Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-16033 Invariant natural killer T-cells play a protective role in murine vulvovaginal candidiasis by Candida albicans PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miyazaki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the authors investigated a role of iNKT cells as a mediator of immune responses that could contribute to fungal clearance in a mouse model of C. albicans vaginal infection. Samples of vaginal lavage fluid were collected from estrogenized mice pre-treated with α-GalCer one day prior to vaginal inoculation and examined for fungal loads, cellular infiltrates and levels of S100A8. Leukocytes isolated from uterine and vaginal tissues were analyzed for respective cell-surface markers for identification. Results from lavage fluid indicated a reduction in vaginal fungal burden on day 7 p.i. and an increase in leukocyte migration on day 3 p.i. with a positive correlation between the presence of S100A8 and leukocyte counts. An analysis of uterine- or vaginal-associated cells by flow cytometry showed elevated numbers of CD8+ T cells and NK cells in the vagina from mice treated with α-GalCer while leukocyte profiles in the uterus were similar between the sham and α-GalCer groups. Collectively, the authors concluded that iNKT cells, presumably activated by the α-GalCer treatment, mediated a protective inflammatory response by induction of S100A8 through a mechanism involving CD8+ T cells and NK cells that ultimately resulted in reduction in vaginal C. albicans burden. Despite the rigorous flow cytometry analyses, there are several weaknesses and missing elements in the methodology, and overall, the study appears incomplete to support the conclusions. The following are major issues found in the manuscript. 1. The cited references in regard to priming of iNKT cells by α-GalCer demonstrate immunosuppressive properties. As shown in (21), activation of iNKT cells by intraperitoneal α-GalCer treatment resulted in reduced phagocytic capacity and increased C. albicans tissue invasion/deaths while CD1d KO mice (NKT cells-deficient) showed higher fungal clearance/survival. α-GalCer treatment alone was indicated to have a neutropenic effect (22). The contradictory outcomes in the vaginal immune response should be addressed. 2. As mentioned by the authors, the effect of α-GalCer stimulation on iNKT cells appears to occur as fast as 2-3 h post i.p. injection. The literature also suggests that iNKT activation is short living. A kinetic study showed that iNKT activation, measured by CD69 expression as a marker, peaked at 12 h post injection and returned to the baseline level within 72 h (21). Similar results were seen in fungal (22) and HSV2 (23) loads increased within 2 days. A study in (24) included α-GalCer injection on -2, 0, 3, 7 days post-infection and showed no difference in chlamydia burden. Thus, the effect of α-GalCer on iNKT cell activation on the time points is likely minimal and should be optimized/monitored/confirmed in the mouse VVC model. 3. Despite the high estrogen dose and C. albicans inoculum, seemingly higher ends of the standard range, it is concerning that animals failed sustain vaginal fungal burden for a period of 14 days in conventional C57BL6 mice. Although SC5314 strain is not a robust colonizer of the vaginal mucosa, estrogenized mice should maintain consistent levels of colonization for 14 days, and longer in most cases. Or the data are not interpretable if there is no distinction between clearance and lack of colonization. 4. It is unclear whether trypan blue dye was used for the purpose of cell viability staining or pan-nuclear staining. Since trypan blue dye is only permeable in cells the lacking intact membrane integrity (i.e. dead), it is only helpful in identifying dead cells. To accurately quantify a cell infiltrate, a staining method that aids visualization of the nuclear morphology (e.g. H&E or Pap smear) should be used. On the same note, “inflammatory cells” should be reworded to “leukocyte infiltrates”. 5. Previous studies showed that infiltrating cells into the vaginal lumen following vaginal C. albicans inoculation are predominantly neutrophils [PubMed 15102806], are the main source of S100A8 detected in vaginal secretions (11) and have no apparent effect on fungal burden in mice [28292981]. This information should be addressed in Discussion. Furthermore, it is unknow whether iNKT cell priming by α-GalCer or any downstream effectors (CD8+ T cells and NK cells) have impact on the expression of S100A8. Since S100A8 is the sole parameter of antifungal activity in the current study, this should be confirmed experimentally. 6. What is the rationale for evaluating the immune cells in the uterus in conjunction with the vaginal cells? C. albicans from the vaginal origin rarely invades the upper reproductive tract or does not lead to infection. If so, this should be reflected in the data from the uterine immune cells. If not, the data are not relevant in the current study and should be removed. Reviewer #2: In the manuscript, Abe et al. studied the host defense with a focus on the effect of iNKT cell activation in a murine model of vulvovaginal candidiasis. They found that mice receiving α-GalCer, an iNKT cell agonist, control fungal pathogen better than mice receiving PBS. This better fungal clearance is accompanied by increased CD8+ T cells and NK cells. There is also a trend in increased S100A8 production but it does not reach statistical significance. The overall research design and results are solid. There are several concerns about this manuscript: A major concern is that it is unclear whether iNKT cells are induced or activated in their model, for example, if their cell number changes, or if they produce more cytokines after stimulation. Another major concern is that the author presents the data without explaining clearly the purpose or the meanings. For example, they present the number of uterine immune cells in fig 4, but without explaining why we should care about the uterine and what these negative results mean. Since the conclusion that iNKT cells are protective is indirect, the authors may modify their title, for example, α-GalCer stimulation could be mentioned in the title. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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α-galactosylceramide-stimuated invariant natural killer T-cells play a protective role in murine vulvovaginal candidiasis by Candida albicans PONE-D-21-16033R1 Dear Dr. Miyazaki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Karen L. Wozniak, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-16033R1 α-galactosylceramide-stimuated invariant natural killer T-cells play a protective role in murine vulvovaginal candidiasis by Candida albicans Dear Dr. Miyazaki: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Karen L. Wozniak Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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