Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-12439 Nudging in the time of coronavirus? Comparing public support for soft and hard preventive measures, highlighting the role of risk perception and experience PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dudás, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below the reviewers' comments as well as those of mine. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 02 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General comments The document attempts to assess public support for preventive measures during COVID-19, social distancing, hand hygiene, and wearing masks, for two sets of policy tools commonly used by policymakers: nudges and regulations. The authors evaluate whether support for either is affected by respondents’ risk perception and experience with the disease. The authors exploit a survey of 1000 individuals in Hungary. “People with a higher level of risk perception supported both types of policies more but slightly favored the regulations. Those who had contact with the disease (either themselves or a close friend or family member contracting COVID-19) reported a higher level of risk perception. When the person themselves was afflicted, this higher levels of risk perception did not translate to a higher level of support, moreover, it even decreased support for the regulations. In case of a loved one contracting the disease, there was an increased support for both types of measures, consequent of the higher risk perception.” While the authors made a good effort collecting the data, the survey does not isolate contextual factors, and it is not designed in a way that would help to provide novel insights (for example, if the authors had randomized assignment to different vignettes, we might have been able to learn how individuals react to an exogenous factor when answering). Therefore, the paper results indicate that during a second wave of COVID-19, once the government had implemented strict regulatory measures to curve infections, those individuals who perceived that risk was higher showed higher support for those restrictive measures. Specific comments 1. The authors attempt to evaluate the support for preventive measures. In particular, they are interested to assess whether or not the population had differential support for traditional regulatory measures compared to nudges. There are several problems with that: 1.1 Context: COVID prevention measures being implemented by the government to reduce infections. Therefore, absolute and relative support is not independent of the context. From the paper, we don’t learn much about conditional effects (e.g., by ideology, support of the government, etc.) that have already been explored in the literature. All we learn is that in a context in which the government is telling the population that strict measures are needed to curve COVID, the average individual in the sample is more in favor if she perceives the risk to be higher. 1.2. Method: the authors ran a survey of 1,000 individuals in Hungary (more about the sample below). They asked all of them the whole set of questions. It does not seem that they randomized the order the questions were presented. Therefore, one question may be priming responses for the rest, and responses may be correlated (once you ask for the first measure, the respondents adjust their subsequent responses to the first to show consistency), particularly given the context in which the survey took place. Given the context, the authors should have randomized the ordering of the questions. They could have randomized individuals into groups and assign them to vignettes or information to better identify the effect of external factors on their responses. 1.3. The authors motivate their paper and spend some time discussing the literature on support for nudges. They set up their analysis to compare the relative support for nudges vis-a-vis regulations. First, it is difficult to isolate underlying support given the context. Second, while for the average individual is intuitive to understand the effect of regulations, it is not necessarily the case regarding the effect of a nudge. Not so long ago, academics and policymakers could not have predicted that defaults mattered, that anchoring is a thing, or that individuals use “system 1” or “system 2” when making decisions. Therefore, assuming that respondents are equally capable and knowledgeable about the different policy alternatives is not credible. 2. Edit the document. The document becomes repetitive, and sometimes is difficult to assess the main messages. 3. The authors argue that the sample is representative of the Hungarian population in terms of age, gender, and education. This claim is not proven. To start with, by construction, the sample is younger than the overall population. Second, the data was collected online, which by definition implies self-selection into the sample. Third, the sample has a higher share of females than what the demographics of the country indicate. Therefore, the authors should provide demographics information and describe any deviations that the sample has for external validity. Reviewer #2: Thank you for your submission to PLOS One. The paper is very interesting and important from a behavioural public policy lens in pandemic management. In general, I think the paper is academically sound, however, I think the structuring needs a major revision. Please find my section specific comments: 1. Abstract is good, can be better if you reflect the analytical results in the last three sentences. 2. Introduction section is well-written and stands good as it is. instead of breaking the introduction in four subsections. I would suggest your add a section 2 called background, and place the subsection 1.1 - 1.4. In the background section, please add some more instances of Hungarian context and its policy response. I think it is very important for the readers to understand the context well, as the outcome of nudging behaviour is dependent on its local contexts. A figure showing how government responded to COVID-19 via nudges (soft and hard) will be very informative. 3. In the same section, try to reflect the diversity of nudging approaches already used in pandemic management. I saw you mentioned the case of the UK, but more examples will build a compelling story. Some of the papers that I found interesting are: https://bjsm.bmj.com/content/54/20/1183.abstract https://publications.iadb.org/publications/english/document/Diminishing-Returns-Nudging-Covid-19-Prevention-Among-Colombian-Young-Adults.pdf (Working paper) https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7182304/ https://ideas.repec.org/p/keo/dpaper/2020-021.html (Working paper) https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0238972 4. Section 2: Material and method. I think this section needs a major restructuring as I saw you mentioned all the statistical tests in the results section. Please arrange it and create a streamline flow of the methodology you mentioned separately in the results section. I think best will be to add a section '2.3 Statistical analysis/quantitative analysis' 5. Following from my previous comments, please combine results and discussion section. As I found your current discussion section to be full with references. While this is acceptable, but I think you need to moderate the reference to specifically support your quantitative evidence. 6. Please add a conclusion section, and try to focus on a key policy message. In the introduction you were critical about nudging as a policy response and that should be reflected again in a conclusion section so that the readers understand the value of behavioural public policy measures. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-21-12439R1 Nudging in the time of coronavirus? Comparing public support for soft and hard preventive measures, highlighting the role of risk perception and experience PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dudás, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): One of the reviewers suggest some additional minor improvements. Moreover, I have noticed that you ignored my previous comments on the paper, which you can find in the previous decision letter. Therefore, I am inviting to revise your work again for Plos One. I am looking forward for the revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the revision, the paper looks much better than the previous version. I am giving another minor revision as I find the language of the Background section to be very condescending. While it is a good thing that the authors have added new references and restructured it well, but please change the tonality of how you are drawing inferences from those cited references. The current writing style of section 2.1 to 2.3 should maintain neutrality to respect the papers that you have cited. I strongly feel the authors would include the supplementary figures S1 and S2 in the background section as they are very important and should not be thrown as in the appendix. Please improve the writing of the conclusion section as well, you are starting sentences with 'Of course!....'. Such minor elements of written communication should be improved to match the quality and readership of this journal. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Nudging in the time of coronavirus? Comparing public support for soft and hard preventive measures, highlighting the role of risk perception and experience PONE-D-21-12439R2 Dear Dr. Dudás, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-12439R2 Nudging in the time of coronavirus? Comparing public support for soft and hard preventive measures, highlighting the role of risk perception and experience Dear Dr. Dudás: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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