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Original SubmissionJuly 1, 2021
Decision Letter - Iddya Karunasagar, Editor

PONE-D-21-21282

Coverage of the national surveillance system for human Salmonella infections, Belgium, 2016-2020

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Additional Editor Comments:

The reviewers have made very important comments. Clarification is needed on what is meant by greater than 100%. Please revise considering all the reviewer comments.

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Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Review Comments to the Author

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Reviewer #1: Can you explain, and perhaps provide an example in the methods, for how a laboratory can have >100% coverage? [see this in the discussion - wonder if helpful to mention in the methods or as you report that some did - can simply say parenthetically something like.

XX labs had coverage greater than 100% (because they reported fewer cases in the survey than the number reported to NRC).]

It is said that you removed cases with missing info (line 230) but those should still be included in the n_1 and n_2 shouldn't they? Or at least you should provide what the estimated coverage is when you include them as a lower bound of coverage.

Seems that would be 15350 cases with coverage of 80%. It is still very high.

The data availability statement should be written in the format that the journal requests. There are clearly issues of personal identifiability, etc., and it should be clearer where to get the data.

Overall the text is written in excellent English but there are several small issues and I doubt that I capture them all here. The paper could benefit from a reading by a native English speaking editor.

Line 69 - suggest "voluntarily" vs. "voluntary"

Line 101 - suggest "previously" vs. "previous"

Line 114 - suggest "ranges" vs. "ranged" and if inculsive of 2016 and 2020 would suggest from 2016 to 2020

Line 121 - is capitalization all correct?

Line 126 - from a patient *who was* part of

Line 172 - Number *of* Salmonella

Line 177 - suggest "annual" vs. "annuals"

Line 196 - "send" instead of "sent"

Line 221 - suggest "indicated they used culture" there and elsewhere as appropriate

Line 224 - suggest "except one indicated they sent all"

Line 257 - unsure of use of "towards" here

Line 279-280 - and allowed *us* to confidently estimate

Line 289 - suggest "compared" vs. "compare"

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Revision 1

Authors’ response to reviews

Title: Coverage of the national surveillance system for human Salmonella infections, Belgium, 2016-2020

Authors:

N. Van Goethem

A. Van Den Bossche

P.-J. Ceyssens

A. Lajot

W. Coucke

K. Vernelen

N.H.C. Roosens

S.C.J. De Keersmaecker

D. Van Cauteren

W. Mattheus

Version : 1 Date : 16 August 2021

Authors' response: Thank you very much for considering our manuscript. We thank the reviewer and editorial staff for their valuable review. We carefully went through the constructive reviews provided by the peer reviewer and editor and have revised the manuscript accordingly. We have outlined our responses point by point to the reviewer’s comments. The line numbers presented here correspond to those in the final version (with track changes) of the manuscript.

Reviewer 1: Can you explain, and perhaps provide an example in the methods, for how a laboratory can have >100% coverage? [see this in the discussion - wonder if helpful to mention in the methods or as you report that some did - can simply say parenthetically something like.

XX labs had coverage greater than 100% (because they reported fewer cases in the survey than the number reported to NRC).]

Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for this comment. In addition to the clarifications that were already provided in the discussion section (L304-309), we have added the following clarifications to the methods section (L150-152): “A laboratory can have >100% coverage when they report fewer cases in the survey than the number of isolates from unique cases sent to the NRC.” Accordingly, we added the following to the results section as suggested (L226-227): “A total of 18 laboratories had a coverage greater than 100% (because they reported fewer cases in the survey than the number reported to the NRC).”

Reviewer 1: It is said that you removed cases with missing info (line 230) but those should still be included in the n_1 and n_2 shouldn't they? Or at least you should provide what the estimated coverage is when you include them as a lower bound of coverage.

Seems that would be 15350 cases with coverage of 80%. It is still very high.

Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for this comment. As we do not know whether there is a match between the NRC and SNL database for the cases with missing info, we did exclude them from the main analysis. However, we do agree that it might provide a ‘lower bound’ of coverage. Therefore, we have added the following to the results section (L251-254): “When taking into account the cases with missing date of birth, gender, or postal code, the estimated total number of cases was 13,350 (95% CI: 15,172-15,528) and the coverage of the NRC and SNL network were estimated to be 80% (12,316/15,350) (95% CI: 80-81%) and 31% (4,822/15,350) (95% CI: 31-32%), respectively.”

Reviewer 1: The data availability statement should be written in the format that the journal requests. There are clearly issues of personal identifiability, etc., and it should be clearer where to get the data.

Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for this remark. We have now included all relevant data underlying the results in the Supporting information. The underlying data on Salmonella epidemiology in Belgium as presented in Fig 1 and Fig 2, is contained in S1 Table and S2 Table, respectively. The laboratory survey results aggregated per laboratory (anonymized), including the number of Salmonella cases reported in the survey, the number of Salmonella isolates from unique cases sent to the National Reference Center (NRC), the method of diagnosis used, the reasons for sending isolates to the NRC, and the serotypes sent to the NRC, are presented in S3 Table. The stool reimbursement data, used to calculate the positivity rate and to estimate the number of Salmonella diagnoses for laboratories that did not participate in the survey, are presented per RIZIV number (anonymized) in S4 Table. Finally, the numbers per year underlying the capture-recapture analyses are presented in S5 Table.

Reviewer 1: Overall the text is written in excellent English but there are several small issues and I doubt that I capture them all here. The paper could benefit from a reading by a native English speaking editor.

Line 69 - suggest "voluntarily" vs. "voluntary"

Line 101 - suggest "previously" vs. "previous"

Line 114 - suggest "ranges" vs. "ranged" and if inculsive of 2016 and 2020 would suggest from 2016 to 2020

Line 121 - is capitalization all correct?

Line 126 - from a patient *who was* part of

Line 172 - Number *of* Salmonella

Line 177 - suggest "annual" vs. "annuals"

Line 196 - "send" instead of "sent"

Line 221 - suggest "indicated they used culture" there and elsewhere as appropriate

Line 224 - suggest "except one indicated they sent all"

Line 257 - unsure of use of "towards" here

Line 279-280 - and allowed *us* to confidently estimate

Line 289 - suggest "compared" vs. "compare"

Authors’ response: We thank the reviewer for these kind words and the valuable suggestions and corrections. We have adapted all suggestions and corrections in the manuscript accordingly.

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Decision Letter - Iddya Karunasagar, Editor

Coverage of the national surveillance system for human Salmonella infections, Belgium, 2016-2020

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Dear Dr. Van Goethem,

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All reviewer comments have been addressed.

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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PONE-D-21-21282R1

Coverage of the national surveillance system for human Salmonella infections, Belgium, 2016-2020

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