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PONE-D-21-00966 Knowledge, acceptance and perception on COVID-19 vaccine among Malaysians: A web-based survey PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Solehan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript has some major issues which needs to be solved before considering it for publication. The methods section needs improvement as recommended by reviewers, consider improving discussion and language editing. you should clarify how the tool used in the study was generated and if it was validated or not. full reviewers comments are enclosed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Summary and general impression: The paper made by N. A. Mohamed et al. team had great and fruitful efforts to discuss community knowledge, acceptance, and perception about the COVID-19 vaccines. It gave a good insight into the level of knowledge regarding nature, benefits, and risks among the Malaysian community as an important predictor of vaccine adoption and good effective community participation. It also examined the acceptance proportion of the study units to the vaccination idea against COVID-19 emphasized the ability to pay for it and the common factors triggering for vaccination. It also used the HBM as one of the popular models studying human behavior changes or health perceptions illustrating the benefits, barriers, cues to action, and other perspectives that could motivate or render the COVID-19 vaccination. A large sample size of the study was good to validate the results putting the convenient sample technique limitations into consideration. Sociodemographic predictors of knowledge, acceptance, or perception are crucial, especially for recommendations directed to policymakers (who, where, what, when, and whom) to put in their priorities during COVID-19 vaccine health education and awareness campaigns planning. Special issues: Major issues: 1. The study should clarify the variables (dependent and independent) of the study in the methodology section to avoid confusion of the reader regarding the specific objectives of the study. It was hinted only at the last paragraph of the statistical analysis. 2. "Knowledge" is one of the dependent variables (outcomes) of the study it's categorized in the 2nd paragraph of the methodology to: good (≥6) and poor (<6) but its (table 3) relationship with Demographic factors weren’t presented according to that categorization (did not reveal who was good or poor regarding Demographic factors). 3. HBM has six fundamental perspectives (Benefits- Barriers- susceptibility- severity- Cues to action- self efficacy); (some other factors may be added by some psychiatrists in literature). So, Table 6 targets only three perspectives from them without any mentioned rationale or clarification even as a limitation. On the other hand, in the Susceptibilities section question (1) is severity perspective. Also, questions (3, 4, 6, and 7) in the benefits section are considered cues to action. 4. The HBM perspective association (relationship or prediction) with the acceptance of the COVID-19 vaccine is highly necessary to be presented in the results section to be able to recommend an appropriate situation analysis for active community mobilization intervention programmers. Minor issues: 1. Title: "perception on" expression is not used a lot in this context; I think "perception about" is more informative. 2. Introduction: The authors should rewrite their Introduction to refer to the related literature of situation of the study outcomes worldwide, especially recently published work such as • Wong MC, Wong EL, Huang J, Cheung AW, Law K, Chong MK, Ng RW, Lai CK, Boon SS, Lau JT, Chen Z. Acceptance of the COVID-19 vaccine based on the health belief model: A population-based survey in Hong Kong. Vaccine. 2021;39(7):1148–56. • Shekhar R, sheik AB, Upadhyay S et al. COVID-19 Vaccine Acceptance among Health Care Workers in the United States. Vaccines (Basel). 2021;9(2):119. Published 2021 Feb 3. doi:10.3390/vaccines9020119 • Daly M, Robinson E. Willingness to Vaccinate against COVID-19 in the U.S.: Representative Longitudinal Evidence From April to October 2020 [published online ahead of print, 2021 Feb 15]. Am J Prev Med. 2021;doi:10.1016/j.amepre.2021.01.008 • Gagneux-Brunon A, Detoc M, Bruel S, et al. Intention to get vaccinations against COVID-19 in French healthcare workers during the first pandemic wave: a cross-sectional survey. J Hosp Infect. 2021;108:168-173. doi:10.1016/j.jhin.2020.11.020 3. Methodology: (page 5, 3rd sentence) • The authors should clarify the reliability measurement was for the English version or Malay Version or both written together in the same form. 4. Data analysis: (page 6, 2nd sentence) • Kolmogorov–Smirnov test is the standard for normality testing when the sample is more than 50. 5. Results: • Table 2: score system analysis is considered a binary qualitative data (expressed 1: correct, 0: Not correct) which can't be presented as mean (SD) like continuous (scale) quantitative data; it will not be informative. • Tables 1 and 5: Education categories' should follow the common international classifications or standardized (example: Diploma = High school, it may be conflicted with another postgraduate degree in other countries). Also, Currency should be converted (or symbol) to a dollar ($) to be more understood, especially with changes of currency all over the world. • Table 5: The authors should clarify the operational definition (high-risk someone) in the variable "Live with someone who is at a higher risk of getting severe COVID- 19," what they meant? Miscellaneous points: The discussion section was written in a good and informative manner. Reviewer #2: In this research survey from Malaysia, the authors attempt to better characterize public knowledge and acceptance regarding the SARS CoV 2 vaccine. Overall, this qualitative survey is reasonably well written. There are general grammatical errors throughout the document, and so a thorough proofreading will be needed prior to further submissions. I would also encourage the authors to review the manuscript (and, in particular, the introduction), to be more factual and succinct. I have other specific comments for the authors which are outlined below. In the introduction, please refrain from using social media references (such as the BBC). In addition, please rework paragraph 2 on page 3 to more accurately reflect the number of people enrolled each vaccine trial, and that these vaccines were effective at preventing symptomatic/severe disease, and data on preventing disease transmission is less robust. In the methodology, you mention intra-respondent consistency in knowledge/susceptibility, barriers, and benefits. I think review of these values and their implications would be better done in the results. Your data analysis seems straightforward and is described reasonably well. Table 4 is particularly interesting to me. It may be worth considering what roles the ministry of health or private doctors could provide in addressing vaccine hesitancy in the discussion. Also, am I correct in assuming that those with a masters/PhD degree were less likely than those with a diploma/degree to be neutral or positive about acceptance of a COVID-19 degree? If so, why do you think that is (could also be addressed in the conclusions). There needs to be a section that better outlines the limitations of this study. For instance, the demographics of your study group (in particular the gender makeup) are not consistent with World Bank estimates. In addition, those who might use Facebook or other social media platforms might have a different level of knowledge and acceptance of COVID-19 vaccines then the general population. It would be important to mention these limitations and how they may affect the conclusions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Ahmed M. Yousef Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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