Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 28, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-27048 Hyperendemicity of Cysticercosis in Madagascar: Novel insights from school children population-based seroprevalence study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carod, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The high prevalence of cysticercosis in school children in Madagascar is an interesting finding but must be properly validated. The reviewers recommend reconsideration of the manuscript after major revision and I invite you to address all the recommendations below. I concur with the reviewers that the authors did not present a manuscript that is technically sound and that the data presented do not support the conclusions reached. The authors must clarify how the test was validated and provide a detailed description of the appropriate controls used. It is very important to explain how the samples were manipulated and stored and specify where were the tests performed. Moreover, details on the timelines and sampling are needed. I recommend the authors to reassess the statistical analysis and properly backup their conclusions as recommended by the reviewers. Please discuss your findings in relation to known risk factors, such as tapeworm carriers, which have been shown to be crucial in the transmission of cysticercosis. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 14 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: "The author(s) received no specific funding for this work" Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes a serological survey of school children in 7 major cities of Madagascar for the presence of circulating antigen being indicative of infection with viable cysticerci of Taenia solium. They found that up to 37% of the children were positive, with an average prevalence of 27%. The authors point out that this is the highest prevalence described for anywhere in the world, after one village in DRC where a seroprevalence of 21% was recorded. The data in the paper give no confidence that the serological results are valid. The claimed level of active infection is either a disaster of extraordinary proportions for the school children of Madagascar, or an indication that the serology was faulty. We are provided with no data whatsoever about how or where the serology was performed. Two references are given as the serological methodology, published by the last author. Was the serology performed in in Madagascar or in Belgium in the senior author’s laboratory? How can we know the performance characteristics of the assay outside the senior author’s laboratory if the tests were undertaken in Madagascar? What control samples were tested from known cases of cysticercosis and, more importantly, from persons who have no history of cysticercosis? Did the authors source any negative controls (at least persons with no history of symptoms suggestive of being infected with T. solium) from the Malagasy population, such as members of the project team? In the complete absence of any information to support the claimed extraordinarily high prevalence of cysticercosis in Malagasy children, and the complete absence of any information about the negative human controls used when the tests were performed, or where the tests were undertaken, the paper conclusions cannot be regarded as robust. Reviewer #2: The manuscript needs a MAJOR revision. Major comments: 1. Abstract: Should make clear that the samples were from 13 years ago (assuming that is the case), so the conclusion might not be valid, unless they speculate that risk factors haven’t changed. 2. Study design is not clear, it is only a geographical description. 3. Timelines are not clear through the manuscript. When were the samples collected? When were the tests performed? 4. Analytical procedures: 4a. Which methods were used to develop the ELISA? 4b. Where were the reagents produced? 4c. Source of positive controls? 4d. Source of negative sera? Are they from the same population? 4e. Any positives confirmed as positives? (if tests were done after 13 years, I understand it might not have been possible, but timelines are not clear). 5. Statistical analyses: 5a. The analysis by age is not clear. Which groups were analysed? What are the results by group? 5b. Why try to relate prevalence to altitude and rainfall, and not to the well-known and necessary risk factors such as presence of backyard pigs and open defecation? 6. Results: Results by age are not clear. 7. Conclusion: 7a. If the serum is indeed from 2007, 13 years later, many epileptic cases would have been detected. Is this the case? What is the rate of epilepsy? 8. Ethics: need to justify why the children were not followed-up as NCC is potentially very dangerous (I assume it is because of timings, but as they are not specified, it is not clear) Minor comments: 9. Line 54: Use original reference for 30% seizure disorders (Ndimubanzi et al, 2010) 10. Line 56: Andean area of South America is not correct (Argentina is not endemic for example). Better change to areas of South America. 11. Figure 1: There is no legend to interpret the colours. The dark blue is difficult to read. What does it mean 237 in the title? 12. Table 1: Only last row is Ag prevalence. Title is not appropriate. Delete % sign from first results column. 13. Editing – in several places spaces before brackets are missing. Reviewer #3: This is a very interesting manuscript showing that cysticercosis is infecting children at a very high prevalence in urban areas of Madagascar. The authors should however consider the following to improve it 1) the authors should follow the STROBE guidelines for reporting observational studies in epidemiology. 2) the sampling frame and study sites are not clearly described; there is a mismatch between the text and Fig1, and Fig1 title is unclear. How many sites in the highlands? Why more than 2 sites in the other areas? 3) given the high prevalence of infeciton, a log-binomial model would be more appropriate here and make interpretation of ratios more straightforward. It is also unclear if the biotype was included as a level in the hierarchical model or as a variable (only 2 levels are mentioned in the description). Each level used in the cluster sampling should be included in the multi-level model. it is unclear if this was done or not. 4) More details on sampling of households and children within each town (is town=site?) are needed. At this point, it is unclear if towns were randomly selected and how children within town were selected. This could introduce selection bias. 5) It seems very odd for a child aged 3 years old to be considered as school aged. Do 3-year olds go to school in Madagascar? 6) Denominators and 95%CI should be reported in Table 1 for ease of reading and interpretation 7) Why was the age dichotomized and was effect modification evaluated? Were there any other confounders assessed? SES for one could be an important confounder of the impact of even the environmental factors. General sanitation even at the site level is also important to adjust for, it may be confounding the association with environmental factors. What about ethnicity? There needs to be a Table of univariate analyses. Following the STROBE guidelines would help in this regard. 8) a more solid discussion of the impact of the environmental factors is needed with strenghts and limitations 9) There needs to a paragraph on limitations Specific comments Line 60-61: please provide a range of prevalence found with AgELISA in SSA (like what is done for Ab). There is also a relatively recent systematic review of prev of HCC in SSA which could be used here (Coral Almeida 2015), Could there be more than 1 child per household? If so, was this considered in the analyses? Study design: the DATES of the survey most be reported Table 2 and related analyses: re-run the analyses with the Equatorial region as a reference for easier interpretation. Lines 175-176: this is not quite correct. The EITB performs a lot better in this situation, though not perfect. Also, the AgELISA also performs poorly when there is only one NCC cyst, so this argument is incorrect the way it is stated here. Lines 206-209: the big difference here is that most other studies were conducted in adults where the effect gender is often modified by age and is an indirect measure of behavior. This should be noted here. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-27048R1 Hyperendemicity of Cysticercosis in Madagascar: Novel insights from a school children population-based antigen prevalence study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Carod, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I agree with reviewer # 5 the authors need to discuss the limitations of the study and critically discuss the obtained data. The main limitation is the lack of clinical data and risk factors associated with cysticercosis. This concern was raised in the first peer review and needs to be properly discussed as suggested in the second revision. The authors should also address the possibility of the transient Ts antigen detection and discuss it accordingly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Fela Mendlovic, MSc, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: Dear Author: Your updated the manuscript with preview reviewers suggestions. Is a great research, congratulations. Reviewer #5: The paper reports the results of a study carried out in Madagascar to evaluate the prevalence of Taenia solium circulating antigen (Ts-antigen) in school age-children of seven major cities. The presence of Ts-antigen is considered indicative of infection with viable cysticerci of Taenia solium, although it may be a transient phenomenon with possible sero-reversion, hence not necessary established infection. The prevalence of Ts-Ag was 27%, with percentage up to 37% in some children groups. The observed Ts-Ag prevalence rate exceeds all antigen prevalence rates described worldwide, after one village in DRC where a seroprevalence of 21% was recorded. The obtained results are of some interest but should be presented evidencing the limitations of the study and critically reviewing obtained data. The study was conducted on serum samples collected in a malaria survey in 2007. Information on risk factors for cysticercosis (e.g presence of backyard pigs and open defecation) was not collected. No clinical data related to cysticercosis (epilepsia) are available neither for tested subjects nor local population. No data are available about teniosis. The authors explored the potential influence of environmental characteristics, altitude, rainfall and bioclimatic patterns. The first question/doubt could be about the performance of the test, mainly its specificity, but also about the correct procedures of an in-house test. The authors affirm that tests were done by well-trained laboratory technicians of Pasteur Institute (Madagascar) by using reagents provided by the Institute of Tropical Medicine of Antwerp, where the test was developed and validated. Negative and positive controls were included and the procedures were correctly followed. The results of each plate were sent to ITM for quality control. Based on this, results seem to be robust. The main limitations of the study are the lack of information about risk factors for cysticercosis and clinical data (mainly epilepsia) at the moment of enrollment (2007) and in subsequent years, as well as data on teniosis. It would be interesting to address this gap through other research activities in the studied areas. If data were already available, although preliminary, they could be mentioned in the paper. Moreover, it is known that the presence of cysticercal circulating antigen may be short-live and sero-reversion is a common phenomenon. The authors mention this point in the final part of the discussion citing the paper of Mwape et al (ref 37). I suggest to read carefully the paper of Mwape et al reporting the results of a longitudinal study in Zambia with blood sampled three times, with a 6-month interval and analyzed for the presence of cysticercal circulating antigens and specific antibodies. Mwape et al paper should inspire the authors to present their results more critically and to revise the discussion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: Yes: LMMV Reviewer #5: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Hyperendemicity of Cysticercosis in Madagascar: Novel insights from a school children population-based antigen prevalence study PONE-D-20-27048R2 Dear Dr. Carod, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. Please check the word spacing and some of the verb tenses that are incorrect. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Fela Mendlovic, MSc, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #5: No |
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