Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 16, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-05233 Characterization of the endometrial, cervicovaginal and anorectal microbiota in post-menopausal women with endometrioid and serous endometrial cancers PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gressel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for your patience during this unusually long review period, due to the pandemic, it has been difficult to find enough available reviewers and acquire timely reviews. As such, I was only able to secure one set of reviews for your manuscript. However, I agree with the reviewer's assessment of the submission, and with their recommendations to improve the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study aimed to discover if the microbiome at three body sites is different among post-menopausal women undergoing hysterectomy. They swabbed these three sites, which then underwent 16S rRNA sequencing on the V4 region. QIIME2 was used for taxonomic identification at the genus level, and PICRUST was used for functional annotation. Overall, this study found differences in alpha diversity at these three body sites across three clinical groups (endometrial cancer, uterine serous cancer, and other benign conditions). They also discovered potential metabolic pathways associated with these different clinical groups that shotgun metagenomics can confirm. Authors do a good job of stating their findings (without overstating) and tying them to biological mechanisms and clinical importance. This study is unique in that it focuses on post-menopausal women, whereas much of the literature on endometrial microbiome focuses on those of reproductive age. Page 9 line 58: use of the word dysbiosis: dysbiosis is a vague word that means a lot of different things depending on who you ask. It seems as though the phrase “the microbiome” could easily replace dysbiosis with the same meaning. I suggest either replacing the phrase “dysbiosis” or defining its use in the statement of translational relevance. Page 10 line 78, introduction: manuscript citations 5 through 9 are studies linking “dysbiosis” to human cancer, however, upon further inspection, these citations appear to link specific taxa to the development of cancer. I don’t think these citations fit that manuscript’s definition of “dysbiosis” so I would change the word “dysbiosis” in this line. Page 10 line 79 states “some authors postulate”; it is my understanding that we “should” be stating findings as “the research suggests/has evidence for”, etc, so as to not “call out” other authors in a manuscript. Citation 11 on page 10 line 84: “vaginal dysbiosis has been link[ed] to bacterial vaginosis” This citation discusses PID, not BV. I’m assuming that this is the wrong citation here? I would also be careful about what citation you use, because the diverse community state type is associated with bacterial vaginosis, but is NOT itself a dysbiotic state. Authors appear to use “dysbiosis”, “microbial disequilibrium”, and “microbial dysregulation” interchangeably. If all three terms are used to refer to the same phenomena, this needs to be explicitly stated. I would lean toward removing “dysbiosis” from the manuscript in favor of the other two terms due to the baggage that comes with the term “dysbiosis” Page 12 line 151: it would be great to include rationale for why the V4 region was selected for 16S rRNA sequencing Citation 27: page 12 line 163: I read the ANCOM pub just now, and this seems like a very interesting and statistically sound approach. It’s not clear to me from the manuscript if this is a program (like QIIME), a package (like phyloseq), or just a method that one implements themselves. Page 13 line 193: a p value greater than 0.05 is not marginally significant; 0.45 would be marginally significant. I would change this language prior to publication. Page 14 lines 201-203: It’s not clear to me what the significance of the “biological cluster [1|2]” is, and this doesn’t appear to be further discussed in the discussion section. I would either remove this, include it in the discussion/state it’s relevance, or, if I missed this within the manuscript, state it more clearly. Page 15 lines 245-246: I don't remember reading in the methods/results that depleted vaginal Lactobacillus >> elevated uterine Pseudomonas in those with USC. I like the discussion of this (lots of lit, proposed biological mechanisms with clinical links), but don’t remember this in methods. Is this related to the “biological clustering”? If so, this isn’t currently clear in the manuscript. Should be more explicit in the manuscript prior to publication I like your discussion and justifications in lines 265-271 I appreciate that there is not a discussion of community state types - it would be hard to draw conclusions of CSTs with the V4 region alone and in general, the CST does not provide clinically relevant information. I am explicitly stating this since there is often pressure to include CSTs in analysis despite the reasons stated here. Some figures (fig 1, 4) may be hard to read for those with red-green colorblindness, it is worth adjusting the color palette before publication since this is a common condition. Manuscript does not state where the data (fastq/fasta files) are available. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Emily F. Wissel [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Characterization of the endometrial, cervicovaginal and anorectal microbiota in post-menopausal women with endometrioid and serous endometrial cancers PONE-D-21-05233R1 Dear Dr. Gressel, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors addressed all comments fully. They added clarifications to the manuscript about why they selected the V4 region for 16S sequencing, clarified that "dysbiotic" referred to a disruption of the gynecological microbiome, clarified some of the background citations, further describes the biomarker clusters and their clinical relevance, and have made all their data publicly available. This paper has novel findings about the microbiome at three body sites across three clinical conditions. These findings can pave they way for future clinical interventions and studies around these conditions through further evaluation of the identified biomarker clusters. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Emily F. Wissel |
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PONE-D-21-05233R1 Characterization of the endometrial, cervicovaginal and anorectal microbiota in post-menopausal women with endometrioid and serous endometrial cancers Dear Dr. Gressel: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Suzanne L. Ishaq Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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