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PONE-D-21-12202 Characterization of a new type of neuronal 5HT G protein coupled receptor in the cestode nervous system PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Camicia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process After reading the manuscript and the Reviewer's comments for PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases, I decided to have the manuscript reviewed by an expert in the field of GPCRs of invertebrates (Reviewer #1). The three Reviewers in the first round were all parasitology experts. Since I myself have some experience with characterizing serotonin receptors, I absolutely agree with the criticisms made by Reviewer #1. In order to demonstrate an inhibitory effect on adenylate cyclase, it is essential to first stimulate the enzyme with forskolin or NKH447. A number of potential 5HT receptor antagonists should be tested, not just those that are highly specific for the 5-HT1A subtype in vertebrates. For the selection of the ligands, I strongly recommend a look at the insect literature (Drosophila melanogaster, Apis mellifera, Periplaneta amercicana, Tribolium castaneum ...). For more details, please see the report of Reviewer #1. For your information: Reviewer #2 corresponds to Reviewer #3 of the 1st round). Please submit your revised manuscript by July 15th, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Camicia et al. provide a revised version of their manuscript that I had not evaluated in the first round of the reviewing process. The authors have conducted a molecular and bioinformatics approach and identified potential members of the serotonin (5-HT) 1 clade of G-protein coupled receptors in E. canadensis, M. vogae, and H. microstoma. Classifiction of the receptor proteins is mainly based on bioinformatic evidence. The manuscript in general is valuable and extends current knowledge on the repertoire of biogenic amine receptors expressed in platyhelminthes. The bioinformatics part of study has been conducted with high precision and depth. However, certain aspects especially the pharmacological characterization of the receptors require further experimental investigation to unequivocally support classifying the receptors as 5-HT1 clade members. My general and specifc comments are outlined in the following paragraphs. General comments Throughout the manuscript the authors should strictly use the conventional nomenclature used by the ‘serotonin receptor community’: serotonin (= 5-hydroxy tryptamine, 5-HT) and subscript for receptor sub-families: 5-HT1. Another fail in spelling should be corrected: use G-protein coupled receptors (GPCRs) as well as G-proteins throughout the manuscript. Substitute ‘dose(s)’ for concentration(s); and use the term ‘concentration-response curve’. A main issue of concern, however, goes to the pharmacological data provided in the manuscript. It is a common and well-taken approach to study, e.g., a newly cloned receptor gene in a ‘reporter’ cell line. For this purpose the authors have chosen cells that constitutively express a promiscuous G-protein (G15). This is a smart experimental design to gain first insight into a receptor’s functionality. However, the data shown in Fig. 3A and 3B raise certain doubts and are (in part) incorrect: a) in Fig. 3A the concentration is missing. I guess it is µM(?). b) scaling of the ordinate is inappropriate (omit negative values; in 3B, too) and has to be changed. c) exposure/measuring time for cell-based Ca++ fluorescent assays would be extremely long according to the values given on the abscissa (approx. 80 min total measuring time). In the Mat. and Meth. section, the authors state that measurements were performed in scales of seconds. What is correct? I assume, as typical for Ca++ imaging experiments, the latter and, thus, the graph requires editing. d) The authors state that Fig.3A contains raw data. This does not fit to Mat. and Meth. (l.337ff) and it would be better to display the graphs either as �RFU vs time or as �RFU/R0 (= mean basal fluorescence) vs time. e) How do the authors explain that fluorescent signals decrease approx. 40 min (sec?) after 5-HT application for almost all ligand concentrations, except for 50µM? f) Which concentrations (5-HT) were used to calculate the concentration-response curve displayed in Fig.3B? Labeling of the ordinate seems to be wrong (5-HT µM). I guess it is (M), otherwise the deduced EC50 would be six orders of magnitude smaller than given in the manuscript (~7.7 nM). Data points for (0µM) 5-HT are missing! Have they been assigned to 10-11µM 5-HT? This should be changed and the graph adapted accordingly. Furthermore, instead of 100µM (=10-4M) 5-HT, the highest concentration of 5-HT shown in Fig.3A and also stated in Mat. and Meth. was 50µM (=5x10-4M). Therefore, the graph has to be corrected also in this respect. g) Fig.3C should be exchanged for a bar graph in which the normalized peak values of fluorescence are displayed and, eventually, negative values might be defined as 0. It would have been also more appropriate to use identical ligand concentrations (here 10 µM) in all measurements and the authors should provide these data. Can the authors explain why histamine application causes a fluorescent signal? h) The experiments performed to examine the potential coupling of the receptor to cAMP signalling suffer from faulty experimental design. Given that the receptor belongs to the 5-HT1 subfamily, the most obvious assumption were, that receptor activation leads to a reduction of the intracellular cAMP concentration. To assess this effect experimentally, cells have to be incubated with (1) IBMX to block PDE activities and (b) with forskoin or its derivative (NKH477) to stimulate endogenous membrane-bound adenylyl cyclases. In this way, one would gain an increase in cAMP. Upon adding a concentration series of 5-HT, the authors should be able to register a reduction of the cAMP concentration – leading to a nice and convincing demonstration of the correct assignment of the receptor. The authors may employ their (cAMP)-reporter cell assay referred to in the manuscript for this purpose or use a commercial kit to determine cAMP concentrations. Without such data, the value of the manuscript is considerably reduced. i) A final concern addresses the pharmacological profile of the receptor. The authors state that potential agonists did not or only scarcely induce receptor activity. However, the authors should examine and provide data on the effects of antagonists, too. They may select characteristic ones from the rich source of compounds that are known to interact with 5-HT1 receptors in a variety of other species, including insects. It should be rather straightforward to use the Ca++ imaging set-up to perform such experiments. Specific comments l.38: ‘…GPCR motifs…’ l.40: as stated above change nomenclature to Eca-5-HT1a l.88: change to: ‘…5-HT receptors are known but…’ l.90f: skip ‘…determined by similarities in sequence and transduction mechanisms [ ]’ l.92: ‘…system exists based…’ l.92-94: referring to C.elegans assignment of 5-HT clades is more confusing than helpul. Skip sentence. l.95ff: re-order sentences; starting with 5-HT1 receptors and ending with 5-HT7-like receptors. l.104f: redundant information; skip ‘…[17, 18] but no GPCRs…..In nematodes…’ l.109: introduce ‘…human (homo sapiens) Hsa5-HT1b …’ l.115-117: redundant to information given in lines 110-114; skip l.152f: the authors state that they prepared working dilutions of 5-HT in RPMI medium. Later they state that ligands were applied in assay buffer. Check and correct accordingly. l.274: ‘…cloning…’ has been achieved after PCR amplification of cDNA fragments but not sequencing! l.295: ‘…BLAST searches…’ l.299: ‘…denaturation…’ l.302: final extension for 2 mins? l.311ff: shorten and rephrase para: e.g. ‘The cloned cDNA from E. canadensis was named Eca-5-HT1a….’ l.351ff: explain in more detail the assay conditions. What is a ‘G�s mutant’? For what purpose is it applied? How does it enter cells? Was IBMX used? Was Forskolin applied? Did the authors really add 500mM Na butyrate? l.457: skip ‘…the mRNA or transcript…’ l.458: change to ‘…encoding the E. granulosus orthologue of this receptor…’ l.467: change to ‘…within the 5-HT1 clade (Fig. 1A) were named Eca-5-HT1a,…’ l.471: change to ‘…receptors identified in this work’ Figure1 and Figure legend: There should be no N-glycosylation sites labelled in ICL3! Why was TM1 excluded from the alignment? The authors should give names and accession numbers of all receptor sequences in the Fig. legend. l.473: change to ‘The structural representation…’ l.496ff: skip (clades 4, 7, 1) from legend; misleading because the authors only show three branches. Did the authors use an outgroup for calculating the phylogenetic tree? l.509: skip ‘Overall…’ l.511: skip ‘…(like 5-HT or other ligands),…’ l.512: change to ‘The new…grouped within the 5-HT1 clade of serotonergic receptors in the phylogenetic tree (Fig. 1C).’ l.520: change to ‘Similar to Eca-5-HT1a, multiple sequence alignments…’ l.522: change to 61.2 kDa l.526: change to ‘…within the 5-HT1 clade…’ l.530ff: change to: ‘However, this annotated receptor was not examined experimentally.’ l.533: change to ‘For labelling important aa residues, the Ballesteros…’ l.547: change to ‘Table 1 summarizes…’ l.549: change to ‘Corresponding residues in invertebrate…’ l.555f: skip ‘and classification’ l.570: change to ‘…5-HT2 type receptors.’ l.575: change to ‘ the Eca-5-HT1b receptor harbors a serine…’ l.580f: change to ‘The presence of threonine at position 5.39, a residue…’ l.590ff: change to ‘In the PIF motif…., the isoleucine (..) is replaced by a threonine in all three cloned…’ l.601: change to ‘Residues potentially involved in receptor and G-protein coupling’ l.613: change to ‘…GPCR groups…’ l.620ff: Table 3 is non-informative at all and should skipped. Spacing between residues located in different TMs is strongly influenced by the lengths of intervening loops. The only interesting aspect one might gain, is that many Gi-coupled receptors possess short C-termini, a feature also seen for the cestode receptors. l.637f: phrase more patiently, a bioinformatics analysis of potential interacting G-protein subtypes should not be over-emphasized. For all receptors decent interaction with Gi-proteins is evident. l.655: change to ‘…have a similar structure as Hsa-5-HT1b…’ l.701: give aa residues found at indicated positions l.703: change to ‘The isoleucine at position…’ l.710ff: substitute’big’ for long l.715ff: skip whole para; Eca-5-HT1b has not been examined experimentally in the contribution and the para duplicates results already summarized for the other receptors. l.732: change to: ‘Addition of serotonin to cells transfected with the Eca-5-HT1a construct induced calcium release from intracellular stores in a concentration dependent manner (Fig…)’ l.737: change to ‘Heterologous expression of Eca-5-HT1a receptors’ l.738ff: Figure legend must be rephrased once corrections and additional experiments were included in Fig.3 l.756ff: statement is wrong and misleading! See my general comments. The authors must provide new data on the receptor : G-protein interaction. G15 is not a proper control! l.760: skip ‘…(neurotransmitters…others)…’ l.761: Histamine also leads to an increase of the Ca++ dependent signal. Please explain! l.762ff: whole para is not convincing as outlined in my general comments. The authors have to address the ability of Eca-5-HT1a to inhibit cAMP production by a series of novel experiments. L768f: Misleading statement! So far, the authors have only in-appropriately examined coupling of Eca-5-HT1a to other G-proteins. As it reads, even in E. canadensis, the receptor would require G15 as an interacting partner to become functional. l.775-781: rephrase and skip all informations already given in Mat. and Meth. l.800: ‘…shown in F…’ l.807: ‘…shown in H…’ l.836f: change to ‘…receptor-containing fibers could receive serotonergic…’ l.847: change to: ‘…assignment the proteins as a 5-HT1 type receptors…’ l.851: skip info about spacing between TMs l.858: change to ‘…is expected to be coupled…’ l.862ff: statement concerning coupling to Gi-proteins not sufficiently examined (s.a.); skip l.887-910: whole para suffers from the in-appropriately executed experiments! Conclusions are not supported by current data. l.916: change to: ‘…images shown…to release serotonin that could be…’ l.923: change to: ‘…low titers and high concentrations of the serotonin…’ l.936: change to: ‘…Sm-5-HTR was expressed…’ l.946f: skip ‘…, a serotonergic receptor…[57].’ l.951-956: shorten para because until now UCM2550 has not been proven to be active at Eca-5-HT1a. l.961: change to ‘…receptor transcripts…’ l.963: change to: ‘…expression in the…stage is interesting…’ l.970ff: rephrase last sentence – strengthen wording l.980: change to ‘…repurposing any of the approved drugs…’ l.1344: change to ‘…GPCR genes…’; most likely heading will be no more required when moving receptor names and accession numbers to legend of Fig.1. l.1266: change to ‘Comparison of gene expression levels, determined…’ Figure S2: skip labelling of N-glycosylation sites in ICL3 Figure S4: skip completely Figure S5: skip completely; seriously, part D does not fit to the data shown in the main text! Figure S6: skip completely; as mentioned above, the data were obtained under in-appropriate conditions Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes the detailed structural analysis and functional characterisation of a new type of cestode 5HT receptor. Multiple different methods were used to characterise the receptor including in silico analysis, expression in HEK cells and immunolocalization. Authors concluded that the 5HT receptor is likely be classified as type 1. The real strengths of this manuscript lie in the comprehensive structural analysis of the receptors identified with very strong data indicating type 1 characterisation. The authors have appropriately addressed technical difficulties common with functional expression of receptors in HEK cells and provided more than sufficient data to prove that the receptor functions as a serotonin receptor. Although authors could not definitively functionally characterise this 5HT receptor as type 1, this is reflected appropriately in the final conclusion of the study and the language used when describing the receptor. The results have been condensed and presented in a very clear format highlighting the most important data within the study. Immunolocalization images are easy to interpret showing appropriate expression patterns for the conclusions which have been drawn from the study. Although background staining using the serotonin antibody is obvious, the authors have addressed this issue within the manuscript/review process and the staining presented for the 5HT receptor antibody is very clear and much more defined. Combined serotonin and 5HT receptor staining is acceptable for the conclusions drawn using this data. Overall I believe this manuscript should be accepted for publication as the authors have made an impressive effort to address all issues/concerns from reviewers and really focussed the details of the study. The data presented are accurate supporting the discussions/conclusions and the manuscript has been edited to a very high standard. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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