Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03663 High mortality among HIV-infected individuals in a post-Ebola epidemic setting PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reilly, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The statistical methods appear to be high quality, though I've made a few suggestions to improve the language and reporting. The authors are a bit too zealous or cavalier in their conclusions. These are trial data and it's not normally a good assumption that people in a trial will be or behave the same as those outside a trial. I believe these are interesting analyses, but I think more caution should be taken regarding the conclusions and the discussion should be more measured. 1. (Statistical Methods section) Please provide citations for all statistical methods, preferably methodological over software. 2. (line 145) I'm curious why you chose an independence correlation structure over other structures that, potentially, would modeling the correlation between observations over time better. 3. (lines 143, 149, …) Is it the HIV status at baseline? In PREVAIL I, my understanding is HIV testing was only done at baseline. It might be a good idea to make this clear in this section. 4. (lines 151-2) I didn't understand what "covariate-time interaction terms" are. Time is part of the outcome, so I wasn't sure how interactions between covariates and time were included in the linear predictor. Do you mean time-dependent covariates? 5. (lines 294-6) I found this statement a little hard to accept. Maybe for PREVAIL I since the inclusion criteria are pretty minimal. Though, it's noted mostly men enrolled. For PREVAIL III, the sampling appears to be more specialized, so I'm not sure I am willing to go along with the statement that the pooling of these two cohorts is similar to the general population. 6. (line 345) The conclusions drawn and a good portion of the discussion hinge on the belief that the results are comparable to nationwide estimates and, for lack of a better term, "represent" the general population. It's confusing that now the authors are claiming the results from this study about HIV/AIDS should be interpreted with caution. 7. (Figures 1&2) Please include confidence bands on the survival estimates. Reviewer #2: Your manuscript is well written, and the topic adressed is relevant, especially for resource-limited countries that very rarely conduct longitudinal studies to estimate HIV incidence. You just need to review a few things. 1. Abstract The paragraph from line 23 to line 26 better justifies the results of this study. However, it is not very much in harmony with the title of the study. In addition, the elements mentioned in this paragraph do not appear very clearly in the general introduction of the body of this manuscrit. As the abstract is the synthesis of the body of the manuscrit, in my opinion, there should be no element in the abstract that isn't in the body of the article. I suggest that you harmonise the justification that appears in the abstract of the study with that which appears in the general introduction to the body of the manuscrit. 2. Introduction - You have provided enough information on the weaknesses in access to HIV health care services; however, there is little information on the overall organisation of HIV health care services in Liberia. It would be important for you to briefly describe the current organisation of HIV health care provision in Liberia. This would better support the weaknesses that you were willing to address in your manuscript. - From Line 72 to Line 73 you have mentionned that "Thousands of patients living with HIV were lost to follow-up during and after the Ebola outbreak, with significant declines reported in access to HIV counselling, testing and treatments", but there are not enough statistics to support the claims about the decline in the use of health services during and after the Ebola epidemic. In addition, it would be important for you to report on the proportion of the lost to follow-up patients among the persons which are living with HIV in treatment centres in Liberia. - The justification for your study that you mention in lines 77 to 81 seems to me to be a bit global, not too specific. It isn't very specific to the title of your manuscript. I suggest you improve this part. - The objectives of your study go beyond mortality (you talk about prevalence, incidence and mortality). However, the title of your study focuses only on mortality. In my opinion, there is a need to adapt the title of your study 3. Methods - In lines 124 to 125 you indicate that blood tests were taken from participants who returned for a clinical visit. This was done to test for HIV and Syphilis. In my opinion, it is important to clarify the nature of the tests used and the algorithm for HIV testing and syphilis testing. It is also important to explain a bit more how the management of HIV or syphilis positive cases was carried out. - In line 116, you mention "1,144 Ebola survivors and 2,784 controls" without explaining the criteria for matching controls to cases. I suggest that you provide more details. - Were there any lost to follow-up cases who returned to the cohort? If so, I suggest you report this in the methodology; and say how the data for these cases was managed? 4. Results No comment 5. Discussion The result: "We found an overall prevalence of 3.2% and an annual incidence of 3.3 per thousand per year" mentioned here, in lines 191 and 192, is not very explicit in the result chapter. In my opinion, these statistics should be mentioned in the result chapter in lines 171 to 179. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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The impact of the 2014 Ebola epidemic on HIV disease burden and outcomes in Liberia West Africa PONE-D-21-03663R1 Dear Dr. Reilly, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Graciela Andrei Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: After reading the entire new version of your manuscript, I find that it has taken into account almost all of my previous comments. From my side, it's okay for publication. Thank you ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Niouma Nestor LENO |
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PONE-D-21-03663R1 The impact of the 2014 Ebola epidemic on HIV disease burden and outcomes in Liberia West Africa Dear Dr. Reilly: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Graciela Andrei Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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