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PONE-D-21-19470 Measuring the readiness to screen and manage intimate partner violence: cross-cultural adaptation and psychometric properties of the PREMIS tool for perinatal healthcare professionals PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guiguet-Auclair, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. A thorough and rich review was conducted on the manuscript, which will surely guide the authors to carefully revise the work to make it suitable for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to review this original article based on the analysis of 360 responses to a questionnaire translated by the authors. The authors' objectives were to translate an existing questionnaire and then describe its psychometric properties. After some revisions, this article deserves to be published in my opinion as it makes an important contribution to the current literature. Indeed, to my knowledge, there is no validated questionnaire in French to measure the readiness/capacity of health care workers to manage intimate partner violence. Regarding the title, the authors have chosen to use the term "cross-cultural adaptation" whereas I would describe it more as a translation. The authors have chosen to present the method and the result of this translation in the method part of their article. Consequently, it seems to me that the main objective of this article is not to present the translation of the questionnaire but rather to describe its psychometric properties. Please justify the choice of using the term "cross-cultural adaptation" in the title by specifying how you did not only translate but also culturally adapt the original questionnaire or please edit the title. Regarding the abstract, the introduction part could be reduced to two sentences. There is a gap between the two announced aims (of translating the questionnaire and then describing its psychometric properties) and the first sentence of the results which talks about "acceptability". In the scenario where the authors choose to keep translation as the main aim of this study, I recommend that the authors start the results directly by talking about the translation (and the addition of one item and the deletion of another) and then the psychometric results (data completeness, factor analysis, score distribution, floor and ceiling effects, internal consistency, item-total correlations, inter-subscale correlations and test-retest reliability). The questionnaire consists of 5 parts including 9 (?) subscales but the subscale "Actual IPV Knowledge" is not presented in the abstract. Please explain why or revise it. Regarding the introduction part: - page 3, line 53, delete the 'r' between "factors" and "of IPV". - page 3, line 63, I am confused by the wording "perinatal healthcare professionals" which I would be inclined to translate as "healthcare professional specialising in the perinatal period". Please check with an experienced linguist. - page 4, line 76, specify whether or not the questionnaire ref 14 has been validated. Regarding the methods part: It is not clear to me how the authors were able to identify participants, avoid multiple responses from the same person and, conversely, make the link between test and retest. - page 6, line 138, replace "IPV Knowledge" by "Actual IPV Knowledge" - page 9, line 196, replace "date" by "data" As I am not a specialist in factor analysis according to KMO, I am not able to comment on this part. The other sections of the method are clear and do not call for any further comment. Regarding the results part: Do the authors have data on the response rate, or on the rate of completed questionnaires in relation to those started? The tables are numerous (7) but clear and useful. Perhaps a simplified version of table 1 could be presented in the article and the full table put in an appendix. In any case, it would be interesting to have the characteristics of the 24 re-test participants in this table. Similarly, the authors should consider putting other tables in the appendix, such as Table 4. Please explain why you have separated the inter-subscale correlations analysis into two tables 5 and 6 and included the number of hours of previous IPV training? - page 14, line 294, add a bracket after "Table 2". - page 397, you mention the mean age and its standard deviation but with 24 responses, does this follow a normal distribution? If not, the median and the 25th and 75th percentiles would be more appropriate. Do not put spaces before and after the slash (/). Regarding the discusion part: - page 9, line 418, The authors report "good acceptability" due to a "high response rates" although the response rates are unknown. A total of 360 responses were obtained but the deonominator is not reported in this article. To how many healthcare professionals was the questionnaire sent? What are the response rates? These considerations also need to be clarified for the re-test where 24 persons responded but where the denominator is unknown. Do the authors know the proportion of men in these two populations (to be able to compare them to the proportions of their two samples)? Although a little long, the discussion part is relevant and the limitations of the study are fairly presented. Regarding the Annex (S1 File.docx): - page 1, question 2, please consider replacing "Sexe" with "Genre"; - page 1, question 4, I recommend that you add "Maïeutique" after "Gynécologie / Obstétrique"; - page 1, question 5, I recommend that you reword the sentence as follows: "En quelle année avec-vous obtenu votre diplôme d'exercice professionnel ?"; - page 2, question 1, there is an extra space after "résidanat/"; - On page 2, question 3b, I understand that the questionnaire has been tested as it is and that a modification after the fact is questionable however please consider replacing "divulgations de maltraitance" by "révélations de maltraitance/abusbecause in French the word "révéler" means "to inform someone of something that was ignored, unknown, hidden or secret", while "divulguer" means "to bring to the attention of a large audience information that was initially considered to be or should remain confidential"; - page 5, question 8, you have translated "Child Protective Services" by "CRIP" without specifying the meaning of this acronym. I suggest that you either use a generic term or specify the acronym; - page 6, question 4, delete the full stop at the end of the sentence; - page 7, question 17, there is an extra space between "signalement" and "de". The full stop at the end of the sentence should be removed; - page 10, question 4, replace "1 avocat" by "un avocat". Regarding the accessibility of the data, the authors state that the data are fully available without restriction at Mendeley data repository. A digital object identifier (DOI) to easily access this data would be useful. All my comments may seem too numerous, but for the most part they are minor details that can easily be corrected by the authors. Once again, I would like to highlight the importance of this work which fills a gap in the training of health professionals regarding intimate partner violence. The number of responses is significant for a 25-minute questionnaire administered to professionals. These data are presented with rigour by the authors and deserve to be published in my opinion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Laurent Gaucher [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-19470R1Measuring the readiness to screen and manage intimate partner violence: cross-cultural adaptation and psychometric evaluation of the PREMIS tool for perinatal care providersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Guiguet-Auclair, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Just one more minor revision and then the manuscript will go to the Acdemic Editor's decision without further review by the Reviewer. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Many thanks to the authors for taking my comments into account. Regarding the abstract, I would substitute the following sentence "Results: The PREMIS was successfully translated and cross-culturally adapted into French." by "Results: The PREMIS was successfully translated and cross-culturally adapted to the context of metropolitan France.". Indeed, French is spoken in many countries but in different contexts. I have no further comments and again I thank the authors for their conscientious work. ********** 7. 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