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| Original SubmissionJune 11, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-19230 Association of pre-existing comorbidities with mortality and disease severity among 167,500 individuals with COVID-19 in Canada: a population-based cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is an important and well-written report to help set action priorities to mitigate COVID-19 consequences. It is one of the few population based cohort analysis. The authors use multiple health administrative databases covering the Ontario population to identify SARS-CoV-2 positive cases, build a retrospective cohort of SARS-CoV-2 infected patients, and ascertain all-cause mortality and hospitalization within 30 days post-test. The period they cover (January to December 2020) is largely prior to vaccination availability. Few issues to be addressed: 1. Create a specific ethics consideration subsection 2. The definition of severity here is a composite of hospitalization or death within 30 days. This is problematic as one of the reviewers point out. Please discuss this in the limitations. 3. Statistical analysis subsection: Lines 177 and 178, it is written that no model including the three comorbidity-related variables (whether having any comorbidity, the number of comorbidities, and types of comorbidity) was created due to potential colinearity. However, table 2 includes such kind of model. Can you clarify this? 4. Statistical analysis subsection: line 187. There is confusion between “R” and “R Studio”. Can you please correct to cite R. 5. Line 202 put the age unit. 6. Table 1 - Add a row to put totals rather than putting them on the header. In this row you can, for example, put 167500 (100) which will alert that percentages are in columns 7. Table 2 - Add a row for total participants in the analysis in each column. And make sure the rows are well aligned (for example, the number of comorbidities is quite hard to follow). 8. Figure 2 - please label the X-axis to say “HR” or “Hazard-ratio” 9. Figure 3 - it would be better to use on X-axis multiples of 7 (0, 7, 14, 21, 28) and 30 days because most of the descriptions use weeks. This is a suggestion. In fact, this figure suggests different hazards pre-day 15 compared to post-day 15. Did you assess for time-varying coefficients in this analysis? And did you assess the proportionality assumption? 10 . Figure 4 - This plot is based on logistic regression, right? So change the “HR” to “OR”. And label the X-axis to mean either “Odds ratio” or “OR”. Also, change the footnote (lines 268 to 270). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper deals with an important topic. In their study, the authors have demonstrated that the risk of death among COVID-19 patients, increases with the number of co-morbidities, at all ages. The findings are not really new, but it’s important that they be documented. The study design is appropriate and the methodology appears sound. I believe there should be more discussion on potential biases, particularly information bias on the co-morbidities. These could affect the strength of the findings. Also a discussion of attributable risk of the major co-morbidities could be useful. Reviewer #2: This is a retrospective cohort study of 167,500 individuals diagnosed of COVID-19 in Ontario throughout the 12 months of 2020 which aimed to examine the associations of comorbidities with mortality and disease severity in individuals with COVID-19. The results obtained are very relevant and consistent with two previous population-based studies and added other four comorbidities (solid organ transplant, severe mental illness, hypertension and COPD) to the list of risk factors. For a better understanding of the manuscript these comments are formulated Comments: 1. The study is not really designed to measure the severity of COVID-19. The title of the manuscript should not contain the words “disease severity” since the secondary outcome in the study do not include the usual items of “disease severity” (such as requirement of non-invasive ventilation, mechanical ventilation or UCI admission) and instead it only includes hospitalization which is not a criterion of severity by itself. For the same reason, the terms "disease severity" should not be used throughout the text of the manuscript. 2. Methods. The ICES database did not record socio-demographic data regarding ethnicity, education, and individual level income, which were found to be associated with COVID-19 outcomes in several studies. However, the manuscript says "we employed Cox proportional hazards regression models and logistic regression models to adjust for demographic, socio-economic variables…” This apparent contradiction should be clarified and corrected 3. The definition of comorbidities that are risks factors for mortality should be better specified. For example, how the presence of “severe mental illness” , “human immunodeficiency virus infection” , “cancer” or “rheumatoid arthritis” have been defined. In HIV patients it is very important to know whether or not they are in virological remission and immune recovery. It is also necessary to know whether cancer patients have a disseminated disease or are in partial or complete remission, or whether or not patients with rheumatoid arthritis are receiving corticosteroids or immunosuppressive medications. 4. In the Discussion, lines 338-340, the sentence “Asthma, HIV, and rheumatoid arthritis were significantly associated with severity but not deaths, indicating the three conditions were more related to COVID-19 hospitalization” should be changed . 5. In conclusion paragragh, the sentence: “the number of comorbidities was a strong risk factor for deaths and severe outcomes among the younger COVID-19 individuals” should be changed since severity outcomes were not actually measured 6. Also, in the conclusion paragraph, the sentence “Findings of our study suggests that in addition of prioritizing by age, vaccination priority groups should include younger population with multiple comorbidities” must be modified because it is an interpretation that is not derived directly from the results of the study 7. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Association of pre-existing comorbidities with mortality and disease severity among 167,500 individuals with COVID-19 in Canada: a population-based cohort study PONE-D-21-19230R1 Dear Dr. Wei, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Abstract: No comments Author’s summary: - No limitation is included here. Please add this. - Line 91 - multivariate regression. I would suggest changing this to “multiple regression” or “multivariable regression” Background: No comments Methods: - A minor issue is that the income variable has the issue the quintile definition is specific to each dissemination area. So two different dissemination areas would be seen the same. - Line 231 - change the “multivariate analyses” to “multiple regression analyses” or “multivariable regression analyses”. - Thank you for adding the STROBE statement form. Results: - Table 1 - a) please add a footnote to alert the reader that in the rows of totals the percentages are within the row, whereas for the rest of the table the percentages are in columns; b) state how the p-values were computed - Lines 272, 296, 306, 330 change the “multivariate” to “multivariable”. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All the comments in the review have been addressed. The paper reads well and the limitations of the study have been clarified. Reviewer #2: The key points raised have been solved. Therefore the study indicates that the number of comorbidities was a strong risk factor for deaths and severe outcomes among the younger COVID-19 patients ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-19230R1 Association of pre-existing comorbidities with mortality and disease severity among 167,500 individuals with COVID-19 in Canada: a population-based cohort study Dear Dr. Wei: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Orvalho Augusto Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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