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PONE-D-20-32959 To strike or not to strike? An investigation of the determinants of strike participation at the Fridays for Future climate strikes in Switzerland PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cologna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Please accept my apologies for the delay in getting our decision to you. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Whilst all three reviewers acknowledged the importance of the topic and area described in your manuscript, all three also highlighted a number of substantial issues that should be addressed if the manuscript is to be further considered for publication. In particular, please note the comments made in relation to the theoretical underpinnings of the study made by all three reviewers. Please also be sure to address the comments made in relation to your measurement tools and construct variables. If you wish to revise your manuscript in response to the reviewer comments and resubmit, I would be happy to consider a substantially revised version. Thanks for your submission. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: One aim of the paper is to investigate the motives of past and intended future participation in the Friday for Future climate strikes among a sample (N = 638) of Swiss university students. The authors report that response efficacy, protest enjoyment, the perceived success of the strikes, trust in climate scientists, low trust in governments to act on climate change, female gender, and left-wing political orientation predicted strike participation, while only protest enjoyment, perceived success of the strikes and political orientation predicted intentions to join future strikes. The study’s second aim is to research the question whether there is a discrepancy between students’ participation in such collective actions like strikes and their own personal behavior. The study findings counter such accusations: Compared with the non striking students, the striking students declare eating less meat per week, having flown less in the past two years, and having sought to offset the CO2 emissions from their flights, however, there are no difference in long-haul flights. In the discussion section the authors critically discuss methodological problems of their research design and draw conclusion for future research. Without question the paper targets an issue of great interest for the general public as well as social scientists. The paper is written in a good structured, readable way. The results concerning the personal behavior of the strike participants are convincing, however, are based on self-reported behavior, which may be biased to participants’ desire to be consistent with the behavior made salient by the survey (pro-environmental behavior). For me the main weakness of the paper is the not convincing theoretical part: In general the authors seems to follow a rational choice approach (Opp, Finkel), however, they also frequently refer to the social identity approach of collective behavior (e.g. Van Zomeren). The authors do not reflect the relation between these rather different theories: Whereas rational choice models stress the role of personal benefits as central determinants of collective action and stress the social dilemma nature of collective action participation (discrepancy between self- and collective interests), the social identity do not see such a dilemma because the activation of a social identity automatically motivates the person to act as a group member. Without systematically reflecting and integrating the assumptions underlying the two different theoretical frameworks, for me it seems rather eclectic to draw single constructs from different theoretical frameworks without clarifying their theoretical relation. From my point of view such a positivistic approach is not helpful for systematical theory development within the field of collective action. On the empirical level the used construct measure reflect the paper’s weak theoretical reflection. For example the item “enjoy being part of a movement” could also be seen as a typical indicator of the social identity construct. In this case the empirical results would indicate that social identity is the main predictor of collective action participation. A result replicating the findings of dozens of studies conducted within the social identity framework (see e.g. the work of van Zomeren). Also the discussion of the concepts of self- and response efficacy is not in line with the current theoretical discussion, I would recommend the authors to read the work of van Zomeren on the new concept of participatory efficacy (e.g., Van Zomeren, M., Saguy, T., & Schellhaas, F. M. (2013). Believing in “making a difference” to collective efforts: Participative efficacy beliefs as a unique predictor of collective action. Group Processes & Intergroup Relations, 16(5), 618-634). Reviewer #2: This manuscript addresses a timely, interesting and still under-researched topic. The purpose and significance of the study are clearly stated in the introduction section. The authors provide sufficient information to understand the study goals and the approach followed, and a sufficient and detailed discussion is provided. Despite its potential, I believe this manuscript, at least in its current form, is not ready for publication. My major issues with it are related to the theoretical section and with some methodological limitations. I explain these issues below: 1. While the manuscript addresses some relevant literature, there is an overall trend towards selectiveness and to superficially discuss theoretical models and approaches. I believe this is misleading and a simplification in at least two ways. First, while there is some empirical evidence suggesting that young people – especially when compared to previous generations (see Maria Teresa Grasso’s work) – are more disengaged from conventional and traditional forms of political participation (e.g., voting) there is no consensus in the literature regarding other forms of participation. The myth of youth apathy has been amply discussed in the literature and it has evolved towards a more comprehensive view of the forms, patterns and levels of young people’s participation. The way previous literature is presented in this manuscript suggests a consensual view of young people as apathetic and politically disengaged, but that does not correspond to the current debates in the literature. Secondly, the manuscript also suggests a view of young people's political participation as a matter of being politically active or inactive. Such a dichotomy is again a simplification considering that previous studies have shown that even a passive stance can actually mask a latent political involvement. I strongly recommend further engagement with current debates on the field of youth participation. See for example: - Amnå, E., & Ekman, J. (2014). Standby citizens: Diverse faces of political passivity. European Political Science Review,6(2), 261–281. https://doi.org/10.1017/S175577391300009X - Cammaerts, B., Bruter, M., Banaji, S., Harrison, S., & Anstead, N. (2014). The myth of youth apathy: Young Europeans’ critical attitudes toward democratic life. American Behavioral Scientist, 58(5), 645–664. https://doi.org/10.1177/0002764213515992 - Barret, M. & B. Zani, B. (Eds.). Political and civic engagement: multidisciplinary perspectives (pp. pp. 499-512). Surrey: Routledge. - Weiss, J. (2020). What Is Youth Political Participation? Literature Review on Youth Political Participation and Political Attitudes. Front. Polit. Sci., 2020. https://doi.org/10.3389/fpos.2020.00001 - Earl, J., Maher, T. V., and Elliott, T. (2017). Youth, activism, and social movements. Sociol. Compass 11, e12465. https://doi.org/10.1111/soc4.12465 2. Despite the extensive amount of literature on the topic of young people’s participation, there is still a need for studies focusing on the motives for collective action, and participation in climate strikes do mark a shift in political engagement by young people, as argued by the authors. However, this needs to be framed more carefully, considering past and current debates within the field. 3. Still related to the literature review, it was rather surprising to see that the theoretical concepts (and model) used to design the study and the hypotheses were based on the literature on collective action. Again, there are plenty of studies on the motivations for young people’s participation that could help to design and understand the findings. In addition, there is also some confusion when discussing the collective interest model, the socio-psychological collective action model, and the dual path model (in the discussion). These models, if relevant, should be better presented. 4. The authors argued that there is only one peer-reviewed study that has been conducted on the Fridays for Future strikes (line 135). I wonder why the following literature was not considered (see below) as they all were peer-reviewed and published in 2020: - Mari Martiskainen, Stephen Axon, Benjamin K. Sovacool, Siddharth Sareen, Dylan Furszyfer Del Rio, Kayleigh Axon (2020). Contextualizing climate justice activism: Knowledge, emotions, motivations, and actions among climate strikers in six cities. Global Environmental Change. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.gloenvcha.2020.102180. - Emilsson K, Johansson H, Wennerhag M. Frame Disputes or Frame Consensus? (2020). “Environment” or “Welfare” First Amongst Climate Strike Protesters. Sustainability. 2020; 12(3):882. https://doi.org/10.3390/su12030882 - Brügger A, Gubler M, Steentjes K, Capstick SB. (2020). Social Identity and Risk Perception Explain Participation in the Swiss Youth Climate Strikes. Sustainability. 2020; 12(24):10605. https://doi.org/10.3390/su122410605 5. There is a need for a better articulation between the empirical part and the theoretical approach. The authors should provide more details for their statistical and methodological decisions. Similarly, some of the expected results need better contextualization. For example, little is said about the role of trust and protest enjoyment in the theoretical section. Both dimensions are however key in this study. Specifically, perceived enjoyment of protest and related constructs are almost absent from the literature review section, but it is then mentioned in the discussion. I suggest introducing all the theoretical constructs in the theoretical section. 6. In my opinion, there are several strong limitations with the measures used. First, most dimensions are composed of one item (e.g., trust in climate scientists, self-efficacy, response efficacy, collective efficacy). Second, the authors created their own scales (e.g., climate change concern, protest enjoyment, pro-environmental behaviour) and there is only one reference for an item (self-efficacy item). I believe this needs to be justified, because there are already validated scales for the constructs measured. Third, while developing your own scales could be acceptable, in that case more rigorous statistical procedures should have been followed. In this regard, I would recommend to (at least) present the results of the exploratory factor analysis scales such as “climate concern scale” and “protests enjoyment”. As far as I understood, both were developed by the authors. I also wonder why pro-environmental behaviours were not considered as a composite variable for the analysis. 7. There is also an overall lack of rigour when presenting the “collective efficacy” construct and also with the way efficacy is measured. While the authors recognise the limitations of their variable “collective efficacy”, there are other aspects that should be considered. For example, group efficacy, perceived efficacy of collective action and collective efficacy are different concepts and should not be used as if they mean the same thing. In addition, considering that what was measured in collective efficacy is not even related to collective action, I would suggest avoiding claiming that “the result that collective efficacy was not a predictor of participation was surprising” or that “it doesn't fit the literature”. Probably, this finding may only represent a problem with the way the variable was measured. 8. I would recommend being more cautious in the interpretation of findings considering all the mentioned methodological limitations of this study. The contributions of the study should be more clearly articulated with the findings, and in the discussion section the authors should try to avoid just merely repeating the findings. Besides, the interpretations and suggestions made in the discussion (e.g., for example regarding the role and the multiple facets of efficacy in collective action) should be better supported by previous literature. I would also be careful in providing recommendations for future studies and claiming that there is none research on the topic. For example, there are some studies on the role of positive emotions and sense of obligation in collective action that could be used to understand the findings. As such, the recommendations for future studies should at least recognise that these already exist. 9. Implications of the research – in the introduction the authors proposed to extend the literature on collective action. This should be more clearly addressed in the final section of the manuscript. 10. Some minor issues: 1) See line 143 – “As described by Finkel and Müller 10/20/2020 8:34:00 AM”; 2) Why was prosocial behaviour considered a keyword? Reviewer #3: In the manuscript entitled “To strike or not to strike? An investigation of the determinants of strike participation at the Fridays for Future climate strikes in Switzerland” a study with Fridays for Future protesters and non-protesters is reported. The manuscript taps at a timely topic. However, due to the following points I cannot recommend to publish the manuscript in its current form. The theoretical framework should be clarified. For instance, the authors refer to the social identity model of collective action and derive predictions from that model (p. 5). Then they refer to the collective interest model (p. 6 f.) and derive predictions from that model. However, it is not sufficiently clear how these models and predictions are related. The authors also report that they assess trust in scientists (p. 7) and that previous research suggests that pleasure individuals get from protesting also predicts participation (p. 8) but they do not explain how they expect these variables/processes to be linked with the proposed model. The authors introduce the distinction between emotion-focused coping and problem-focused coping, which was proposed for the context of collective action by Van Zomeren and colleagues (p. 5). However, a recent study shows that the so-called problem-focused path to collective action is mediated via emotions as well (Landmann & Rohmann, 2020). The authors may want to update their literature review including the role of positive emotions for collective action (Tausch & Becker, 2013) as well as different types of efficacy beliefs for environmental activism (Hamann & Reese, 2020). Efficacy beliefs (self-efficacy, response efficacy, collective efficacy) were assessed with one item each. The definition and assessment of self-efficacy and collective efficacy are consistent with previous research. However, the definition of response efficacy (“response efficacy refers to the belief that one’s actions to reduce a threat will be effective” p. 7) does not match with its assessment (“My actions will influence others to behave in ways that mitigate the effects of climate change” p. 9). For the assessment of protest enjoyment, participants were asked to respond to questions such as “how much they generally enjoy taking to the streets to protest” (p. 10). How could those participants who never participated in protest answer these questions? In the result section, analyses are presented that are relevant to the question how Fridays for Future protesters differ from non-protesters. However, how these analyses are related to the theoretical framework is not clear. I think it would be possible to get more out of the data. The study covers a range of interesting self-reported behaviours (protesting, meat consumption, flying) as well as a range of interesting predictors (different types of efficacy beliefs, trust, concern, enjoyment). One solution could be to follow up on the work by Whitmarsh and O’Neill (2010) who investigated whether different environmental behaviours are predicted by different variables. For instance, as protesting is a collective action, collective efficacy beliefs may predict protesting better than it predicts meat consumption and flying. If this is not the case this would be relevant as well because most models of collective action implicitly assume that collective efficacy beliefs are specifically relevant for collective action. Hamann, K. R., & Reese, G. (2020). My influence on the world (of others): Goal efficacy beliefs and efficacy affect predict private, public, and activist pro‐environmental behavior. Journal of Social Issues, 76(1), 35-53. Landmann, H. & Rohmann, A. (2020). Being moved by protest: Collective efficacy beliefs and injustice appraisals enhance collective action intentions for forest protection via positive and negative emotions. Journal of Environmental Psychology, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jenvp.2020.101491 Tausch, N., & Becker, J. C. (2013). Emotional reactions to success and failure of collective action as predictors of future action intentions: A longitudinal investigation in the context of student protests in Germany. British Journal of Social Psychology, 52(3), 525–542. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.2044-8309.2012.02109.x Whitmarsh, L., & O’Neill, S. (2010). Green identity, green living? The role of pro-environmental self-identity in determining consistency across diverse pro-environmental behaviours. Journal of Environmental Psychology, 30, 305–314. http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.jenvp.2010.01.003 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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