Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 8, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-38636 Personalizing the Decision of Dabigatran versus Warfarin in Atrial Fibrillation: A Secondary Analysis of the Randomized Evaluation of Long-Term Anticoagulation Therapy (RE-LY) Trial. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Reinhardt, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers have important comments regarding the analytic approach and make suggestions for additional exploration and revision that are quite relevant. Although the importance of this work is recognised, certainly also by me, I urge you to seriously consider the suggested points. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 21 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper on using the data from a large trial of anticoagulation therapy to predict risks of strokes, bleeds etc. The abstract mentions a separate model for each treatment - which (fortunately) is not what has been done here. The wording used made my heart sink, but the statistical approach here is absolutely correct. Perhaps the wording can be slightly tightened up. One assumes the use of logistic regression here as opposed to Cox regression of time to event is justifiable by the relatively low number of events and the relatively short follow-up. However, follow-up is not apparently uniform - we need to see the range of follow-up to understand whether each patient included is really at equal risk from equal temporal exposure. If the range is not tight around the median of 2 years, then an analysis that allows for the varying length of follow-up (i.e Cox regression or equivalent) needs to be used. Figure 1 could usefully be improved by giving the risk index for each treatment (based on the log OR) - this would naturally lead into the useful figure 4 illustration. Reviewer #2: The authors developed 2 separate multivariable models to predict thrombotic and bleeding complications in patients with atrial fibrillation, based on the RE-LY trial data. The models show limited discriminative value, but are well calibrated. The variability of treatment effects of the different antithrombotic regimens is very clear depicted in scatter plots visualising the multivariable predicted effect on bleeding or thrombotic complications. The authors wish to enable shared decision making and facilitate more appropriate use of dabigatran. An important limitation of this study is lack of external validation, as pointed out by the authors in the discussion. We have some extra questions. General comments: - Patients with high bleeding risk were excluded from the RE-LY trial. What does this mean for the external validity of this model? Should it only be considered for patients at increased thrombotic risk without high bleeding risk? Please address in discussion - I really like the patient centred idea of the authors and the manuscript, especially figures 4A and 4B are excellent examples of what would be helpful to doctor and patient. However, in the manuscript no final version of the model, or risk score, or website is given where I can calculate this for my patient. Therefore, in the end, in clinical practise (Introduction, line 94 and 95), unfortunately, this paper won’t help unless I know how to use these models… - Why would one use these models instead of the widely used CHADSVASc and HAS-BLED scores? It would be useful to compare these models this newly developed models. - Is the model only suitable to use for dabigatran or also for the other NOACs versus warfarin? Since the benefits of NOAC vs warfarin is considered to be a class effect more than a dabigatran effect. Please address this in discussion. Some parts of the methodology are not fully clear: - Why was chosen for simple logistic regression and not for Cox proportional hazards which may be appropriate for this type of survival analysis? - The model was created by backward selection until all variables retained in the model had at least a 95% contribution to the model’s predictive capacity. How was this contribution quantified? - The prediction models are represented in figures 1 and 2. However, in line 191 the authors state that the final models included 9 and 14 variables. It is unclear what is shown in figures 1 and 2, since the number of predictors does not correspond. At least, the final models should be represented somewhere in the manuscript, and it should be clear what model is represented in what figure. - The patients where modelled with assumed treatment of every treatment arm. How was this possible? Was the randomization arm forced into the models? This is not described. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Willem L. Bor [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Personalizing the decision of dabigatran versus warfarin in atrial fibrillation: A secondary analysis of the Randomized Evaluation of Long-term anticoagulation therapY (RE-LY) trial. PONE-D-20-38636R1 Dear Dr. Reinhardt, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hugo ten Cate, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Although one reviewer did not give further feedback to your rebuttal, the statistical reviewer is satisfied and I also think that your answers and further changes are satisfactory. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-38636R1 Personalizing the decision of dabigatran versus warfarin in atrial fibrillation: A secondary analysis of the Randomized Evaluation of Long-term anticoagulation therapY (RE-LY) trial. Dear Dr. Reinhardt: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Hugo ten Cate Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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