Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-10597 Is it easier to use one language variety at a time, or mix them? An investigation of voluntary language switching with bidialectals. Dear Dr. Kirk, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. As you will see below, the reviewers believe that your work will make an important contribution to empirical literature. However, they raised some important concerns, especially with regard to its theoretical impact and methodology (e.g., lack of a power analysis). Thus, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by August 6th, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I state that the protocol is "partly" technically sound and planned. I have asked that the authors include a few things that would be important for both replicability and in adding to their research. Most importantly, the authors should justify the block order chosen with respect to the single- and mixed-language blocks. Second, the authors should specify how they will determine significance in their mixed-effects models. Third, I suggest that the authors include additional covariates (mean switch rate, self-rated measures from the questionnaire) as covariates in their analyses. Last, I recommend that the authors include additional non-linguistic tasks of switching and proactive/reactive cognitive control, at the very least to understand the participants better, but ideally to also include as covariates in their analyses, particularly because proactive control plays a crucial role in their hypotheses regarding the mixing benefit. Detailed comments are provided in the attached document. Reviewer #2: This registered report aims to test if there is a switch cost and mixing benefit in a voluntary language switch paradigm in bidialectals. This topic is potentially interesting but I have some concerns which I hope the authors could address. --First of all it is not entirely clear what is a theoretical motivation to test bidialectals in a voluntary language switch paradigm. The authors reviewed the literature on bilinguals in involuntary and voluntary language switching paradigms, and bidialectals in involuntary switching paradigm. The reason that just no one has done it before does not make it a theoretical interesting topic to look at. Related to the point, what differences would you expect there will be between bidialectals vs bilinguals? And why you think there will be differences? Alternatively, based on the literature, it sounds like bidialectals are by and large similar to bilinguals, so what is the point to test bidialectals then? I’m not saying this topic is not potentially interesting, it is just in general, the theoretical motivation is not entirely clear. --The authors also indicated in the literature review that whether switch cost is asymmetrical or symmetrical could be related to language proficiency, at least in involuntary switching paradigms. It is not entirely clear how language proficiency could be affecting the switch cost in the voluntary switch paradigms, although the authors predict that they will see symmetrical switch cost. On a related note, there will be only 20 pictures in this experiment, and there will be a familiarization phase. This is essentially boosting proficiency of names of these particular pictures to a very high level, which would not represent the true language proficiency. I hope the authors could consider using more pictures, and reconsider the use of the familiarization block. --Related to the above point, although the mixed blocks will be in the middle of two single language blocks. I wonder if the authors are concerned with the potential repetition effect. For instance, by the last mixed blocks, participants will have seen the same pictures 8 times, and they will be way too familiar with these pictures, which will significantly decrease their reaction time and error rate. --That being said, I think the error rate will be too low to show any meaningful results with the current design (i.e., ceiling effect). Additionally, if the authors really want to analyze error rates, they should also separate them out into regular errors (e.g., use a word that does not match the picture), and incorrect language errors for single blocks at least. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Michael A. Johns Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Is it easier to use one language variety at a time, or mix them? An investigation of voluntary language switching with bidialectals. PONE-D-21-10597R1 Dear Dr. Kirk, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for addressing my comments in this revision. With regards to my main comments: 1) The justification for the chosen block order is understandable, thank you for clarifying. It is indeed a good decision to match the methodology to previous language-switching studies, so I have no further issues with this. 2) You would be surprised what processes can change throughout the course of a single task! Though I completely understand this line of thought, that proactive control should be more-or-less executed at the task level. If you do end up looking at this, even just a graph, and find something interesting, do let me know. 3) This is perhaps my only remaining issue, but one that is very easily addressed. While it is true that a t- or z- value greater than ~1.96 suggests significance, I believe it is also important to do some further model testing. Specifically, the authors could perform model comparisons using the anova() function in R to compare a model with the effect of interest to a model without the effect of interest, with all other variables staying the same. The anova() function performs a chi-squared test on the residual variance and indicated whether including the effect of interest significantly improves model fit. Other ways to do this are using the AIC or BIC values (smaller values are better fitting models), using the Anova() (capital A!) function in the car library in R to perform an omnibus test, or--the most convenient--using buildmer, which will automatically perform testing of each effect via backwards elimination. I recommend using Satterthwaite ddf, which is an argument that can be changed in the buildmer function (the default is Wald, which is also acceptable). Whatever paths the authors may choose, I ask that they simply perform so further model criticisms aside from just relying on the t- or z- values from the model. Pairing this with another method described above would be excellent, as well. 4) Again, this is understandable, that you would want to keep the methodology similar to previous language-switching studies. Do keep in mind these variables for post-hoc and follow-up analyses, however, as individual differences can go a long way in soaking up variance that may inadvertently make it into the fixed effects. 5) Again, this is understandable to match prior studies. As you mention, however, I hope that you do keep it in mind in your future research, if only to satisfy the curiosity of readers (and reviewers). Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed my previous concerns. The study design is sound and the topic is interesting. I don't have any further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-10597R1 Is it easier to use one language variety at a time, or mix them? An investigation of voluntary language switching with bidialectals. Dear Dr. Kirk: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Veronica Whitford Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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