Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 27, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-02994 Predictors of School Students’ Leisure-Time Physical Activity: An Extended Trans-Contextual Model Using Bayesian Path Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hagger, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two expert reviewers with a track record of publications in the TCM and physical activity have reviewed your manuscript and provided detailed comments. I concur with their evaluation and have decided that minor revisions are needed before your manuscript is considered for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 01 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for submitting the above manuscript to PLOS ONE. During our internal evaluation of the manuscript, we found significant text overlap between your submission and the following previously published work, of which you are an author. - https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S1041608018301468?via%3Dihub ("Motivational predictors of students' participation in out-of-school learning activities and academic attainment in science: An application of the trans-contextual model using Bayesian path analysis" by Hagger and Hamilton, 2018) We would like to make you aware that copying extracts from previous publications, especially outside the methods section, word-for-word is unacceptable. In addition, the reproduction of text from published reports has implications for the copyright that may apply to the publications. Please revise the manuscript to rephrase the duplicated text, cite your sources, and provide details as to how the current manuscript advances on previous work. Please note that further consideration is dependent on the submission of a manuscript that addresses these concerns about the overlap in text with published work. We will carefully review your manuscript upon resubmission, so please ensure that your revision is thorough. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments This is an interesting manuscript testing an extended trans-contextual model to examine effects of motivational and social cognition constructs alongside the potential influence of implicit processes in influencing leisure time physical activity behavior among secondary school students. The study is based on sound theory with extended and clear theoretical explanations of the psychological mechanisms tested starting from the influence of PE teachers’ behavior on the psychological mechanisms operating to influence intentions and involvement in leisure time physical activity. Other positive aspects of the manuscript involve the prospective design used with behavior measured five weeks after assessment of the psychological constructs, the Bayesian method of path analyses conducted, and the testing of implicit processes added to the model. Overall, the study is well designed, clearly described in terms of the theoretical processes tested and the instruments used, statistical analysis is clearly reported, and the discussion covers in a satisfactory way study findings while the authors also state study limitations with sufficient analysis. Overall, I have been delighted reading the current manuscript and I believe it adds significant knowledge in the extant literature on motivational processes among secondary school students’ participation in leisure time physical activity. Specific comments Measures, Results. The authors have not reported confirmatory factor analysis results for the measurement tools used to measures the variables of the theory of planned behavior, habit, and trait self-control or other evidence supportive of the validity of scores derived from the instruments used in the present study. Therefore, it would strengthen the manuscript if the above information was presently added. Reviewer #2: The present study investigated an extension of the trans-contextual model (TCM) of motivation incorporating constructs related to implicit process. It is a very interesting paper, technically well-written providing sufficient contribution to the understanding of the effect of school physical education on out-of-school physical activity. Below there are some minor comments for authors to further increase the clarity of their argumentation. In the proposed model, the implicit processes constructs are not somehow related to the TCM. In my understanding the core of the TCM is that influences through a sequence of effects out-of-school physical activity. In previous extensions of the model, the added variables were clearly affected by autonomy supportive climate in physical education and assisted in explaining more variance or introduced a new pathway through which physical education climate influences out-of-school physical activity. In the present study, this is not apparent. The extensions of the model seem to work outside the core hypotheses of the model. In fact, it seems that the added variables address the intention-behavior gap, rather than contribute to the motivational sequence proposed by the model. In this sense, it is not clear to me how the proposed extension of the model helps us understand the effect of physical education motivational climate on out-of-school physical activity, which is the core aim of TCM (at least as it is applied in the physical education-leisure time association). In this sense, I would expect to see paths linking the school environment (i.e., climate, motivational regulations) to constructs such as trait self-control; there is evidence in the literature linking autonomous motivation to self-regulation and metacognition for instance. In this line, I would expect to see a path from leisure-time autonomous motivation on habits; i.e., autonomously motivated students would endorse more often habitual physical activity or hold relevant beliefs. Personally, I don’t see the lack of effect of intention on behavior as a limitation of the TCM. The core and unique in the literature premises of the model (i.e., trans-contextual effects of motivation, effect of motivation on proximal to behavior social cognitive variables) have been supported in the present study. The intention-behavior gap, in my mind, is a limitation of the TPB and had has been extensively studied in the literature. In this sense, I don’t think that the authors should discard the value of TCM, as it seems to be done in the discussion section. In this line, I think that the second and third explanations offered focus on the intention-behavior gap, rather than the utility of the TCM. If the focus of the paper is on better understanding the intention-behavior gap, then what is the value of testing the whole TCM? Also, I am not sure I agree with the arguments presented in p. 26 about the spontaneous participation of children in physical activity. And the reason for this is that if children hold positive views about physical activity they will be actively involve in systematic physical activity. If not, then spontaneous participation may be for external to physical activity reasons, i.e., pressure by peers etc. In this case the value of participation is questionable. I am not aware of any evidence suggesting that such spontaneous participation in physical activity will eventually result in more systematic participation in the future. In this sense, the whole concept of implicit processes should be conceived with caution about its contribution in understanding systematic physical activity. I found really interesting the discussion on the association of past behavior and habits. Drawing back to my previous comment, I would expect a path linking these two variables. This association may provide, in my mind, a perfect bridge between explicit and implicit processes associated with physical activity. 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