Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-35550 Accuracy and reliability of focused echocardiography in patients with Chagas disease from endemic areas: SaMi-Trop Cohort Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pereira Nunes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: - https://escholarship.org/content/qt2fp014zq/qt2fp014zq.pdf?t=qadwdi https://academic.oup.com/ehjcimaging/article/19/4/459/4222661 https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27147390/ In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed." 3. Thank you for including your ethics statement: "The SaMi-Trop Cohort was approved by the Institutional Review Board, number 179.685/2012 (National Commission of Ethics in Research, CONEP)." a. Please amend your current ethics statement to include the full name of the ethics committee/institutional review board(s) that approved your specific study. b. 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Editor Comments: I would like to congratulate to the authors for this excellent study addressing the potential usefulness of portable and focused echocardiography in remote areas of South America for screening a forgotten and ignored serious CV disease such as Chagas, which affects mainly to the poor people of South America. I have only some minor comments to increase even more the clinical relevance of this interesting and clinically relevant study: 1) The reviewer has stated very important issues, which should be mandatorily addressed in the revised version of the manuscript. 2) The authors should perform an additional table showing the following findings: - rate of LV dysfunction defined as LVEF < 50% in all patients, in patients with RBBB, in patients with RBBB + LAFB, in patients with isolated RBBB, and in patients with normal ECG. - rate of LV dysfunction defined as LVEF < 40% in all patients, in patients with RBBB, in patients with RBBB + LAFB, in patients with isolated RBBB, and in patients with normal ECG. - rate of LV dysfunction defined as LVEF < 30% in all patients, in patients with RBBB, in patients with RBBB + LAFB, in patients with isolated RBBB, and in patients with normal ECG. 3) The authors should discuss with details and comprehensively the potential clinical relevance for the detection and diagnosis of Chagas cardiomyopathy of focused and portable echocardiography in comparison with an isolated ECG. In other words, why we should perform a TTE in seropositive patients regardless of a normal ECG ?; should we do a TTE in patients with normal ECG ?; should all patients with any change in ECG have a TTE or only in patients with RBBB ? 4) The authors should show in an additional table and discuss with details and comprehensively what did state the Chagas Guidelines of the ASE, of the Brazilian Society of Cardiology, and of the Argentinian Society of Cardiology about the use and indication of TTE (focused or not, portable or not) in seropositive patients with normal or abnormal ECG for the screening or detection of Chagas cardiomyopathy. 5) The authors should show in an additional table and discuss with details and comprehensively what did state the Chagas Guidelines of the ASE, of the Brazilian Society of Cardiology, and of the Argentinian Society of Cardiology about the definition or diagnostic criteria of Chagas cardiomyopathy. 6) The authors should discuss with details and comprehensively how we should procedure to diagnose Chagas cardiomyopathy in a seropositive patient with LVEF < 50% and AF or CAD. 7) The authors should show in a figure and discuss with details and comprehensively how we should manage a seropositive patient with a recent diagnosis of LVEF < 50% by portable or focused TTE. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: GENERAL COMMENTS: The subject is of global interest, considering the worldwide spread of the disease due to the crescent human migration. Additionally, an objective and quick approach of the patients regarding the cardiac evaluation is of great importance mainly when considering the less favoured areas, which are numerous in poor countries. Overall, the text is written in standard English; however, two issues must be observed: Of note, the punctuation mark “full stop” needs to come before the citation number (e.g: Introduction, 1st paragraph- “Chagas disease (ChD) remains a serious public health problem in Latina America, affecting 6 million of people.1,2”). Introduction, 1st paragraph: “Chagas cardiomyopathy is the most severe manifestation of ChD, which is characterized by ventricular enlargement with impairment of systolic function segmental or global associated with typical electrocardiographic (ECG) abnormalities3.” I would suggest to rewrite the phrase as: “Chagas cardiomyopathy is the most severe manifestation of ChD, which is characterized by ventricular enlargement with impairment of segmental or global systolic function, generally associated with typical electrocardiographic (ECG) abnormalities.3” It seems to me more correct in terms of English Grammar. METHODS Left atrial size, which is a cardinal parameter in terms of prognosis,1, 2 was not included in the eyeball analysis. Likewise, it would be of interest to include the right atrial size in the evaluation. Additionally, 4-chamber view focused on right ventricle was not performed, according to guidelines and cited by the authors in the text (reference 14). DISCUSSION P 11, 2nd paragraph: “In order to identify aneurysms, a careful examination requires not only standard views but also angulated apical views. Frequently, a modified four- and two-chambers views aiming posteriorly may be necessary to detect apical aneurysms and thrombus. Additionally, there is a broadly definition of aneurysm depending on criteria used, which may range from a small akinetic area to large with extensive wall thinning, similar to ischemic aneurysms18.Therefore, the low sensibility to detect aneurysm in FoCUS is expected” The study should have included extra careful examination, using modified apical views aiming at more accurate diagnosis of apical aneurysms. Despite the small ones may not alter the LVEF, 3 they represent an abnormality related to the disease and an attentive observation is needed. Considering the “broad definition of aneurysm depending on the criteria used”, it does not seem to me a proper argument, because one may always describe the alteration; additionally, the stored images were all subsequently analysed by experienced ecocardiographers (p. 5, 2nd paragraph, lines 14 and 15), who can standardise the definition of apical aneurysm. P 12, 1st paragraph: “Right ventricular involvement is common in ChD and it is clear that there is a progression of RV dysfunction among patients with the various forms of ChD28. Nevertheless, the echocardiographic study of RV is challenging because of the anatomical and functional complexity of this chamber and the visual assessment of RV size and function could be difficult29... Our results demonstrated an excellent accuracy for RV size evaluation and a poor sensitivity...” I would like to hear from the authors why they did not perform modified apical 4C view focused on RV: this would be easy, no time consuming, and would probably improve the sensitivity of both size and systolic function by means of eyeball evaluation. FIGURE 2: Letters A, B, C, D, E and F are missing REFERENCES 1. Hoit BD. Left atrial size and function: role in prognosis. J Am Coll Cardiol.2014;63(6):493-505 2. Saraiva RM, Pacheco NP, Pereira TOJS et al. Left atrial structure and function predictors of new-onset atrial fibrillation in patients with Chagas Disease. J Am Soc Echocardiogr.2020;33(11):1363-1374 3. Nogueira EA, OM Ueti, WR Vieira. The apical ventricular lesion in Chagas heart disease. Sao Paulo Med J. 1995;113(2):785-790 ********** |
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