Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-09346 Stigma as a barrier to addressing childhood trauma in conversation with trauma survivors: a study in the general population PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schomerus, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current paper confronts an important social issue, convincingly describing the problem of stigma around child abuse in the introduction. The results tell a convincing story which are interpreted correctly, accessibly and in detail in the discussion. The authors deserve praise for their work in those respects. However, there are aspects in methods section that beg more explanation than has been provided in my opinion. I am attaching an annotated PDF which highlights some specific concerns in the methods section. Those concerns can broadly be grouped in three points: First, a lot of information is removed from the data via dichotomization. Likert scales are combined in categories, which in one instance is further reduced to a yes/no variable. Although it is clear that the intention is to ease the burden on the reader and provide a more straightforward analysis, the problems with dichotomizing without a specific rationale have been well known for a while (e.g. Cohen’s 1983 The Cost of Dichotomization). My intention is not to say that the decision was wrong, merely that the costs incurred from such procedures should be explicitly justified, or even empirically quantified via sensitivity analyses. Second, and perhaps most importantly, none of the instruments used are described in terms of reliability and validity. This is especially important if novel tools are used for this study. The results could be considered by some outright meaningless if we do not know that the right thing is measured and how well it is measured. Third, more information on missing data should be provided. The authors nicely provide a comparison between the current sample and the total German population, which is very much appreciated. However, they also mention that some respondents are not included if a certain proportion of responses is missing. Furthermore, since regressions are used extensively and no information is given about handling missing covariates, I assume that incomplete cases are dropped from these regression analyses. At minimum it is important to include how many people were dropped and how many were included in each analysis. Once step further would be to compare the dropped versus analyzed groups (perhaps in the supplementary materials), in a descriptive manner similar to the earlier comparison between the current sample and the total German population. Without these issues addressed in some form I am reluctant to interpret the presented results. As a general note on the discussion, I am happy with the way the authors interpreted their findings. What is missing in almost all paragraphs is some reference to other work in the area. To build up our theoretical knowledge base of the issue, the current results should be embedded solidly in past research and findings, even if no exact study is similar to the current one. For each phenomena found and described I should be able to follow-up my understanding with other works which considered similar issues. I believe the current manuscript can be an important contribution to the area, but for now I have to recommend major revisions due to the issues outlined above. Sidenote - although the authors state that the data is fully accessible, I could not find the database information or link in the manuscript. It is possible that this information was accidentally omitted. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript, “PONE-D-21-09346 Stigma as a barrier to addressing childhood trauma in conversation with trauma survivors: a study in the general population.” This manuscript presents the results of a multivariate, combination correlational and experimental research study, conducted via phone interviews with a large representative sample of the German population, to examine stigmatizing reactions toward adult survivors of childhood physical and sexual abuse, both in general and in response to specific vignettes. Strengths of this manuscript include the focus on an understudied topic of great clinical and social significance (childhood trauma); the authors’ clear rationale for studying societal stigma, due to its “aggravating” the negative, long-term developmental consequences of childhood trauma; the large representative sample; and summary of results in accessible tables and figures. Suggested areas for strengthening the manuscript follow: -Placing claims of the manuscript in the context of previous literature: The authors note in the abstract, introduction, and discussion that “there are no empirical studies examining public attitudes towards survivors of CT” (e.g., lines 100-101). In the U.S., at least, there are a number of empirical studies within the past 5 years that address public attitudes and stigma toward adult survivors of childhood trauma, especially childhood sexual abuse. The manuscript would be strengthened by positioning the contributions of the current study within the context of recent literature. -Related to the above, it could be argued that the authors are studying the phenomenon of stigma toward *adult survivors of* childhood trauma, rather than childhood trauma per se. In some areas this could be clarified. -Organization of introduction: The first paragraph was clear and then the flow of the introduction, from paragraph to paragraph, was harder to follow for the remainder of the intro. -Clarification of study design in the abstract: In the abstract, the study design and research questions were unclear (e.g., how many conditions, between-subjects, within subjects, experimental or correlational, comparing childhood vs. adulthood trauma or otherwise etc.) -Rationale for study design: Greater clarity is needed in the introduction for the study’s experimental design (what it is) and also for the rationale for why the different categories of trauma were chosen. The authors begin presenting their hypotheses on line 112 of the introduction, but at that point the overall study design is not yet clear. For example, the authors state “we hypothesize that interpersonal trauma is associated w/ more stigma than accidental trauma” (line 117), but at this point, it is not clear (a) what types of interpersonal trauma are being referred to here— e.g., childhood physical abuse, childhood sexual abuse, adult physical abuse?) and (b) what type of accidental trauma is being referred to, and whether it’s in childhood or adulthood. -Related to the above questions, how did the authors choose adult physical abuse as the type of adult trauma being investigated? Why not adult sexual and physical abuse? And why not include an adult accident condition? -More information is needed regarding the rationale for and theory- or data-driven process of designing the neighbor vignette. Has the neighbor vignette scenario been used in previous stigma research? If not, how did the authors choose a neighborly discussion as the setting for a trauma disclosure? For instance, in a U.S. context, it would be unusual for a person to immediately share with their neighbor, upon first meeting, that they are being abused or that they have a history of abuse. Thus, a negative reaction to this disclosure may not be due to stigma toward trauma survivors per se, but due to the person violating social norms around what information is appropriate to share upon first meeting. If this is the case, this would be an experimental confound that undermines the validity of the results. -Regarding responses to the vignettes, what was the rationale for the decision to collapse the continuous response scale into only 3 categories? (lines 154-158) -Regarding the statistical analyses and the fit between the hypotheses and analyses: Many inferential statistical tests are performed in this study, inflating the potential for a Type I error and diluting the conceptual clarity of the study. Manuscript clarity and contribution to the literature can be enhanced by a more streamlined connection between research questions, hypotheses, and data analyses. -Interpretation of results in the Discussion would benefit from being tied more closely to the results. E.g., the authors state on the first line of the Discussion, “we found considerable reluctance to reach out to someone indicating they were still struggling with traumatic childhood experiences.” “Considerable reluctance” is not an accurate statement in that the majority of the sample was willing to reach out. Smaller areas in need of clarification or adjusting: -“Social distance / distancing” - in the U.S. this term has been used over the past year to refer to the need to socially distance from others in order to prevent infection with the coronavirus. Use of this term may be confusing or distracting for U.S. readers. -Consistency of terminology - why “stigma” in some areas and “taboo” in others? -“Abuse specific stigmatization” (line 85)- please clarify? -Adjusting causal verbs used to describe pathways in the structural equation model (e.g., “increases” “decreases”) to correlational verbs (p. 16). -For Figure 1, providing a legend that labels each scenario and labeling the Y axis. -For Figure 2, providing numeric coefficients / parameter estimates for each pathway in the model and providing a caption or legend that labels the indices of each factor with names instead of q1, q4, q5 etc. I was not able to open the supplementary documents and anticipate that other readers would want ready access to the numeric results of the structural equation model to be able to interpret the results and understand the table fully. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-21-09346R1 Stigma as a barrier to addressing childhood trauma in conversation with trauma survivors: a study in the general population PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schomerus, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The authors should reflect especially on the comments from the 2nd reviewer with regards to how the hypotheses can be addressed using the presented data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kamperman Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I don't know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have admirably reworked their entire analysis to address the comments to a high standard. I am impressed by their improvements and can now suggest the acceptance of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors' responsiveness to reviewer feedback. In particular, the hypotheses are more clearly described in the Introduction; there is more evidence of citing and engaging with existing research on childhood trauma stigma; and the rationale for the Neighbor scenario is clearer, if still confounded, to my mind, with the neighbor/trauma survivor violating social norms by disclosing on a first meeting. Despite the authors' commendable, detailed work in revising the manuscript and explaining their methods and statistical results, there remain experimental confounds in the design of the study that cannot be addressed post-hoc. Specifically: (1) The authors' data cannot address Hypothesis 2, because trauma type (accidental vs. interpersonal) is confounded with age at which trauma occurred (the only accidental trauma vignette is in childhood), and (2) the data cannot address Hypothesis 3 as it is currently stated, because adulthood trauma is confounded with physical abuse trauma, such that the authors are not comparing childhood vs. adult abuse per se but rather childhood sexual, physical, and accidental trauma vs. adulthood physical trauma. I appreciate the constraints on statistical power and experimental conditions that can be imposed by limited financial funding for a project, but given that, the experimental design needs to be adjusted accordingly. Additionally, it is hard to follow both the rationale for and the statistical process for testing Hypothesis 4, in that here the authors drop the issue of childhood vs. adulthood and accidental vs. impersonal traumas and examine stigma and trauma broadly as constructs in the SEM model, and they also introduce the concept of positive stereotypes which had not been mentioned previously in the introduction (until the statement of H4), making it hard to follow the thread from theory to method to data analysis. Moreover, after adding a more detailed explanation of the statistical analyses in the Results section, as requested during the review process, it is now clearer how exquisitely complex the analyses are for H4, presenting barriers to the dissemination of the authors' work, when it is so difficult to parse the multi step process of this analysis. I realize this assessment might be disappointing to the authors who have clearly put a lot of preparation into their manuscript. But in a society already predisposed to stigma and doubt surrounding childhood trauma, I think it's all the more important that trauma research methods be rigorously designed and consistent with principles of open science such as pre-registration of hypotheses and analysis plans. Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Milan Zarchev Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-21-09346R2 Stigma as a barrier to addressing childhood trauma in conversation with trauma survivors: a study in the general population Dear Dr. Schomerus: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Astrid M. Kamperman Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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