Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 16, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-12637 Geographic weighted regression analysis of hot spots of anemia and its associated factors among children aged 6-59 months in Ethiopia: A geographic weighted regression analysis and multilevel robust Poisson regression analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tesema, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised during the review process. Particularly, you will see that comments have been made regarding the statistical analysis performed. In addition, it has been suggested that you check the text for the English grammar and syntax. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present results from a study of anemia among children aged 6-59 months in Ethiopia, its risk factors, and the spatial distribution of cases, based on data from the 2016 Ethiopia Demographic and Health Survey. The manuscript will be strengthened if the authors consider the following points. 1. The authors are encouraged to have the manuscript read by a native English speaker as there are numerous awkwardly phrased sentenced, incomplete sentences, and other grammatical errors. Examples include "varied across regions ranged" (lines 67-68), lines 69-73 (sentence starting with "Half of the" needs to be rephrased), rephrase sentence on lines 81-82, "in every 5 year cycle" should possibly be "every 5 years" (line 92), lines 116-118 (rephrase sentence starting with "Then, they have adjusted"), lines 146-147 ("was done using the Getis-OrdGi* statistics were"), "under-five children non-randomly" (line 156), "Variance Inflation Factor (VIF) values of the VIF" (line 166), "take different value clusters" (line 178), "we employed a mixed-effects Poisson regression with robust variance was fitted" (line 191), and "outcome (anemia) more than 10%" (line 192). These are just some of the phrasing issues, so a careful read-through of the manuscript should be conducted. 2. Authors need to provide more information on the Hgb adjustment as it is not clear when the two parts (separated by "or") of the equation are utilized. 3. The methods of analysis are presented in a different order than the results. For consistency and ease of reading, authors should present the data analysis methods in the same order as the presentation of results, so readers know what to expect. 4. In the spatial regression section of the Methods, authors need to clarify what specifically is being used as the outcome for both the OLS and GWR models. This will help the reader understand the core models as well as the presented results from the models. They also should specify what was used for the bandwidth or neighborhood in the spatial models. 5. Authors go into great detail about the OLS model, including presenting a table with the full results (coefficients) from the model. Yet they state that this model is not appropriate because there is evidence of spatial variability. If that is the case, why present the OLS model? Minor points: 1. line 61: should "hemoglobulin" be "hemoglobin"? 2. line 185: "STATA" should be "Stata" (https://www.statalist.org/forums/help#spelling) 2. line 132: maybe insert a ":" between "severe anemia" and "for non-pregnant women" and remove "was" from "non-pregnant women was" 3. lines 208-209: authors state that more than 2/3 of the children's mothers were anemic, but Table 1 has that percentage for non-anemic mothers. Authors should correct wherever the error is. 4. Table 1: there is an extra digit in the percentage for no Media exposure. 5. Table 5 is not needed, since the main information is included in the text. 6. line 411: "finings" should be "findings" 7. Figure 3 is not necessary. 8. Title for Figure 8: "chil" should be "children" Reviewer #2: Background: Don’t think you need your first sentence in the background. How you define anemia is important for your analysis, but starting with WHO definition isn’t too important. Most common is quantifiable, what most serious is, is unclear Again on line 65, does severe mean severity of disease or is it referring to disease frequency Line 67: are your stats about Ethiopia specifically for children under 5? Line 69: First sentence doesn’t add much as it’s vague. Are you talking about direct physiologic causes as described in that paragraph or social factors as mentioned in next. Line 73: Effects of anemia fit better in first paragraph talking about disease burden Line 81: First sentence of paragraph doesn’t make sense to me. Are there any studies to cite that do a spatial regression analysis in Ethiopia? Have people does spatial analysis of this issue in other countries (citations?) were the studies useful? Even if they didn’t use spatial analysis could cite general studies that looked at predictors of anemia in Ethiopia? Specifically call out limitations of these studies to make the need for your study clear Overall background is clear and makes study purpose clear but could use some edits as mentioned above. Methods: Line 99: Were the Kebeles used to create the enumeration areas? Line 108: What each country’s surveys consist of isn’t too relevant. Instead focus on what Ethiopia’s survey consists of and what you used Line 114: Important to mention that these cutoffs are based on WHO recommendations and only apply to children under 59 months. Did you classify anemia by severity? Previous studies have shown differences in mild vs severe Line 120: Good that you mention values were adjusted for altitude but I don’t think exact formula is too important unless you explain what it means Line 123: How do you decide which variables to look at? Prior knowledge? If so state that. Line 152-183: I defer to comments from a biostatistician as this is not my area of expertise Line 194: What is the rationale for choosing <0.20? What if sometime only wasn’t significant in bivariate analysis due to confounding but you had a strong reason to believe it’s relevant? Results: Your factors make sense but I worry that by not sub classifying the severity of anemia in the children you may be missing a certain level of nuance. Discussion: You mentioned in your introduction that spatial analysis could be useful for evaluating current interventions and how they are working. It would be helpful if in the discussion you mentioned some of the current interventions and how this relates to your spatial analysis. The way your current discussion section is set up focuses on the predictors of anemia and how they differ regionally but doesn’t really take advantage of the nuance of your analysis. ********** 6. 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Geographic weighted regression analysis of hot spots of anemia and its associated factors among children aged 6-59 months in Ethiopia: A geographic weighted regression analysis and multilevel robust Poisson regression analysis PONE-D-21-12637R1 Dear Dr. Tesema, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francois Blachier, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-21-12637R1 Geographic weighted regression analysis of hot spots of anemia and its associated factors among children aged 6-59 months in Ethiopia: A geographic weighted regression analysis and multilevel robust Poisson regression analysis Dear Dr. Tesema: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francois Blachier Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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