Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09538 Health risk behaviours among people with severe mental ill health during the COVID-19 pandemic: analysis of linked cohort data PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Peckham, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that you refer to Table 1 and 7 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Introduction References supporting the claim that people with SMI are at increased risk during a pandemic are not provided; while this statement has face validity, the authors should provide literature supporting this claim, even if it is only through referencing similar situations. Methods The data appear to rely solely on self-report of health behaviors; it is not clear whether these reports reflect actual behavior (historically, for example, self-reports about consumption of produce poorly reflect actual consumption). Better description of the OWLS subcohort is needed; current description does not meet research checklist guidelines (see Equator Network for details). Authors do not fully describe the questions in the survey instrument: no supplement with these details was included in the manuscript provided for review, nor was one mentioned in the text. Scaling of global health and wellbeing is rudimentary and given the potential overlap in underlying concepts, some estimation indicating whether these measures are loading together would be critical (e.g. factor analysis, SEQ). There is no indication of why a binary measure of race/ethnicity would be valid in this sample. No research supporting the decision to measure relative deprivation by postcode analysis is provided. Capitalize Poisson. 40.3% is not a majority; it is (apparently) a plurality. Critically, the specific dates used to define pre- and post-COVID periods are not provided. Results Response rate is not provided (please use standardized response rate from AAPOR or another comparable source). Race/ethnicity was proposed as a binary variable in methods but broken out by additional categories in results; this is inconsistent, and the choice of categories is not well-explained. Table 1 is difficult to read given that counts and percentages are placed in a single column; in addition, standard deviations for measures are not provided. Table 2 has similar issues, in addition, placing pre- and post-COVID variables vertically rather than horizontally makes it difficult to for the reader to assess changes. Table 4: unclear why univariate models are included at all; table formatting is challenging to read (eg CIs spread across multiple lines, significant associations not distinguished from non-significant with asterisks/bolding, spacing spreads results across multiple pages), and dependent variable is not explicitly stated. Associations between health-harming behaviors and deterioration raised questions of causality. It is unclear to what extent these behaviors would be unique to people with SMI. Discussion Comparisons in discussion suggest decreases in physical activity/increase in smoking but do not test for statistical significance, making it unclear whether these are meaningful. The sources of these claims are not linked to the results section (where the tests for significance should be reported). Links should be included as references not in the text of the manuscript. Conclusions re: the need for health services are not clearly linked to results. Data availability PLOS 1 historically requests that data underlying analysis be made available through a public repository, or, if held by an organization that limits access to data for reasons of confidentiality, for example a government agency that retains protected health information, that a detailed description of how to submit a formal data request and obtain a standardized dataset be provided, e.g. through a website with an explanation of what forms must be completed and what variables to request. The statement that data are “available upon request from the corresponding author” does not meet either standard. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting manuscript dealing with a timely topic. Overall, it is well-conducted, although the authors should address several points. Abstract -Some information on the participants features should be provided (sex, age) -There is no significant association between younger and an increase in health-risk behaviours since the IC comprises 1. This is not worth mentioning here. Introduction -It is mainly well-conducted, but I think that you should mention more relevant studies to support your argument. For instance, since the pandemic has affected health-risk behaviours in general population, this might be exacerbated in people with mental illness. Also, as a consequence of a lack of physical activity, mental health might be deteriorated https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32581985/ https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32793013/ -An initial hypothesis based on your rationale should be provided Methods -Could you provide more information on your sampling framework. It seems as if you have been selecting individuals by those mentioned criteria, but that is not sampling. -According to the procedure, only those who accepted were included in the study, thus there is a participation rate, I guess. -Were the questions to assess health-related behaviours or self-reported changes validated? -The way you explain why you use Poisson regression is too wordy. You don´t need to explain your prior plans -Why did you select such covariates? -Did you have missing values? Results -When you report decimals in your Tables, you should stick to always the same number of those -Table 4 needs to report the confounders you adjusted your models Discussion -Your study has three clear bias that should be mentioned: recall bias, selection bias (not real sampling), and causal bias, since your design does not allow to reach causes Conclusion -It is the first time I see citations in a Conclusion ********** 6. 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Health risk behaviours among people with severe mental ill health during the COVID-19 pandemic: analysis of linked cohort data PONE-D-21-09538R1 Dear Dr. Peckham, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jagdish Khubchandani Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for the revisions and clarifications. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-09538R1 Health risk behaviours among people with severe mental ill health during the COVID-19 pandemic: analysis of linked cohort data Dear Dr. Peckham: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jagdish Khubchandani Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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