Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-20375 Socioeconomic disparities in telemedicine utilization among surgical patients during COVID-19 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lattimore, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a timely manuscript on an important social issue emerging in telemedicine, an avenue of medicine which continues to be increasing utilized after the pandemic. The authors highlight important social disparities between those who utilized telemedicine during the pandemic versus those who continued with in-person visits. A large retrospective cohort of patients and patient encounters was utilized which is a large strength of the paper. The discussion is well-written and highlights several relevant, up-to-date articles. There is a conclusion made which I do not believe is sound. Analysis showed that when comparing telemedicine visits during COVID to visits beforehand, those who used telemedicine were more likely to have activated MyChart (lines 163-165). However, when comparing in-person visits during COVID to visits beforehand, those who attended in-person visits were also more likely to have activated MyChart (lines 195-198). Thus regardless of visit type during pandemic (telemedicine vs in-person), the patient was more likely to have activated MyChart. Therefore the conclusion that those more comfortable with technology (using MyChart activation as a gauge) are disproportionately utilizing telemedicine, is false. The statistics need to be re-calculated, or the conclusion withdrawn, or my misunderstanding explained. My largest critique of this manuscript is the failure to investigate or mention the reason for visit. A patient visit can be of several types - new patient visits, follow-up visits, and post-operative visits to name a few. While routine follow-up visits are easy to perform virtually, some aspects of new patient visits and post-operative visits such as conducting a physical examination, drawing blood, suture removal, dressing change, etc. all necessitate an in-person component. This is potentially massive confounding variable, especially as the manuscript is based entirely on a surgical patient population. For example, perhaps those from more privileged backgrounds were able to cancel their elective surgeries while those from more disadvantaged backgrounds continued with surgery and thus had more in person visits after the pandemic? Or are disadvantaged populations simply more affected from a health perspective by the pandemic (as you cite in your manuscript), requiring more urgent in-person visits? Reason for visit is a vital, possibly confounding variable that ideally be investigated but at minimum mentioned in the discussion. Minor grammatical errors: line 132 "as well factors" to "as well as factors"; Abstract Methods: "My Chart" to "MyChart" to stay consistent with remainder of manuscript Reviewer #2: This retrospective cohort study of 14,792 patients seen in an outpatient surgical setting between July 1 2019 to May 31, 2020 compared patient demographic, insurance, SES factors between in-person vs. telemedicine visits prior to and during the COVID-19 pandemic. Major concerns: There currently exist a large body of literature describing telehealth use in surgical practices during COVID-19. This paper would add much more insight into telehealth use as restrictions on clinical practice lifted to describe the its use in current contexts. While institutional policy closed outpatient clinics on March 17th, there were likely changes in healthcare-seeking behavior even before this time as case numbers rose. Would consider another time frame (e.g. same time frame the year before) for a clearer comparison. Increasingly, it seems that telemedicine in complementary to in-person visits in surgical practices. Type of visit, therefore, is extremely important. What types of visits were these? New patients? Post-op? Return/surveillance patients? Minor concerns: How were video visits offered? Using an institutional MyChart based platform? Or whatever communications platform available to the provider/patient (e.g. FaceTime, WhatsApp)? This would give insight into how meaningful MyChart enrollment might be. Intro: Line 69 – would change wording to reflect the fact the video visits are not only preferred due to reimbursement – physical examination is possible with video visits (albeit limited) and many non-verbal communication cues can be lost through telephone only assessment Methods: - Was “specialty” based on provider or diagnosis? While described in the discussion, would be helpful to be more explicit in the methods. - Please specify exactly how calendar time was determined. It appears it was considered categorically based on Table 4, but what are the exact definitions? Results: - p-values are redundant and not required if presenting 95% CI - Line 163 – what were these adjusted for? Do all tables represent adjusted odds ratios? - Table 2 - Would consider using another specialty as a referent as general has one of the smaller n, resulting in increased potential error in OR - Table 4 – would also give baseline characteristics of “time period” to understand this relationship better. Discussion: - Throughout, statements are made based on the results without discussing the comparand population, which can mislead the reader about the conclusions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-20375R1Socioeconomic disparities in telemedicine utilization among surgical patients during COVID-19PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lattimore, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 31 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Jingjing Qian Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The authors properly addressed majority of the comments provided. However, a few additional edits need to be made to ensure accuracy of results reporting and conclusion drawing. 1. Abstract: page 2, Conclusions. Based on your findings, the current conclusions are not appropriately supported, because the significance of DCI (table 2) and female (table 4) came from two different models with different comparison groups. Please consider to use the revised Conclusions "During the first 3 months of the COVID-19 pandemic, Telemedicine was more likely used by females patients and those without government or commercial insurance compared to patients who used in-person visits. Interventions using telemedicine to improve health care access might consider such differences in utilization." Given this change, I suggest the authors to remove "socioeconomic" in their title. 2. Discussion, page 14, line 227-229: please consider revising this sentence to "Overall, telemedicine was more likely utilized by those without government or commercial insurance and women." 3. Limitations, page 19. The authors only had access to less than 3 months of data after the COVID-19 outbreak, from March 17, 2020 to May 31, 2020. Please add a limitation of the early observation of the association based on the short period availability of data, which might be different from later into the pandemic. 4. Conclusion, page 19, line 347. Please consider to change the sentence to "this study found that patient factors influence telemedicine utilization." [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Disparities in telemedicine utilization among surgical patients during COVID-19 PONE-D-21-20375R2 Dear Dr. Lattimore, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jingjing Qian Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks for making the suggested editorial edits. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-20375R2 Disparities in telemedicine utilization among surgical patients during COVID-19 Dear Dr. Lattimore: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jingjing Qian Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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