Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-12605 Application of phage display technology for the production of antibodies against Streptococcus suis serotype 2 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Khantasup, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I have only a few minor concerns that should be addressed. 1) An understanding of the serotypes of S. suis is essential for following this manuscript. The differences between types 2 and 1/2 (and also 1 and 14) are subtle variations in the polysaccharides. For the non-specialist, a fuller explanation should be given in the introduction, perhaps with a figure showing the differences. 2) Antibody 16H11 from ref. 25 also seems to differentiate between serotypes 2 and 1/2. This should be clearly stated in the manuscript and any relevant similarities and differences should be discussed. 3) Figure 4 is confusing, and seems to contain errors (at least the figure and the legend do not seem to agree). The legend states that identical residues are indicated by asterisks but this does not seem to be what the figure is showing. The figure uses a dash to indicate a stop codon. By convention, the asterisk is used to indicate a stop and the dash is used to indicate a gap in the sequence. I suggest using the asterisk for the stop and give the full sequence of each antibody without trying to indicate identical residues. 4) Overall the figures are of poor sharpness, even at the highest resolution available. As presented for this review, I think they are not of high enough quality for publication. 5) Line 24 indicates that some authors contributed equally to the work, but which authors is not stated. Reviewer #2: General comments: A better description of the human VH library that is being utilized along with a couple of references where other used it is warranted. The main concern with this work is the soluble VH production. The plasmid is made for expression of the phage not a soluble protein, in the work see https://translational-medicine.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s12967-020-02538-y they moved the VH sequence to a pET-22b vector for efficient periplasmic expression. Thus, while you can produce some protein from this plasmid. It was not a system designed for good yields. This is compounded by the fact that all the work done with material was not with purified or quantified amounts. It would have been better to move your VH to a proper production plasmid, and produce and test properly purified material I think this would make this work stronger. The x-axis for Figure 6 needs to be corrected. Another minor issue was with the quellung test. It would have been nice to include a positive control, showing another antibody generate the same result, but it suffices as is. But again, a dose curve on the response would also have been a nice addition if using purified protein. At one point I thought it would be an option to drop the soluble VH work and just publish the work with the VH expressed on the phage, are recent example of this using this library was published by Foods 2020, 9, 1230; doi:10.3390/foods9091230, but I do think have some data even if less than ideal is still a positive addition. With an inclusion of more on the history and use of this library, and some possible other minor modifications, I believe this work should be able to be made acceptable for publication. Reviewer #3: This is an interesting study and I enjoyed reviewing it. Some comments -The authors mentioned in different parts of the study that serotypes 2 and 1/2 cannot be differentiated by PCR and they must be tested by antisera. Indeed, this is no longer true since 2020: molecular tools to differentiate these two serotypes exist: a) Matiasovic J, Zouharova M, Nedbalcova K, Kralova N, Matiaskova K, Simek B, Kucharovicova I, Gottschalk M. Resolution of Streptococcus suis Serotypes 1/2 versus 2 and 1 versus 14 by PCR-Restriction Fragment Length Polymorphism Method. J Clin Microbiol. 2020 Jun 24;58(7):e00480-20. b) Lacouture S, Okura M, Takamatsu D, Corsaut L, Gottschalk M. Development of a mismatch amplification mutation assay to correctly serotype isolates of Streptococcus suis serotypes 1, 2, 1/2, and 14. J Vet Diagn Invest. 2020 May;32(3):490-494. c) Scherrer S, Rademacher F, Spoerry Serrano N, Schrenzel J, Gottschalk M, Stephan R, Landolt P. Rapid high resolution melting assay to differentiate Streptococcus suis serotypes 2, 1/2, 1, and 14. Microbiologyopen. 2020 Apr;9(4):e995. doi: 10.1002/mbo3.995. It is true that the antibody described in this study may be useful to labs not being equiped with PCR machines, so it is still intersting to publish these results. -Lines 54-55: 6 serotypes (20, 22, 26, 32, 33 and 34) are no longer considered as S. suis -I would have expected to find most phages that cross-react with serotypes 2 and 1/2...how the authors explain that most of them did not cross-react? chances to find the single epitope identifying the serotype 2 specific were very low...vs the finding of several phages that cross-react. I do really not understand how this happened... -Soluble expression: do the authors know the yield? -How the authors explain the reaction of some phages with S. aureus or P. aeruginosa? similar S. suis polysaccharides are present in such bacterial species? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Application of phage display technology for the production of antibodies against Streptococcus suis serotype 2 PONE-D-21-12605R1 Dear Dr. Khantasup, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ellen R Goldman Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-12605R1 Application of phage display technology for the production of antibodies against Streptococcus suis serotype 2 Dear Dr. Khantasup: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ellen R Goldman Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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