Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 6, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-00332 Mixed methods study evaluating the implementation of the WHO Hand Hygiene Strategy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. %Sophie Mueller% Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by %6th July 2021%. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Full Title: Reading through, the study is among “health workers” i suggest you include that please. I suggest you including study location too as the full title and short title still have same word count. Abstract L12: I suggest including that baseline here L18: I suggest you include the word “of” Conclusion L3: This abbreviation has not been defined Introduction L23: Again, this is not defined, if it is referring alcohol-based hand-rub, define it first and continue using the abbreviation throughout. L24: I suggest you continue using HH since it has be defined or stay with household through the manuscript rather than mixing the abbreviations with the full word. Study Settings L7: I suggest including literature on other sources and access of water in the hospital if there is no water running system. Quantitative study L20: This definition and abbreviation should have come above, as the abbreviation is used in the abstract and L23 in the introduction already. Qualitative study L11: How many participant per FGDs? Hand Hygiene Knowledge L13: Typo, the letter "e" is left out Reviewer #2: To be clear, below are the 5 WHO Hand Hygiene (HH) Strategies 1a. System change – alcohol-based handrub at point of care 1b. System change – access to safe, continuous water supply, soap and towels 2. Evaluation and feedback 3. Training and education 4. Reminders in the workplace 5. Institutional safety climate Baseline evaluation Implementation Follow-up evaluation Review and planning TITLE: The topic seem to have a different understand as what’s in the context. The study is talking about the whole HH strategy of WHO while the focus is mostly on the first strategy “alcohol based handrub at point of contact. Again, study location should have been included in the topic to at least make it a bit clear. In that case, I advised you look and revise the topic. ABSTRACT L18, 19 and 21 alcohol -based handrub was used without the abbreviation. However, in conclusion L3 the abbreviation (ABHR) was used. Please correct this, the abbreviation should be introduced in the first instance (L18) and only used thereafter. This process must be repeated in the main text so that you do not interchange alcohol-based handrub with ABHR. INTRODUCTION L3-4 “Healthcare-associated infections (HAI) are the most frequent adverse events worldwide.” This statement is very odd. Frequent adverse event following what? Hospital admission? Reference cited is old. From WHO fact sheet, there was specific case as to Healthcare Delivery Worldwide. So there should have been a focus on the refusal /omission of compliance or lack of knowledge of HH as a cause HAI. L9 lack of running water in the facility, is that a reason for the research to focus mainly on only one of the 5 WHO HH strategies? L21, 22, 23-24 show the research focus which is “to illuminate factors necessary for sustainability of local production of ABHR and to maintain HCW HH knowledge and compliance.” This clearly show that the key to the research is the first WHO HH strategy not the other four. MATERIALS AND METHODS Study Settings L7 states that “the hospital lacks access to running water …” Is this the reason why Hand washing using soap, water and towel was not included, which is part 1b of the key WHO HH strategy? Quantitative Study L10-11 states that “The design, methods of the quantitative part and results of baseline and first follow-up of this study have been described in detail elsewhere.” Please indicate the where the details can be found? This is confusing! L8-9 states that perception was compared with Wilcoxon rank-sum on phase III and IV while L10-13 stated that compliance was compared using WHO 5 Moment of HH strategy. Why are these different? Qualitative study L2 “In-depth semi-structured interviews and focus group discussions.” Both introduced without abbreviations but abbreviations were used in L6 and L8 respectively. RESULTS Hand Hygiene Knowledge Qualitative L8 states that one of the benefit form theoretical practical training was that “ABHR is faster (than handwashing) and does not cause dryness” Is this another reason for not considering hand washing as a key component of the strategy? DISCUSSION L7-8 states that “Nevertheless, knowledge at the second follow-up was still significantly higher than at baseline…” what is the baseline figure? L19 states that “perception of the WHO multimodal HH strategy was positive throughout” This statement is not justified considering the fact that this study focuses mostly on just one aspect of the strategy CONCLUSION L20 states that “the WHO multimodal HH strategy may have a sustained positive effect on HCW compliance and knowledge in the FRH.” The positive effect suggested was mostly for 1a strategy: ABHR. Please review, perhaps describe the 5 point strategy first before focusing on only on point 1a. ********** 6. 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Mixed methods study evaluating the implementation of the WHO Hand Hygiene Strategy focusing on alcohol based handrub and training among health care workers in Faranah, Guinea PONE-D-21-00332R1 Dear Dr. %Sophie Mueller%, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mary Hamer Hodges, MBBS MRCP DSc Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The research seem good now and all comment made have been appropriately addressed. I think it's good to go now from my side. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-00332R1 Mixed methods study evaluating the implementation of the WHO Hand Hygiene Strategy focusing on alcohol based handrub and training among health care workers in Faranah, Guinea Dear Dr. Müller: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mary Hamer Hodges Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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