Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 16, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-12659 Respectfulness-processing revisited: An ERP study of Chinese sentence reading PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ji, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The Reviewers identified a number of points that should be clarified in your Manuscript. The literature is not properly covered and the implications of the present findings should be strengthened. Additional data could be added in an appendix. Finally, the statistical approach could be improved. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study on pragmatic respectfulness effects on processing second person pronouns in Mandarin Chinese. The study seems appropriately motivated and described and well conducted. The results are fairly clear. I have some comments that the authors should consider when producing a new version of the paper: · What are the (written and spoken) corpus frequencies of the two pronouns nin/ni? Can frequency effects explain the observed ERPs in the first time window (for inconsistent nin but not for inconsistent ni)? · Please provide details about artifact rejection. How were artifacts identified? What counts as “excessive artifacts”? · Please provide examples and a more detailed description of fillers. Please provide an analysis of ERP data for fillers (e.g., in appendix) · Filtering (lines 202-203): be explicit about which filters were on-line (during recording) and which filters were applied off-line (during preprocessing) · “Depending on the results of the baseline time window…”: this part was the least clear to me; please describe clearly how the baseline data were analysed and how results impacted the analysis of the main ERP comparisons · On selecting windows for statistical analysis: I recommend using a clustering approach in the time/channel dimensions (e.g., Maris & Ostenveld 2007) to identify effects · Some discussion about late negativities in ERP research is missing: several studies have reported such effects (e.g., Nref: Nieuwland & van Berkum 2008; SAN: Baggio et al. 2008 etc.), it would be important to discuss how the process of resolving respectfulness inconsistencies relates to other processes associated with similar ERP effects. Reviewer #2: The study investigates the use of plain vs respectful second-person pronouns in Mandarin. The use of the pronoun is guided by politeness factors. It closely moves from the results of another work showing that the use of respectful-pro in an inconsistent context elicited an anterior negativity 300-500 and a sustained positivity 800-1600. the use of plain-pro in an inconsistent context instead elicited a broad negativity and a sustained negativity. Authors observe that the study has a few issues (lack of appropriate fillers and baseline problems), and want to assess the replicability of the findings. Differently from the study of Jiang et al 2013 authors report an asymmetry between pronoun types during the N400 time window: inconsistent (compared to consistent) use of the respectful-pro elicited a larger N400, which was not observed with plain-pro. The study may be of interest, for PLOS readership, but its scope is rather narrow, considering that it closely moves from a previous work. Still, I think it has same merits in these times of replication crisis, but before being apt for publication I thinks authors should revise it, focusing on the writing quality and on the interpretation of the results, which may be more nuanced in several sections of the text. A few specific comments follow: introduction - perhaps the focus of the introduction could be more on the use of respectful forms of in chinese and on the reasons why it is an important topic. the analysis and critique of Jiang et al, should be a subsection of the introduction on its own. following the critique, authors should describe how "the present study" will overcome the previous study's limits and then clearly spell out the experimental predictions method - I cannot see anything wrong in the analysis of the ERP data. the only thing is that the details on the artifact rejection procedure should be moved in the ERP analysis section - baseline correction is not explained clearly enough: it seems that instead of using 200 ms before pro, authors chose 200 ms before the onset of the whole sentence. if this is how it was done, it is fine for me, but it could be explained better. discussion - it is true that anterior negativities are quite often reported in the study of pragmatic phenomena. They are also found in literary metaphor comeprehension (Bambini, Canal, Resta & Grimaldi 2019 - Discourse processes), and when ambiguous anaphoric relations are computed (e.g., Nieuwland 2014, Neuropsychologia ; Canal, Garnham & Oakhill, 2015, Frontiers). In metaphor it has been interpreted as reflecting mechanisms related to the drawing of an array of weak implicatures, rather than one straightforward implicature (which is instead associated with larger P600/LPC). in anaphor procesing the Nref is associated with the search for additional information in the mental representation of the discourse. These studies may help the authors in elaborating a little bit more on the functional meaning of their findings, which as it is now has very limited implications. Also discourse linking and update mechanisms proposed by Petra Schumacher may help in the interpretation of the N400 effect in the context of pronoun resolution (Schumacher, P. B. (2012). Context in neurolinguistics. In R. Finkbeiner, J. Meibauer, & P. B. Schumacher (Eds.), What is a Context?: Linguistic Approaches and Challenges (pp. 33–53). There are many typos, and the writing quality should be improved - to make data fully available they should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-12659R1 Respectfulness-processing revisited: An ERP study of Chinese sentence reading PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ji, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While superficially reading the Manuscript I noticed a couple of typos: - lines 232-233: - A long epoch was "conducted" from 200 ms before the onset - I would write - A long epoch was "computed" from 200 ms before the onset - - line 401: - resulting in a delay the processing of the second - I would write - resulting in a delay "of" the processing of the second - I am wondering if other typos are present and I invite the authors to carefully revise the whole Manuscript before final acceptance. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Respectfulness-processing revisited: An ERP study of Chinese sentence reading PONE-D-21-12659R2 Dear Dr. Ji, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marte Otten, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-12659R2 Respectfulness-processing revisited: An ERP study of Chinese sentence reading Dear Dr. Ji: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Marte Otten Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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