Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-14694 Quantitative Usewear Analysis of Stone Tools: Measuring How the Intensity of Use Affects the Identification of the Worked Material PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Juan José Ibáñez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by September 5, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to start by acknowledging the value of this contribution to the field of quantitative use-wear-analysis. The authors provide a new set of innovative experiments aimed to enlarging the actual knowledge on the possibility to identify the materials worked with flint tools at different stages of use. This unique fact is sufficient to recommend this paper for publication on PlosOne. Nevertheless, there are some minor issues which should be addressed by the authors before publication. All the comments are intended to improve the quality of this work, which is already notable. I’d suggest the authors to touch on some points which are still crucial in the development of the discipline. To name a few, there is not a general consensus on the right technical (magnifications, NA, area scanned) and analytical parameters (3D analysis) to be used, whether they should be different on different raw materials or not, etc. I’d appreciate to see these topics reflected in the discussion for several reasons. First of all, it should be clear to non-experts that quantitative research is still in its infancy and there is no consensus among experts. In this way, the authors would not create false hopes to the general public by passing on an incomplete and ambiguous message. I, of course, agree with the authors when they say that there are still issues to be solved, such as the impact that PDSMs has on interpretations, before being ready to analyze archeological collections. Regarding presentation of data, although the tables provided here for the classification of materials are clear, I wonder why the authors did not provide matrices instead. Another point that is worth spending some words on (in the discussion maybe?) is in my opinion the fact that the results presented in this paper do not diverge much from observations done by analysts employing qualitative parameters. If we forget for some time about numbers, and we stick to only the descriptive paragraphs focused on the description of the development of polish, I honestly see no difference from the descriptions of the first use-wear analysts (Keeley, Vaughan, Grace). On the one hand, this is very reassuring for the discipline and analysts should not feel threatened anymore by the application of quantitative methods. On the other hand, and this is the trickiest question to be answered by us, do we really need to go to such fine details? Do we need to go on with quantitative studies? Do we need to standardize parameters in order to compare datasets? If the answer is yes, I would like to see why this is the case and your opinion on this matter shall somehow be explicit in the text. This would hopefully trigger a scientific debate and the discipline would follow its natural course. Reviewer #2: Very interesting and useful paper. This approach has great potential for creating a digital open access experimental database for use-wear analysis. I cannot fully judge the statistical support of the paper, but methodologically it is certainly good. It is well illustrated, well written, but the references need a check: authors are sometimes missing and initials are incorrect. A term like editores should be changed to editors. Although the authors make reference to previous work on quantification, they could clarify better what is really new here in comparison to past conclusions about use-wear inferences. They conclude that there is overlap between for example wood and bone and bone and antler polish and mention the difficulty of distinguishing meat cutting wear. However, we have known this for decades. So, what exactly have we learned that is different from what we already know? I am not contesting the usefulness of their approach, quite the contrary, but they might push this more, and make clear why this type of quantification can bring us further or what could be the practical applicability for a larger research community. Not everyone has access to a confocal microscope. I am also still not convinced that we can speak of a "correct identification" of polishes: yes, of course in experimental context we can, but our inferences on archaeological tool use are based on analogies. Past technologies were most likely far more complex than we can imagine and our experiments are often way too simplistic: there are several archaeological polish types for which we have yet to find an experimental equivalent, even after decades of experimental exploration. After the first analysis the "success rate" is presented to be around 60%, if I understand the text well. The statement that after a second round of statistical analysis virtually all classifications were correct, does not entirely convince me as this is based on a combined analysis of length of use with contact material. Length of use is, as the authors themselves acknowledge, not the only factor behind intensity of polishes (strength, skill, fatigue etc). In conclusion my advise is "accept with minor revision". Although not questioning the usefulness of the quantitative approach presented in this paper, I think the paper would benefit from a short critical appraisal of its potential and limitations in the conclusion of the paper. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-14694R1 Quantitative Use-wear Analysis of Stone Tools: Measuring How the Intensity of Use Affects the Identification of the Worked Material PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ibanez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In particular, please check the complete reference list, as suggested by Reviewer 2. Please submit your revised manuscript by September 1, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Enza Elena Spinapolice, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I did not check all references but in two that I know well I still found mistakes (authors missing, year wrong). Below the correct references: Guzzo Falci., Cuisin J., Delpuech A., Gijn. A.L. van & Hofman C.L. (2018), New insights into use-wear development in bodily ornaments through the study of ethnographic collections, Journal of Archaeological Method and Theory: 1-51 https://doi.org/10.1007/s10816-018-9389-8 Unrath G., Owen L.R., Gijn A.L. van, Moss E.H., Plisson H. & Vaughan P. (1986), An evaluation of micro-wear studies: a multi-analyst approach.. In: Unrath G., Owen L.R. (Eds.) Technical aspects of micro-wear studies on stone tools.. Tubingen: Archeologica Venatoria. 117-176. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Quantitative Use-wear Analysis of Stone Tools: Measuring How the Intensity of Use Affects the Identification of the Worked Material PONE-D-21-14694R2 Dear Dr. Ibanez, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Enza Elena Spinapolice, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Please check and edit the reference list. Here some suggestions from the reviewer 2 I did not check all references but in two that I know well I still found mistakes (authors missing, year wrong). Below the correct references: Guzzo Falci., Cuisin J., Delpuech A., Gijn. A.L. van & Hofman C.L. (2018), New insights into use-wear development in bodily ornaments through the study of ethnographic collections, Journal of Archaeological Method and Theory: 1-51 https://doi.org/10.1007/s10816-018-9389-8 Unrath G., Owen L.R., Gijn A.L. van, Moss E.H., Plisson H. & Vaughan P. (1986), An evaluation of micro-wear studies: a multi-analyst approach.. In: Unrath G., Owen L.R. (Eds.) Technical aspects of micro-wear studies on stone tools.. Tubingen: Archeologica Venatoria. 117-176. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-14694R2 Quantitative Use-wear Analysis of Stone Tools: Measuring How the Intensity of Use Affects the Identification of the Worked Material Dear Dr. Ibáñez: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Enza Elena Spinapolice Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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