Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-38398 Conflict driven displacement and child health: Evidence from Jordan PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Akhtar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Considering reviewers comments, I am going with a decision of Major revision Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 08 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. In your Methods section, please provide additional information about the eligibility criteria applied in your analysis; and please clarify how every variable was categorised. 3. Please amend your manuscript to include your abstract after the title page. Additional Editor Comments: Considering reviewers comments, I am going with a decision of Major revision [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Useful literature can be taken up in the discussion section. These papers discuss the risk factors for unexpected child death, sudden infant death and stillbirth in Jordan and the many issues raised regarding the health care system, high smoking rate and smoking restrictions, as well as cultural, economic and risk groups. -Hamadneh S., Kassab M., Eaton A., Wilkinson A., Creedy D.K. (2020) Sudden Unexpected Infant Death. In: Laher I. (eds) Handbook of Healthcare in the Arab World. Springer, Cham. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-319-74365-3_144-1 - Hamadneh S, Kassab M, Hamadneh J, Amarin Z. Sudden unexpected infant death in Jordan and the home environment. Pediat Int. 2016; 58(12):1333-1336. - Khader Y, Batieha A, Khader A, Hamadneh S. (2018) Stillbirths in Jordan: rate, causes, and preventability, The Journal of Maternal-Fetal & Neonatal Medicine, Published online: 25 Sep 2018. DOI: 10.1080/14767058.2018.1517326 - Hamadneh S, Al-Shdayfat N, Al-Omari O, Hamadneh J, Bashtawi M, Alkhatib A, Amarneh B, Andre K, Willkinson A. Sudden Infant Death Syndrome in the Middle East: An Exploration of the Literature on Rates, Risk Factors, High Risk Groups and Intervention Programs. Research Journal of Medical Sciences. 2016;10(4):199-204 - Hamadneh S. Sudden unexpected infant deaths investigation in the Middle East requiring further action· GSTF Journal of Nursing and Health Care (JNHC). 2016;4(1): 53-56 Reviewer #2: The article is written in a clear and understandable language. The data is described as it is. However, (1) the discussion contradicts the result on diarrhea. The result shows that prevalence of diarrhea is higher in Jordanian children than Syrians and other nationalities. (2) The difference in health outcomes seems correlated to socio-economic indictors than nationality. The authors should focus the article on the socio-economic disparity between refugees and Jordanians affecting health of children. The nationality argument not supported well. (3) How does the ARI, diarrhea and fever data look like by nationality, when controlled for socio-economic variables? (4) What do the authors think is the reason for prevalence of diarrhea being higher in Jordanian children than in Syrians or other nationalities? I suggest including that routine immunization is free for all children under 5 in Jordan. However, pneumococcal conjugate vaccine (PCV) is not part of Jordan's routine immunization program. When it is introduced, it will be available for all children under 5, including refugees. Reviewer #3: 1. It is a very important study on the health of the children under five having different nationalities, all residents of Jordan. 2. Please modify the title according to the objective of the study. 3. The objective of the study needs to be precisely restructured and focused. 4. The Abstract has to be written properly and concisely. 5. The Conclusion of the study has to be consistent with the study findings. 6. In Table 2, sample size has to be recalculated. 7. Please take out the wordings like PhD Scholar, only the PhD will suffice. What about the credentials of other coauthors, please mention. 8. The limitations of the study are nicely narrated. 9. Please make necessary corrections of grammar and restructuring the sentences. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Shereen Hamadneh Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-38398R1 Conflict driven displacement and child health inequality: Evidence based on mother’s nationality from Jordan Population and Family Health Survey PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Akhtar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Reviewer 2 is still not happy with writing style of the manuscript, thus I am sending it back to you. Can you carefully give attention to reviewer 2 comments. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Srinivas Goli, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Reviewer 2 is still not happy with writing style of the manuscript, thus I am sending it back to you. Can you carefully give attention to reviewer 2 comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It is possible to start the process of publishing. The researchers made the modifications identified in the review. Reviewer #2: The topic of study is still relevant and important. However, I was not able to discern the man public health message from the data and discussions. The revised manuscript is even more confusing than the previous version. The results are not described and discussed in a meaningful and coherent way that makes sense in terms of their public health relevance. I could not understand, what the authors were trying to tell us. For instance, "..results showed that Jordanian children whose mother has a smoking habit and Syrian children's mothers who do not smoke cigarettes have high ARI prevalence. Hence, our results clearly show that disease risk is greater among the children of Syrian or any other nationality than the Jordanian." The authors should have picked a few of the results, which they thought were most relevant to support the title of the article. In its current form, I do not see this article contains coherent and, from public health perspective, relevant new information that merits publication in PLOS. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Shereen Hamadneh Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Conflict driven displacement and child health inequality: Evidence based on mother’s nationality from Jordan Population and Family Health Survey PONE-D-20-38398R2 Dear Dr. Akhtar, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Srinivas Goli, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Authors have implemented the reviewers concerns. Thus, I am recommending this paper with minor suggestions. 1. Remove the word "inequality" from the paper title, as you really not estimating any inequality in the paper. 2. Under each table and figures authors wrote source is JDHS, please replace it as "Authors estimation using JDHS". 3. Replace the recommendation section heading as "Implications". Also replace sub-heading "for researchers" with "Practical implications", and "For Government" with "Policy implications". And, write this two sections as a coherent paragraph rather than bullet points. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-38398R2 Conflict driven displacement and child health: Evidence based on mother’s nationality from Jordan Population and Family Health Survey Dear Dr. Akhtar: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Srinivas Goli Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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