difficult to parse -- is the role played by social confirmation or motivated reasoning? I realize that “dissonance through motivated reasoning about election legitimacy” is intended to be a single unit, but maybe unpacking the sentence a bit would be helpful. Line 119: I appreciate the new edit, but “high” should be “highly,” yes? Line 243: I also appreciate this acknowledgement but maybe it’s also worth acknowledging somewhere that, especially in light of the handy figure, the outcome of the election was somewhat of a continuing process, not a bright-line distinction. Line 298-303: Democrats’ conviction that their votes were counted correctly evidently increased much more than the barely significant drop in Republicans’ confidence that their votes were counted correctly, yes? Maybe worth mentioning that difference? More importantly, why do these means differ from those reported in the next paragraph in Lines 312-313 and Lines 317-318? No doubt I have missed some distinction, but I’d nevertheless appreciate a clarification. Line 318-320: “This differential decline may simply reflect that people know more about their own votes than they do about others’ votes.” Perhaps, but then why don’t we see a similar increase for Democrats’ confidence in their own vote vs. others’ votes? Perhaps a ceiling effect? Line 437: There appears to be a word missing Line 438: Given the measures employed in the study, it’s a bit odd to refer to, for example, Fox News as a source of collective dissonance reduction in the same way that a doomsday cult (or other tightly-knit social groups) apparently was. The latter obviously offered a much more intimate connection for the target perceiver than the former, which could simply (or primarily) represent a source of biased information, as opposed to all the other ways in which fellow cult members could be a source of comfort when a prophecy is seemingly disconfirmed. Perhaps some such acknowledgment of this distinction is warranted. Reviewer #2: I have to admit that I have never really understood PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and the role of PLOS ONE reviewers. If my task was to examine if the manuscript reports empirical research that satisfies the basic standards of science and if the description of the research is comprehensible for scientists from other fields and practitioners then my answer is “Yes this manuscript should be published in PLOS ONE.” In other words, the manuscript satisfies the 7 criteria listed in the Guidelines for Reviewers. Below a more nuanced review that highlights the strengths and weaknesses of the manuscript. I am providing rather detailed input to give the authors the opportunity to increase the scientific contribution and impact of their paper. There are clearly many things to like about this manuscript. The experimental manipulation is a strong point. So is the theoretical research question as well as the attempt to test theoretical predictions about cognitive dissonance in an applied setting. The study is well-conducted, and the analyses are mostly correct and reported in a straightforward manner. I liked the violin density plots. The findings provide evidence for the idea that emotions and perceptions of election legitimacy polarized over time after the 2020 presidential election. Neither the predictions nor the results are particularly surprising. Most people, even those without any training in social sciences, would predict that losers perceive elections as less legitimate (and experience more negative emotions) than winners, and that this difference increases as the outcome of the elections become more and more clear. Once does not need cognitive dissonance to explain this effect. The difference between the two groups, “Declared” and “Undeclared,” is not just that Biden was declared the winner of the elections. Many other things happened between Nov. 4 and 15, 2020. Trump and many Republican elected officials declared the elections as being rigged, whereas Biden and his team kept saying that the elections were legitimate. The observed results could be due to cognitive dissonance reduction, as the authors claim. But they could also be due to respondents simply being influenced by their party leaders or numerous other things that changed between Nov. 4 and 15. Although the study contains an experimental manipulation (= is a “true experiment”) it is unclear what was manipulated here. Given the interpretational ambiguities of the results, I feel that the authors overstate their results. I think the authors should adopt more cautious language and delete sentences such as “These findings advance theoretical understanding of polarized perceptions of election legitimacy by more directly implicating rationalizing processes associated with cognitive dissonance and motivated reasoning” and “[…] suggest the role of emotion in the arousal and reduction of dissonance through rationalization.” Has this study been preregistered? I am asking because the authors made many choices that I would not have made. Here some examples. Party affiliation was measured on a 7-point scale. The authors trichotomized this continuous scale into three categories: Responses 1, 2, and 3 were labeled “Democrat,” response 4 “Independent,” and 4, 6, and 7 “Republican.” Why not a different categorization into responses 1 and 2 (Democrat), 3, 4, and 5 (Independent), and 6 and 7 (Republican)? Or why not treat this variable as a continuous predictor with 7 levels? The latter choice would have made sense because the “quadratic trend” is significant (see Table 1). Where does the idea come from to combine all “other” 14 media outlets into one score which is then contrasted to Fox News? Given the introduction, I expected the polarizing effect (the increase in difference between Democrats and Republicans between Undeclared and Declared) to be moderated by in-group media consumption. In other words, I expected the authors to test a 3-way interaction between party identification, timing, and media consumption (the latter being a continuous predictor indicating the extent to which respondent consume media known to promote ideas consistent with the respondents’ party identification). I also expected the authors to test a moderated mediation model in which the three-way interactive effect on election legitimacy is moderated by emotions, i.e., the difference between negative and positive emptions. Such a moderated mediation model corresponds to Hayes’ Model #11. Minor points: I was confused by the fact that different terms were used interchangeably. “Party identification” was sometimes called “party identity” and “partisan ID.” “Election legitimacy” was sometimes referred to as “vote legitimacy,” “perception of legitimacy,” and “confidence in vote legitimacy.” “Media outlets” are also “news outlets” and “sources.” “Media trust and consumption” is also called “engagement.” “National votes” are sometimes “nationwide votes.” I didn’t understand the sentence “Respondents answered both questions on non-numeric scales” (p. 13). Are the 5-point scales, which were mentioned two sentences before, non-numeric? A similar issue occurs on page 13 where the authors say “Participants answered on two scales presented without numbers (1 = Not at all confident; 5 = Very confident).” Do the authors mean to say that they presented respondents with five verbal labels and that they later assigned the numbers 1 to 5 to these labels? The choice of the 15 media outlets is surprising. How come the authors did not include a larger number of conservative outlets? It is not very informative to compute for each respondent a correlation between trust and consumption across the 15 media outlets, i.e., 1236 correlations each with an N of 15 (p. 13-14). It would be better to compute for each media outlet a correlation across all participants, i.e., 15 correlations each with an N of 1236. The authors should then report the median and the range of these 15 correlations. On page 14, the authors report a one-df test, F(1, 1078) = 3.13, p = .077, which is a 2-df test. I’d drop the factor “vote type” in the analyses reported on pages 14-15 and I’d collapse the top and bottom panels in Figure 2). The factor doesn’t add anything to the paper. Given that the two vote confidence ratings are averaged in the remaining analyses, including it as a factor in the earlier analyses creates confusion for readers. The fact that the party identification by timing interaction was stronger for national votes can be mentioned in a footnote. I did not understand right away what the authors meant by “systematic legitimacy of national votes” (p. 15). It says on page 15 that “Republicans’ confidence that their own votes were correctly counted did not significantly decrease over time (M_Undeclared= 3.31, […] M_Declared = 3.31)”, but then the red line in the top middle panel in Figure 2 is not perfectly flat. How is this possible? Figure 2: I’d put the violin density plots for the Independents in the middle rather than on the right side. The authors say on page 17 “In a regression analysis, negative emotions predicted lower confidence that votes were counted correctly,” but it is not clear what confidence ratings they are referring to, the “own vote,” the “nationwide vote,” or the average of the two ratings. The same issue exists in the title of Table 1 and the analyses reported on p. 20. It is incorrect to say that Figure 4 is a graphic representation of the result that “Democrats’ and Republicans’ differential engagement with polarized media corresponded with their polarized confidence in vote legitimacy” (p. 19). Confidence in vote legitimacy (= perceived election legitimacy) is not shown in Figure 4. The significant “curvilinear trend” (b = 0.16) reported in Table 1 is surprising. This coefficient and Figure 2 suggest that the polarizing effect is mostly due to Democrats becoming more confident. Is this finding consistent with the authors’ theoretical analyses? Wouldn’t we expect cognitive dissonance effects be strongest for losers? I don’t understand why the authors first include media outlet (= source) as a within-subject factor (which is identical to computing a difference score; see p. 18) but then run analyses in which they include both media outlet scores as predictors (Table 1). Is type of media outlet hypothesized to be a moderator, or are the authors predicting the existence of two (parallel?) mediators? The sentence “It is noteworthy how in essays …” (p. 22) is formulated in an awkward manner. The authors dedicate four paragraphs to the types of questions that future research might examine (pages 23-25). I think these ideas can be reduced to one paragraph. It would be more interesting for the authors to discuss the implications of their findings rather than provide a list of the numerous things they didn’t do in the present research. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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When Election Expectations Fail: Polarized Perceptions of Election Legitimacy Increase with Accumulating Evidence of Election Outcomes and with Polarized Media PONE-D-21-23399R1 Dear Dr. Van Boven, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Thank you for the diligent work in responding to the review team's comments/concerns. This was an excellent revision! Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jeff Galak, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-23399R1 When Election Expectations Fail: Polarized Perceptions of Election Legitimacy Increase with Accumulating Evidence of Election Outcomes and with Polarized Media Dear Dr. Van Boven: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jeff Galak Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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