Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 12, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-19326 Immunohistochemical comparison of three primary programmed death-ligand 1 (PD-L1) antibodies in triple-negative breast cancer PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ishida, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 04 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript Yoshikawa et al, compare the immunohistochemical staining of different 3 primary PD-L1 antibodies in TNBC.The study shows that the 73-10 antibody had the highest positivity rate, although the other 2 antibodies did show high concordance, regardless of the age of the ample or the diameter of the tumor. A few comments on the study: 1-In the figures 1-3, showing the IHC staining, if possible would like to see co-staining with a marker showing that these are indeed immune cells(e.g CD20, CD3), or whichever marker they choose. 2-Most of the tumors in the study are low grade, for the pathological grading, the authors however do not comment much on that or provide a comparison in the high grade vs the low grade tumors, although this may effect treatment/ prognosis. Reviewer #2: The present paper deals with concordance of PDL1 expression in TNBCs by comparing three different antibodies, including the SP142 assay. The topic is of some interest, however the study would benefit from major amendments as follows: 1) the paper is a bit defensive, the authors explain to readers why the paper is original even though they used a cohort where they analyzed other markers. This is not relevant to the present study and should be taken out 2) the main limitations are the number of cases analyzed and the use of TMAs. This should be the main limitations to be discussed. The use of TMAs to perform the IC scoring is questionable, given that the tumor area should be taken into account, however for the specific aim of this study (that is the comparison on the same samples of three different antibodies) it could be acceptable, provided that the authors explain this and justify it this way. This may avoid creating confusion among readers that TMAs are an ideal type of sample to assess PDL1 in TNBCs, at least for atezolizumab indication, which is the one currently approved for metastatic TNBC patients. 3) for SP142 please use the wording “assay” rather than antibody 4) the first part of the results describing the cohort should only be briefly mentioned with reference to the table, otherwise is redundant 5) given recent results of immunotherapy efficacy on early TNBC patients (virtual ESMO plenary) regardless of PDL1 expression , this paper should focus the impact of the results on the metastatic TNBC patient population, possible candidates to atezo +chemo, given also that the comparison is with respect to SP142 6) observation linked to to the above comment: the paper would be more informative is the comparison could be made also with the 22C3 assay 7) have the authors observed expression in the tumor cells with any of the assays used? Please clarify. ********** 6. 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Immunohistochemical comparison of three programmed death-ligand 1 (PD-L1) assays in triple-negative breast cancer. PONE-D-21-19326R1 Dear Dr. Ishida, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Semir Vranic, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors addressed all the comments by the reviewers and myself and the manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-19326R1 Immunohistochemical comparison of three programmed death-ligand 1 (PD-L1) assays in triple-negative breast cancer Dear Dr. Ishida: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Semir Vranic Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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