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PONE-D-20-39877 What is the psychological mindset that mediates the relationship between socioeconomic status and symptoms of depression? PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Velten, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by March 31, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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For example: “Caucasian” should be changed to “white” or “of [Western] European descent” (as appropriate). 5) Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. 6) We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: - https://link.springer.com/chapter/10.1007%2F978-3-319-72066-1_2 - https://eric.ed.gov/?id=EJ836788 - https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/10.1177/2158244015621113 - https://bmcpublichealth.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s12889-018-5526-2/ In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, I consider your work to be rather positive, although the fact that the manuscript presents several studies is unprecedented for me. On the other hand, this fact can also be a strength of the manuscript. The following text provides recommendations and comments divided into several homogeneous parts, which are focused on individual sections of the manuscript. TITLE, ABSTRACT, KEYWORDS When reading the title, it seems that the content of the manuscript is focused on a different topic than it actually is. In other words, the title does not reflect the content. The added value of the research is the validation of the tool. In my opinion, it would be appropriate to mention this fact in the title as well. If possible, please do not formulate the title in the form of a question. In the abstract, there is still potential and space to present the added value of the study as a whole. You can also highlight who will benefit from the presented findings and what research gap has been filled by your study. Please, indicate the basic characteristics of the research sample (country, sample size). The keywords should include the fact that your research focuses on validation, as well as the tools you have used. INTRODUCTION I have no serious comments on this section. I appreciate the quality of the authors' work they have done. I would like to note that, for example, alcohol consumption has a significant effect on the relationships examined in this study. In this sense, the attention can be drawn to the research of the author Jurgen Rehm. Also, from a socio-economic point of view, I would recommend the following study: https://www.mdpi.com/1660-4601/17/23/8853 At the end of the theoretical section, the authors provide information about the aims of individual studies. The orientation in the study as a whole would be facilitated, if the authors also provided the structure of the study in this part. MATERIALS, METHODS AND RESULTS I would like to apologize to the authors in advance for any criticism, but from my point of view, the section with methodology and results contains several shortcomings that I hope the authors will address or explain. I would suggest the authors to summarize the methodological specifications of all four studies into one whole. The current form is confusing and partial methodological information appears throughout the study, which seems chaotic. In the individual surveys, it is necessary to define the characteristics of the research samples through their identification variables (gender, social status, education, marital status, etc.). It could be better to present the characteristics of the research samples in tables, it would be clearer (ideally all four studies in one table). I am also concerned about the fact that the individual data are in a relatively large time lapse, while the oldest data seems too old to me. But the authors can no longer do anything about it. I accept that the manuscript is divided into parts according to the presented studies, but I am not sure if this is the most appropriate solution. For example, the aims appear in duplicate, which seemed chaotic to me. When providing the ethics committee, please state its number. I am aware of the fact that certain statistical procedures are currently used and accepted in various scientific fields, although their use is not always the most appropriate. The parametric correlation coefficient of Pearson's r is not very suitable in this case. A more suitable option would be the use of Kendall's or Spearman's correlation coefficient. Also, the rate of correlation is relatively low, please provide an author's interpretation of this result. Given the number of observations, I would suggest considering the use of the bootstrap method. In order not to repeat myself, please reconsider the use of the statistical methods or provide information that the assumptions for the application of the tests have been met. Honestly, I usually see different thresholds for the reliability indices of the data structure than those you have declared (especially for SRMR). According to the thresholds I consider relevant (SRMR < 0.05 (0.08), RMSEA < 0.06 (0.08)), your results would be questionable. Please provide an interpretation of statistical significance after Table 2. The results would be clearer and better understood if the outputs of the descriptive analyses were presented in tables. In my opinion, it could be beneficial to enrich the study in the form of the descriptive analysis that would include a classification of the identifying characteristics of the research sample (e.g. gender; SES, etc.). I would appreciate a greater scope for interpreting the revealed results. DISCUSSION AND CONCLUSION Please be more specific when comparing your results with the results of other authors. I also recommend enriching them and discussing more. I suggest to the authors that they be more careful when interpreting the "strength" of their outputs. The implications are presented very narrowly. Although I agree with the statements, it would be appropriate to enrich this text with other approaches. For example: What is the attitude of the gestalt therapy, adjuvant therapy with antidepressants? Can there be a trend to expand the scale of the therapeutic repertory to different socio-demographic groups? Or it is necessary to focus on one approach, e.g. CBT? I appreciate the conscientiously prepared limitations of the research. I believe that the comments and recommendations will help to improve your manuscript. I keep my fingers crossed for the next process. Reviewer #2: The manuscript deals with a highly relevant issue regarding one of the main antecedents of depression: socioeconomic status (SES). Authors propose that selected items from different scales (measuring constructs related to SES) can compose a new scale. In turn, this composed new scale is proposed to the “psychological mindset” precursor of depression. Four studies were conducted to reach the main objectives: (a) identify the psychological mindset of individuals from low SES-groups and (b) determine if this mindset mediates the association between SES and depression. I consider studies of this type relevant as when we do research linking SES to outcomes, SES is only a proxy of being comparatively not so good than other community members. To better understand what mediates the relationship SES-Health outcomes is crucial to target preventative actions and interventions. Study 1 objective was to identify the items from 5 self-reported measures (of life satisfaction, optimism-pessimism, resilience, subjective experiences or anticipated support from the social network, and subjective happiness) with stronger correlations with a subjective-SES question. Selected items were 10 (r range = .28 to .12) from four of the measures. Some issues needing further clarification and that may improve the manuscript: - Approach to construct definition: why only the five constructs were considered first to creat S-scale? Just from availability from previous surveys? - In the selection of the best 10 items: why ten in total? Why max. of three per scale? There were “good” items not selected because of these criteria? There were “bad” items included to complete 10? What does it mean that some scales provide three while other constructs provide none? I found the rationale for item selection vague. - Most correlations are low (below .20). What implications does it have for item selection in the S-scale? - Ethics: Do authors have/require authorization from original authors to use items from their scales in a new scale? Please discuss this and provide documentation if necessary. Study 2 was designed to determine if the selected items discriminate well low and high-SES individuals (measured with a composite of objective measures) and test a mediation model (SES – S-scale scores – Depressive Symptoms). Results show that five SES-groups (defined by authors) differ in scores from the S-scale with small-to-large effect sizes. Furthermore, the S-scale scores mediated the effect of SES on depressive symptoms Some issues needing further clarification and that may improve the manuscript: - Mediation: the direction of the effects: why SES could not be the antecedent of psychological mindset? - How was the sampling design? It is representative of the German population? How was data collected? More details would be valuable. - Incremental validity: S-scale score is better mediator over and above the original measures (four constructs represented in the S-scale)? - Why do authors not do psychometrics using this large sample? Study 3 repeats objectives of study 2, with changes in sampling (now are students) and the measure of SES (now a self-reported retrospective measure). Depression was assessed at two-time points, which configures a highlight of the manuscript. Results show that SES was indirectly related to depressive symptoms through the psychological mindset, relevantly controlling for depression at baseline. The authors conclude that “individuals with a more negative mindset may be at risk for a deterioration of depressive symptoms” (lines 399-400). Some issues needing further clarification and that may improve the manuscript: - S-Scales showed SES differences based on quartiles: why quartiles are used now, and previously (S2) five categories created by researchers were used (instead of quartiles o quintiles)? - Why were no controls on SES at T2 performed (i.e.: changes occurring to students living conditions that may alter past recollection)? Study 4 was designed to replicate study 2 and perform psychometric exercises (validation), including dimensionality, convergent, and discriminant validity. Author claim for a one-factor solution. Some issues needing further clarification and that may improve the manuscript: - The rationale for selecting measures for convergent and discriminant validity seems short. - Why was unidimensionality set to be confirmed? There are no other possible models (e.g.: two-dimensions) to compare? Why was unidimensionality only checked here? Some exploratory analyses were performed? - A test of measurement invariance between USA-Germany seems to be needed in this study, especially to draw comparisons between countries. - Most scholars would consider RMSEA and to some extent, SRMR values, below optimal. Please offer rationale about cut-off scores used on model fit. TLI should be reported. - Why were errors between the same original measure allowed to correlate? Does it make theoretical sense? Was that determined in advance? Is it based on modification indices? - I could not find Item loadings from the CFA nor errors. Overall comments: - The SES-measurement approach varies across studies but there is no overarching rationale about measurement issues regarding different methods. Moreover, arbitrary thresholds are used in different study, jeopardizing the credibility of results. - Validation plan: psychometric and measurement issues are not well address (content validity, dimensionality, association with other variables). I suggest this be done across studies. - Especially relevant in this case is incremental validity as items from other measures and constructs are being used. - Concerning reliability, only internal consistency was provided (using alpha). Omegas and other types of reliability are valuable to report when introducing a new measure. - Mediations models: justification for the direction of the effects should be more robust (e.g.: some specific mindset could make people report lower SES, and that could be the case with subjective measures, or make individuals have lower educational achievement and thus, less paid jobs). - Some possible confounding variables traditionally studied in depression (also associated with SES) have not been analysed (such as chronic physical/health conditions, physical activity, loneliness, stress, access to healthcare). To control these variables is highly revelant when diverse samples in terms of (e.g.) age (18-90 y.o.), place of residency, are being used –since they are affected differentially from these factors. Please discuss implications. - Also, the manuscript may benefit from a more in-depth literature review. For instance, Pepper and Nettle (2017) proposed the behavioral constellation of deprivation, identifying a set of behaviors observed in low-SES individuals, mostly associated with feelings of less personal control and more present-orientation. To some extent, those constructs should be part of the proposed initial pool of items the S-scale was drew from, and eventually would be desirable to be included in the validity plan, more concretely in the incremental validity plan. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-39877R1 Psychometric properties of the S-Scale: Assessing a psychological mindset that mediates the relationship between socioeconomic status and depression. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Velten, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by July 20, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, The issue analysed in the presented paper is clearly important from a social point of view and attractive for research. I perceived the quality of the study at the first reading, but certain aspects worried me in terms of methodology and discussion. At this point, I would like to appreciate the work on improving the study. The manuscript was revised to a high standard and all comments were incorporated or explained. I would like to write that the current version is methodologically correct and the discussion has been reworked to the required level. The clarity of the study also increased. I thank the authors for accepting and incorporating the comments and I wish them all the best. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-39877R2 Psychometric properties of the S-Scale: Assessing a psychological mindset that mediates the relationship between socioeconomic status and depression. Dear Dr. Velten: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Stephan Doering Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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