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PONE-D-21-10534 Costs and Cost-Effectiveness of a Comprehensive Tuberculosis Case Finding Strategy in Zambia PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sohn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper describes a cost-effectiveness analysis of active case finding for tuberculosis, in a Zambian setting. This is an excellent paper that fills a real gap in the literature – the analysis is high-quality and the writing is very clear. Minor comments Line 105: typo ‘available’ Line 102: It would be useful to clarify ‘other departments’ here – was the target audience for the facility-based case finding restricted to people at higher risk for TB (ie. people with HIV), or did it include everybody attending the health clinic? How did the facility-based active case finding differ from ‘intensified case finding’ or a symptom screen at the front door? Line 109: A bit more detail on methods for cost data collection would be useful. For example, was this a full or incremental costing? How was resource use measured or estimated - did data collection include observation, interviews, records review, or other methods? How were shared costs or overhead costs allocated across cost centres? Appendix 1: Your description of the impact of factors such as service volume and time on unit costs is great. It might be useful to separate the graphs to show facility-based and community-based ACF separately, as they are quite different interventions and operated at different times so would probably be useful for readers to see the different costs. Can you also clarify how you have a unit cost for CXR during the period the Xray van was broken down (Jul-Dec 2018)? Line 138: possible typo, I think you mean “Epidemiologic parameters for our symptom-transition model…”? Line 175: typo ‘effectiveness’ Line 177: You mention the DALYs averted from the intervention in your results, but this is not in tables or in the discussion. It also looks like the only DALYs you include are related to YLLs, and you don’t include any from YLDs – is this right? If your main outcome is deaths, and not DALYs, it might not be necessary to include this sentence on DALYs in the results, especially as it is highly conservative as doesn’t include any reduction in disability through treatment of TB. Line 206: I think you need to say a bit more here to justify why your incremental cost/death averted would be considered ‘cost-effective’. Most ‘universal’ thresholds use cost per DALY averted, not per death averted. Do you have a working threshold for cost-effectiveness per death averted, or can you give some examples of the cost/death averted for funded interventions? Line 206: typo ‘expanded’ Line 236: typo ‘likely to seek care passively’ Discussion section: Did you capture any information on changes to passive case finding in the context of the community TB awareness events etc? Would it be worth mentioning these possible broader contextual impacts of ACF schemes if they have a knock-on effect of (for example) increased care-seeking behaviour in the general population? Reviewer #2: General Comments: Jo and colleagues evaluate the costs and cost-effectiveness of a large active TB case-finding initiative carried out in Zambia in 2017-18 using a multi-stage Markov transition model. The analysis compared conventional facility-based passive case-finding to facility- plus community-based TB screening using symptoms and automated digital chest radiography plus GeneXpert testing with linkage to TB treatment. The topic is important because a growing body of evidence suggests that active case finding is an effective and likely an essential strategy to be added to passive case finding in order to improve TB control and achieve TB elimination. However, there is a scarcity of information relevant to implementing these programs in real-world settings. The underlying ACF program increased the number of TB cases detected by about 5%, at a cost of $435 per new treatment, and reduced deaths by almost 50%, at a cost of $2284 per death; these represent an excellent return on investment based on prior studies. The authors highlight several key implications of their analysis. First, their estimates of the unit costs and overall cost-effectiveness of the active case-finding program appeared to be highly sensitive to the available public health capacity and efficiency of implementation in a particular setting (“supply” factors), as well as to the volume of undiagnosed and non-care-seeking TB patients (“demand” factors). Second, similar to previous studies, they found that the benefits of active case finding are likely to accrue over a more extended time period than is commonly realized – at least five years. Both these considerations are likely to be important as countries consider where and how they will or will not adopt such programs and evaluate initial implementation. Major Comments: The analyses are well-presented and the figures and tables are very accessible to the reader. I have a few clarifying questions, as well as some questions about how these findings are packaged and presented to policymakers, as this is presumably one of the expected outcomes of publication. Could the authors define what they mean by “generalized Zambian settings,” as compared with the settings of the CIDRZ ACF project? Are there contextual differences between them, or does this simply refer to nationwide scale-up? The manuscript presents the differences in unit costs per process measure between different time periods, but how variable were the costs per outcome (i.e. per TB diagnosis, per TB death) by quarter? Which of the factors influencing the temporal variations in cost are likely to be most easily modifiable? This information is contained in Figure 3, but it might be worth expanding on since HIV/TB mortality and symptom-associated passive care seeking may not be modifiable in ways that make ACF more cost-effective. While interesting, I wonder if the insights into the important effects of care-seeking behaviors on ACF cost-effectiveness tell the whole story. For example, the model implies that active case finding will be most cost-effective in settings where passive care-seeking behaviors and/or the efficiency of facility-based care is lowest. I imagine that this may commonly occur in facilities where the quality of care and service are poor, and often the low quality of care may also be well-known in the community. Yet, the treatment outcomes of patients identified during active case-finding may also depend on the quality of care in these facilities. If the goal is high rates of treatment coverage and cure, this kind of analysis may not capture these complexities. The authors hint at this in their call for more empiric data across the diagnosis and treatment cascade but I wonder if this specific aspect might be highlighted since the influence of care-seeking behaviors is such a salient finding of this analysis. In the last paragraph of the Results (Lines 189-198) and in the Discussion (Lines 227-230), the analysis uses temporal differences in cost and cost-effectiveness to generalize about such differences between settings. This seems potentially problematic since the word “settings” implies differences defined on factors other than time (e.g. geography). While time-based comparisons yields insights about how care can be delivered more efficiently to a fixed population (assumed stable, at least over the short term), comparisons between geographic settings should arguably account for selection differences between populations and for underlying heterogeneity in risks or behaviors within those populations, especially to the extent that the boundaries used to define populations geographically are arbitrary yet influence estimates of cost-effectiveness (i.e. different boundaries lead to different conclusions). Minor Comments: The manuscript would benefit from a close reading for grammar and usage to improve its readability and clarity. Line 104: It is implied but not directly stated that specimens were collected for abnormal symptoms or abnormal mCXR; a little more detail on the ACF algorithm at this point in the Methods would be helpful for clarification. Table 1: The proportion of TB occurring in HIV patients is estimated at 59% (range 46-70%) is justified by an unpublished manuscript (Reference 21). While the Introduction cites similar numbers from the WHO 2020 TB control report, and certainly this estimate reflects case notification data, recent prevalence studies seem to suggest that the contribution of HIV-patients to TB may be lower in active case finding settings, perhaps because of the success of HIV programs in increasing HIV status awareness, and linkage to care which includes TB screening. See for example N. Kapata et al. PLOS ONE (2016). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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