Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 19, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09098 Effectiveness of blended learning in pharmacy education: An experimental study using clinical research modules PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thunga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 30-May-2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Menezes, M.B.B.S., M.D., Diplomate N.B. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the invitation to review this interesting manuscript. My comments are as follows: Line 108: The spelling of the e-learning platform seems to be wrong. Lines 119 and 120: Can the IEC of Kasturba Hospital provide ethical approval for a multi-centre study? There are missing words and other issues with language in many areas. I would recommend copyediting of the manuscript for language and grammar. Punctuation and spacing between words may also need corrections. The evaluation questionnaires seem to be long, and students may have to spend several minutes to complete the same. This could have been a problem. How much time did it take on an average to complete the questionnaires? Line 208: The number of students who completed the module is only 76% of those who enrolled. Will this impact the study? Line 290: The references should be cited as [19,20]. The authors have mentioned several learning strategies and other constructs in the article. A brief explanation of these will be helpful. It is good that the authors have included different supporting material with the article. Reviewer #2: After reviewing this manuscript, it became known that this needs some minor corrections before acceptance. Sentences must be reformed with clear elucidation and a more scientific approach. Also, references must be written in accordance to guidelines provided by the journal. Reviewer #3: A. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The research objectives are relevant. However, the following points needs to be addressed: 1. Regarding the study design, it was mentioned that the three interventions were randomly allocated to three geographical areas, and from where colleges were randomly selected. What is the rationale of having only three clusters? Why did the authors select the geographical area, instead of college, as the cluster level? Please provide the information on the number of colleges considered for the random selection of 12 colleges. It would be helpful for the readers if information available on cluster level factors that might influence the results. 2. Regarding sample size, how was the effect size calculated? on which outcome variable? 3. The study compares three types of learning approaches: BL, DT & WEL. In DT, whole 9 hours learning through face to face; in BL, the 5 hrs didactic part offered through online and 4 hrs case studies through face-to-face discussion; while in WEL, whole 9 hours through web based. However, it is rather unclear, what mentioned here as BL is a blended learning, or flipped classroom, or hybrid learning (for me, it’s more like hybrid learning!; authors used these approaches interchangeably though they are not the same)? All except one references in the introduction were about flipped classroom approach. Interpretation and discussion of results needs to be updated accordingly. B. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? 4. Analysis performed as individually randomised trial! 5. For tables, please provide footnote on method of hypothesis testing 6. In table 2, provide the post-hoc comparison for all significant variables 7. Please clarify, what it means by 1, 2 & 3 in post hoc comparison 8. In table 3 regression modelling, how did the variable selection perform? Why only intervention 2 included? C. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 9. Only summary statistics were provided D. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? 10. Needed substantial revision due to typos (e.g. …website contains 5 chapters per hour…[ page 8]), unclear sentences, and grammatical mistakes. E. Additional comments: 11. Introduction lacks literature review on the research problem, insufficient background information, and needs to be more structured. All except one reference in the introduction were about flipped classroom approach. The second part of both paragraphs in the introduction better fit in the methods section/discussion section. Objectives can be listed at the end. 12. In the methods section, better move the details of web implementation into under “study procedure” section. 13. Discussion needs to be more structured and include relevant references. Reviewer #4: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. Generally, the topic would be of interest to many readers. Below are suggestions to address 1. Introduction - Why Pintrich’ motivated strategies for learning questionnaire (MSLQ) is selected? 2. Outcome Assessment: How did the items in pre-test and post-test generated? Evaluation of students’ experience and satisfaction – is it newly constructed items or adopted from previous study? Validation? 3. Comparison of knowledge score – -Line 213 - “As shown in table3, mean difference between post-test and pre-test, case studies score, and total score in BL was higher than DT and WEL.”- is it Table 2 or Table 3? - Case study scores – pre or post? - Line 224-225 “Students’ pretest score, and whether they were in BL had a significant influence on final score.”- please clarity 4. The paper also includes inconsistencies e.g. decimal points, capital letter/small letter and would benefit from linguistic editing by a native English speaker prior to resubmission. Reviewer #5: 1. The objective was to evaluate the effectiveness of blended learning on knowledge score using clinical research modules. Assessing knowledge on a specific subject to demonstrate increased competency in that particular field. However, in this study it was assessed only at the basic level, which are insufficient to argue for the value of learning. I would suggest to evaluate the behavior of the students using objective assessment, including direct observation, an interview or a skills demonstration. 2. The effectiveness of a blended learning environment can be assessed through analysing the relationship between student characteristics/background, design features and learning outcomes. It is always better to determine the significant predictors of effectiveness using learning outcomes as dependent variable. 3. The language is ambiguous and didn't reflect the context clearly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Pathiyil Ravi Shankar Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Royes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-21-09098R1 Effectiveness of blended learning in pharmacy education: An experimental study using clinical research modules PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thunga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 13-August-2021. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Prof. Ritesh G. Menezes, M.B.B.S., M.D., Diplomate N.B. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Academic Editor Comments: - Address the comments made by Reviewer #2. Refer to the following website (5th criterion for publication): https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript can be accepted for publication. The authors have adequately addressed my comments provided during an earlier round of review. Reviewer #2: Check for grammatical and typographical errors and reform sentence with clear elucidation. The Caption of the tables should be revised and value must be written down to the same decimal place throughout the table. Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper again. The authors have addressed comments provided. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Effectiveness of blended learning in pharmacy education: An experimental study using clinical research modules PONE-D-21-09098R2 Dear Dr. Thunga, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Prof. Ritesh G. Menezes, M.B.B.S., M.D., Diplomate N.B. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-21-09098R2 Effectiveness of blended learning in pharmacy education: An experimental study using clinical research modules Dear Dr. Thunga: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Ritesh G. Menezes Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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