Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 24, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-16544 ASSOCIATION BETWEEN THE DONOR TO RECIPIENT ICG-PDR VARIATION RATE AND THE FUNCTIONAL RECOVERY OF THE GRAFT AFTER ORTHOTOPIC LIVER TRANSPLANTATION: A PILOT STUDY PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ventin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have read with great interest the manuscript entitled ‘Association between the donor to recipient ICG-PDR variation rate and the functional recovery of the graft after orthotopic liver transplantation: a pilot study’. In this original article (single centre retrospective study), authors found an association between the variation rate of the donor-recipient ICG-PDR and MEAF; and, also, an association between the ICG-PDR on the first postoperative day and MEAF. The manuscript is written well and the topic of clinical interest. As stated by the authors, indeed, identifying efficient predictors of postoperative liver graft function is crucial because of the expansion of extended criteria donor graft utilisation. Thirty-six ICG-PDR measurements were performed for 18 donors and 18 graft recipients. Only donors after brain death (DBD) were included. In addition, the reported features of these donors suggest they are good quality organs (e.g., good donor ICG-PDR, %/min T1 (mean, SD) 22.64 (6.35)). Recipients were predominantly low risk cases (high ICG-PDR, %/min T2 (mean, SD) 17.68 (6.60)/ MELD Score was 12.5 (IQE 10.0-17.0); mean CIT 383.50 minutes (SD 91.36)). The results reported are original and have not been published elsewhere. The study was conducted according to ethical standards. Although experiments and statistics were performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail, the experienced reviewers raised some questions regarding sample size and the outcomes analysed. They have also asked for further information on the aim of applying ICG-PDR in this context and the time point to measure the MEAF score. I echo reviewer 1, and if ` ICG-PDR testing on liver transplant recipients has been a standard-of-care for 20 years at our institution`, why not increase the donor pool? In addition, if ` All patients were considered with a minimum follow-up of 90 days`, why not patient and graft survival at 90-day? Furthermore, indeed, the inclusion of data on `hard` endpoints would increase the quality of the study. Consider report patient and graft survival and the occurrence of early allograft dysfunction by conventional criteria (as those proposed by Olthoff et al.). Those would be important considering the intention to propose a predictive test of graft performance and early outcome after transplantation. In the Discussion, the authors advocate that the current study supports the hypothesis that ICG-PDR variation rate could represent a measure of the ischemia-reperfusion injury. However, they must admit that limitations of the study population (good quality grafts and low-risk recipients) may compromise this assumption. Also, in the Discussion, authors must comment on the feasibility of performing ICG-PDR tests in the donor before entering the operating room for graft retrieval. In many countries, such interventions are not allowed in the donor. Therefore, ethical and legal regulations must limit the applicability of these findings. To sum up, major concerns were raised by reviewers regarding methodological features, interpretation of results, and how they can affect the conclusions. Authors must address all these points, consider those constraints, and the Conclusion of the paper. Please provide a point-by-point response to reviewers’ comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition, please provide a blank example of the form used to obtain consent from donors, and an English translation if the original is in a different language. 4. Please indicate whether the donors were previously registered as organ donors. If tissues/organs were obtained from deceased donors or cadavers, please provide details as to the donors’ cause(s) of death. 5. Please provide the participant recruitment dates and the period during which transplant procedures were done (as month and year). 6. Please discuss whether medical costs were covered or other cash payments were provided to the family of the donor. If so, please specify the value of this support (in local currency and equivalent to U.S. dollars). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Cherchi et al. evaluated the variation of ICG-PDR in donor and recipient liver. They have found a significant correlation between MEAF value and ICG-PDR variation. The paper is well-written and organized. Several papers have reported the usefulness of the ICG test of transplant liver to predict early outcomes. This study is unique in which they analyzed the transition of ICG of the same liver from the donor to the recipient. Here are several comments. First of all, the cohort size is too small. To attract more readers, the authors should add more patients or prolong the observation period and evaluate the variation ratio with the actual patient outcome, not with the MEAF. ICG is now used in other fields other than the hepatology field to evaluate vascularity or blood flow. Please mention this in the introduction section. The result of ICG would be affected by cardiac function. Please include the limitation of ICG testing itself. Since this is a retrospective study, outcomes of the LT will be available. Although the authors used MEAF as a surrogate marker for the outcome, is there any correlation with a real outcome? T1 ICG was obtained from DBD, and the liver should be normal. Why was T1 high in some patients? DO the authors think ICG-PDR is a real-time test to assess graft dysfunction or a predictive marker for future graft dysfunction? Reviewer #2: Dear Author Congratulations on your study. I have some concerns about and I would like to discuss with you. If you have since 2019, Icg-PDR implemented as standard-of-care for all livers donors and transplant recipientes why you don't try increased your cohort of patients? How many liver transplants do you perform in your center in a year? Maybe with this analysis will be possible have more consistent and definitive results. You put MELD score in table 1. Donor demographical and laboratory data. Please consider to change to Table 2. Why did you prefer to use the MEAF grade instead other score like the definition proposed by Olthoff et al. ? And why did you use the MEAF score at day one? instead day 3 ? This could minimizes the contribution of preoperative elevated bilirubin and significant preoperative coagulopathy found in the recipients. When you discuss data from donor like steatosis, warm and cold ischemic times, for example, you did not correlate with MEAF, only because the good condition of the donor himself ? Did you considered that could be because you performed the score to soon after liver transplant, on day 1? Or maybe because you had only patients with low MELD and good donors conditions? I would like to know your opinion about. The value of ICG-PDR on he first day after transplant is a good predictor for EAD, especially to livers from extended criteria, but you did not use those kind of donors, so the variation rate of ICG "represent a measure of the ischemia and reperfusion injury", like you hypothetically said. So this was not related with donor qualities. Do you agree ? You have not seen your data any early allograft dysfunction (EAD), you use only good quality donors and recipients with low MELD. Possibily if our data was more extensive you coud find diferente results? Please I would like to hear your opinion about. Thank you. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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ASSOCIATION BETWEEN THE DONOR TO RECIPIENT ICG-PDR VARIATION RATE AND THE FUNCTIONAL RECOVERY OF THE GRAFT AFTER ORTHOTOPIC LIVER TRANSPLANTATION: A CASE SERIES PONE-D-21-16544R1 Dear Dr. Ventin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yuri Longatto Boteon, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I have read the revised version of the manuscript ‘Association between the donor to recipient ICG-PDR variation rate and the functional recovery of the graft after orthotopic liver transplantation: a case series’ with great interest. Improvements have been made to the manuscript, and the authors addressed significant methodological comments. Due to the predominant descriptive design of the study, I do believe the amendment in the title to ‘A CASE SERIES’ is adequate. The study data has been made available, and there are no competing interests that may affect the integrity of the review process. The limited population of the study leads to some limitations, which are better described in the current version of the manuscript. However, I strongly suggest authors pursue Reviewer 2 suggestions, increase patient population and extend the postoperative follow-up period for future studies. Nevertheless, considering the novelty of the study and the fact that it fulfills PLOS ONE publication criteria, I do believe it is acceptable for publication in the current format. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have fulfilled each of the major compulsory revisions and modified the manuscript as requested. I would think the previous title of “a pilot study” is fine. The paper is not just a report of case series but a study to evaluate the usefulness of ICG-PDR measurement. Reviewer #2: Dear Author Thank you again for resubmitting your manuscript and prompt reply the questions. I think the change the study title to ''case series" cannot help to better understanding the small number of patients analyzed. Your intention of photographing the liver function in two moments is very interesting for clinical practice indeed. Because of this , in my opinion you could consider to increase your cohort, and add some observation period of time, this way you could avoid some limitations like you comment in discussion: "the small cohort of patients did not allow us to investigate certain aspects."Another issue is about the fact that ICG-PDR is a good predictor for EAD, specially to livers from extended criteria, again maybe if you would gather a bigger data you could solve this issue. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-16544R1 ASSOCIATION BETWEEN THE DONOR TO RECIPIENT ICG-PDR VARIATION RATE AND THE FUNCTIONAL RECOVERY OF THE GRAFT AFTER ORTHOTOPIC LIVER TRANSPLANTATION: A CASE SERIES Dear Dr. Ventin: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Yuri Longatto Boteon Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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