Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 24, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-13638 Exploring the Behavioral Determinants of COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance among an Urban Population in Bangladesh: Implications for Behavior Change Interventions. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Md. Abul Kalam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This study is focusing of identifying the behavioral determinants of COVID-19 vaccine acceptance among an Urban Population in Dahka, Bangladesh in order to design a suitable strategy to increase the acceptance and uptake rate of vaccination in Bangladesh. Please note that your manuscript was reviewed by 5 experts in the field. There is consensus agreement that the idea of the article is interesting. Meanwhile, some of the reviewers identified many important problems in your manuscript and provided copious comments (enclosed). Explanation and modification of the research question is indicated, especially 81% of urban people would get vaccinated when a COVID-19 vaccine is available. Restructure and refreshing of the methodology section is also indicated. This piece of work could be better if it was done on a larger sample size. The work at this stage is considered as a pilot study. The presentation of the result as shown in the tables was clumsy and difficult to follow. Please note that further language improvements and checking for plagiarism is also indicated. Consider revising the spelling, grammar, diction, and syntax throughout the manuscript for increased clarity. The manuscript could be greatly strengthened by considering editing according to the specific Reviewers’ comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by July 1 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ammal Mokhtar Metwally, Ph.D (MD) Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please address the following: - Please include a copy of the questionnaire and interview guides used in this study, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information. - Please refrain from stating p values as 0.000 and use the format p<0.0001. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. It might be good to put few major statistical numbers in the result section of the abstract for readers who might not have time to see all the detail results in the article or attracted by the results in the abstracts and want to go on the detail results. 2. The introduction part on the number of infected people presented is 14 million and as of May 7, 2021 this number has increased to 157,564,677 with 3.28 million deaths and should be revised in the paper with current updated figures. 3. Even though the barrier analysis method recommends 45 samples for each group, a number of cells in the analysis are having very low number almost less than 10 or in some cases 0 or 1 which might influence the results including a very wide confidence interval in some of statistically significant results. The authors should describe the reasons for taking a low sample size when accessing people for similar interviews was not a problem. Reviewer #2: Thank you for referring this manuscript for revision. The idea is interesting. The article studies an urgent problem, investigating the behavioral determinants of COVID-19 vaccine acceptance among an Urban Population in Dahka, the Capital of Bangladesh. Authors believe that identifying these determinants will help in designing a suitable strategy to increase the acceptance and uptake rate of vaccination in Bangladesh. Individuals have several reasons for adopting or resisting certain behavior. It is important to identify these barriers or facilitators which influence somebody’s willingness to get health services. Introduction of this manuscript demonstrating the size of the problem of hesitancy or refusing COVID-19 vaccination in different countries. However, on displaying the situation in Bangladesh authors reported that 81% of urban people would get vaccinated when a COVID-19 vaccine is available (9). So, why did authors choose to investigate the Urban population despite this high rate of acceptance among them? I think authors must search for another reference showing the size of the problem in Bangladesh. If population in rural areas was investigated, it might be more sounding. At the end of introduction, the authors stated that their study included different societal structures (Line 107, page 4) which was not presented in data. Subjects and methods: The paragraph from line (112-117, page 6) needs revision and rephrasing. The duration of the study is very short (one week). Study tool: This section describing Barrier analysis is copied from a previous article. Applying a plagiarism checker is essential. Questionnaire development: Authors stated that this study modified the standardized Barrier Analysis questionnaire. They did not mention these modifications. They omitted one determinant only from the 12 ones without explanation. These items could be summarized to the four essential determinants. The paragraph from line (0- 12, page 9) is also copied from a previous literature (Determinants of COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance in Six Lower- and Middle-Income Countries). Applying a plagiarism checker is essential. Sample: sample size is small. Building an intervention plan requires a representative sample from different societal positions. Authors did not demonstrate the age range nor the sex ratio of the recruited subjects. Authors did not declare the type of random sampling technique. It was better to summarize the questionnaire, increase the sample size and include some rural districts. Results: This section is confusing. A lot of tables, with a lot of data, with several titles and subtitles. I think the lengthy questionnaire with many open-ended questions yielded in numerous data. Characteristics of the studied participants must be presented in a separate table showing age categories, sex ratio, educational levels, occupation, and social class which are important variables affecting subject’s behavior. Why did items related to Perceived Social Norms is divided in table 1 and table 4? Could the number of tables be less or replaced by figures for some determinants? I could not identify which beliefs were most highly associated with acceptance and non-acceptance with COVID-19 vaccine. Could authors do a regression analysis to conclude the predictors of each behavior, whether acceptance or non-acceptance? Discussion: is well written, organized, updated, and provided a good model to increase the rate of COVID-19 vaccine acceptance among Bangladesh population. This strategy could be applied in other developing countries. Conclusion: is written in a general way and not concentrating on the main findings References: authors may need to revise this section to correct incomplete references and delete repeated ones as number 15 and 19. After careful consideration, I think that this manuscript will likely be suitable for publication if it is revised to address the points mentioned before (Increasing the sample size, including rural plus urban population, summarizing the open-ended questions, applying plagiarism checker and so on). Therefore, my decision is "Major Revision." Reviewer #3: Thank you for studying this important global issue of acceptance or non-acceptance of proposed COVID-19 vaccines. However, I suggest you edit the sentences below for better understanding. Materials and Methods: These sentences are either long or complicated to understand due to the absence of adequate punctuation marks. "There are BA studies in the peer-reviewed literature on exclusive breastfeeding (46) HWWS among internally displaced women in the Kurdistan region of Iraq (40) timely oral polio vaccination agricultural extension behaviors in India (47), dietary salt reduction in Nepal (48) transition from the lactational amenorrhea method to other modern family planning methods in Bangladesh (36) and cervical cancer screening in Senegal." Please check it. - Questionaire development: "The extent to which a person believes that it is Allah approves (or God or the gods’ will) for him/her to do the behavior (e.g. to get a COVID-19 vaccine)." Results: Perceived Positive Consequences and Perceived Negative Consequences: "While reducing the reduced risk of infection was important, Acceptors were more likely to point out benefits related to livelihood and economic benefits and life getting back to normal." Please verifythe construction of this sentence. Acknowledgments: "Our entire research team also grateful to all the respondents for their kind cooperation during the interviews." Reviewer #4: Dear Authors, I found the manuscript interesting your study and results are well reported. A sub-heading in the "materials and methods" section should clearly describe. I think that possible weaknesses regarding the validity and reliability of the developed questionnaire should be discussed in the limitations. Best wishes Reviewer #5: This manuscript presents the results of a barrier analysis illuminating differences between vaccine hesitant and vaccine accepting individuals in Dhaka Bangladesh along a number of dimensions. The results show that vaccine hesitant and acceptance respondents differ along a number of dimensions – some of them quite predictable (e.g. people who think the vaccines are safe or believe they have a higher risk of getting COVID-19 in the near future are more likely to be vaccine acceptant), and others more unique or illustrative of this specific context. To me, perhaps the most interesting findings are in Table 3 as they show that the vaccine hesitant would prefer different delivery mechanisms (e.g. given at home) than the vaccine acceptant 9who, for example, are much more open to receiving it at government health centers or school-based vaccination centers). This could be helpful in crafting outreach efforts to reach hesitant communities. My main concerns are three-fold. First, the sheer range of items compared across the seven tables blunts the force of the most interesting findings. There’s so much here, that the most interesting and unique findings get lost. I would strongly encourage the authors to think about how to highlight the most important findings in the main text, and perhaps to include full tables with comparisons of all items in an appendix. This would also allow the discussion to focus more squarely on the similarities and differences between the main findings here and those of studies examining COVID-19 vaccine hesitancy in other contexts (a literature that grows every day). Rather than primarily recapitulating the findings in the Discussion, this section could more profitably engage related research. Second, the paper often (though not always) uses causal language to describe the differences observed between vaccine acceptant and hesitant individuals as the sources, or determinants, or drivers of differences in willingness to vaccinate. This design does not allow causal claims. In fact, I would argue that for many of the dimensions examined, the causal arrow could run in the opposite direction (i.e. people don’t know much about the vaccines, but they know whether they are likely to take it and that preference influences their answers to at least some of the questions asked) or the willingness to vaccinate question and some of the other questions are measuring/tapping into the same thing (e.g. is trust in the vaccine really independent of vaccination intention and therefore a “key driver” of it? Or are both of these questions tapping into the same underlying concept?). Finally, and a smaller point, I was trick by a result in Table 2 on p. 14. Is it correct that 16% of “doers” – that is subjects who said they would take the vaccine – thought the vaccine was “not safe at all”? To be sure, this is much lower than among the “non-doers,” but it nonetheless was very surprising. Is it worth digging into this a bit more? ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-13638R1 Exploring the Behavioral Determinants of COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance among an Urban Population in Bangladesh: Implications for Behavior Change Interventions. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kalam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Before accepting your article, you have to upload your data Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ammal Mokhtar Metwally, Ph.D (MD) Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #5: Thank you for addressing my concerns. I am now pleased to support this paper's publication in PLOS One. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Exploring the Behavioral Determinants of COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance among an Urban Population in Bangladesh: Implications for Behavior Change Interventions. PONE-D-21-13638R2 Dear Dr. Kalam, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Accordingly, the raw data are requested to be uploaded as per PLOS one publications requirements for the manuscript to be published. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #5: No |
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PONE-D-21-13638R2 Exploring the Behavioral Determinants of COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance among an Urban Population in Bangladesh: Implications for Behavior Change Interventions. Dear Dr. Kalam: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Ammal Mokhtar Metwally Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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