Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 14, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-39307 Social Distancing in America Understanding Long-term Adherence to COVID-19 Mitigation Recommendations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reinders Folmer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper presents findings from three cross-sectional samples of US residents in May, June and July of 2020 to determine factors that are related to social distancing behavior during and after the lockdown in many states in the US. The surveys covered a great deal of potential influences on that behavior and seeing how those factors changed in their relations with social distancing behavior is interesting and informative. I do have some suggestions to make the paper easier to digest, because there are so many analyses, one is likely to get lost in all of the approaches taken. In regard to the main analysis, I don’t see why this is divided into two separate models as shown in Tables 4 and 5. The model in Table 5 seems quite different from the one in Table 4 and I didn’t understand why the variables in Table 4 were treated differently from the ones in Table 5. Why can’t all of this be done in one model? In addition, it would be valuable to conduct the analyses in a more hierarchical manner, so that demographic and other personal characteristics were entered first and the various other types of variables were entered in blocks as you have done in Table 5. One can then see how various beliefs might be associated with the variables entered first, such as political ideology. As you note, this characteristic was not significant in the model when all variables were entered simultaneously, but it was when it was entered before a lot of the other beliefs. Another way to handle this is to present a table with all of the variables tested for their univariate relationship with social distancing. But this would not allow one to see how relations change as new variables are added to the model. I also am puzzled as to why a variable like trust in science or media is treated like a control variable. These are very important considerations in whether someone will adhere to government recommendations. I would place them together with other beliefs such as those regarding respect for the law. I am also a bit puzzled by the measure of ability to practice social distancing. It seems to be very similar to the actual dependent variable, and so controlling for it seems to be redundant with the outcome. If you want to use it, I would enter it later to see how it changes the earlier associations. Given that this is a study of the US, it would also be helpful to provide a breakdown of the geographic distribution of the sample. One could use the four census divisions as a way to do that. These divisions are also of interest because there was considerable variation in compliance with social distancing recommendations in different parts of the US. This could go into the first set of predictors in a hierarchical model. I think the national representativeness of the sample should be downplayed in the description of it in the Method. This is basically a convenience sample that was recruited with demographic targets aimed to be representative of the US. But that is not necessarily probability-based, and so the conclusions that one can draw must be tempered to a degree. I am also puzzled by the definition of situational variables. I don’t see how impulsivity is situational. This is a personality disposition that is relatively stable. Negative emotions are not necessarily situational, especially during a crisis like a pandemic. Knowledge and understanding of measures are important but they are no more situational than the perceived health threat, punishment severity, or many of the other variables in your model. Can you find a better way to organize these predictors? I think the inclusion of criminology predictors is interesting. But in all honesty, I don’t think people regarded the social distancing mandates apart from the lockdowns as all that subject to sanctions. People were encouraged to maintain distance, but very few were arrested. I think the abstract needs some work. No one will understand what you mean by motivational versus situational influences. The sentence that says: “as the core variables that sustain can change…” needs attention. Reviewer #2: The research questions are clearly defined in the abstract and introduction, and are, of course, both timely and relevant. The questions and topic are interesting, especially given the protracted nature of the current pandemic, and the possibility of future pandemics. The paper is well written and easy to read. Variables are defined and explained in terms of examples nicely. In addition, the paper is well laid out and tables/figures are clear and easy to read; they aid in understanding the data and information being presented. I found it interesting that the introduction to the paper specifically highlighted that pandemic measures such as lockdowns were eased in Southern and Midwestern parts of the US beginning in April. Given that some states, especially in the east, had much longer lockdown periods or strict pandemic rules, would location of participants not have perhaps played a role in some of the survey responses and attitudes? Additionally, there is some demographic information, such as age, ethnicity, or field of employment that may have large impacts on survey responses. For example, the study took into account those who worked directly with COVID patients/care, but other sectors of employment (ie/ the essential workers) may have also held different attitudes which may have impacted responses as well. Also, the authors mention that the study sample is nationally representative, but then highlight that that is in terms of only sex (Male, Female, Binary) or Age. Again, is the study representative in terms of location (eg/ higher populated states, areas of the country) or ethnicity? Of course, it is impossible to take every variable into account, but mention of some of these things (eg/ why they were included or excluded) might be beneficial. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-39307R1 Social Distancing in America: Understanding Long-term Adherence to COVID-19 Mitigation Recommendations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reinders Folmer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. The reviewers have recommended publication, but also suggested a couple of minor additions that would help improve the quality of your research. Mainly, rather than as a linear predictor, presenting the findings for age by the typical categories used for this variable. In addition, this variable may have nonlinearities that would be interesting to investigate. Further, whilst you note that the contrast between essential and non-essential work is significant; however, your study did not measure this distinction. Thus, it would be a good idea to include this in your Discussion as a research implication. Therefore, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Mahmoud, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the careful revisions to the suggestions posed after the first submission. If I had one more suggestion, it would be to display the results for age by the typical categories used for this variable rather than as a linear predictor. There may be nonlinearities in this variable that would be interesting to see. But that is only a suggestion. Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing the comments made by both reviewers. The abstract is much more clear and the revised classification of the predictors, as well as the explanations for them, was well done. One small suggestion - you mention that the distinction between essential and nonessential work is important, but was not measured in your study. Perhaps it would be prudent to add this to your Discussion, as a direction or suggestion for future research. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dan Romer Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Social Distancing in America: Understanding Long-term Adherence to COVID-19 Mitigation Recommendations PONE-D-20-39307R2 Dear Dr. Reinders Folmer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Wen-Jun Tu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-39307R2 Social Distancing in America: Understanding Long-term Adherence to COVID-19 Mitigation Recommendations Dear Dr. Reinders Folmer: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Wen-Jun Tu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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