Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-14520 Crash Severity Analysis of Vulnerable Road Users using Machine Learning PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Komol, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigated the injury severity of vulnerable road users involved in traffic crashes using three supervised machine learning algorithms namely K-nearest neighbor (KNN), support vector machine (SVM), and random forest (RF). Overall, the topic is interesting and worthy of investigation. The whole manuscript is also well organized and easy to follow. Before suggesting it for publication, several issues, however, need to be well addressed. 1. Among the various machine learning methods, why were the three algorithms namely KNN, SVM, and RF used for analysis? More justifications on the advancement of these three methods are required in the Introduction and Literature Review sections. 2. The discrete choice models have long been used for crash severity analysis (Mannering et al., 2016). More importantly, the random-parameter models have been demonstrated to be superior in accounting for the unobserved heterogeneity, with a substantial improvement in goodness-of-fit and interpretability (Chang et al., 2019; Chen et al., 2019; Waseem et al., 2019; Alogaili and Mannering, 2020; Wang et al., 2020; Zhou et al., 2020; Zhou et al., 2021). These methodological alternatives should not be ignored, particularly in the Literature Review section. In addition, since the random-parameter logit model has become the benchmark for crash data analysis (Mannering and Bhat, 2014), the authors are highly suggested to include this method for comparison, which may help to further highlight the advantages of machine learning methods. 3. When investigating the safety of vulnerable road users, the type of collided vehicles (e.g., private cars, vans, trucks or buses) is expected to have a predominant effect on crash severities. Such information is readily available in the police records and should thus be included for model specification. 4. There are typos throughout the manuscript. For example, on page 9 line 194, “this help understanding…” should be “this helps in understanding…”; on page 10 line 221, “bicyclist” and “pedestrian” should be “bicyclists” and “pedestrians”; on page 24 line 286, “four different classifiers” should be “three different classifiers”. References Alogaili and Mannering, 2020. Unobserved heterogeneity and the effects of driver nationality on crash injury severities in Saudi Arabia. Accident Analysis & Prevention 144, 105618. Chang et al., 2019. Investigating injury severities of motorcycle riders: a two-step method integrating latent class cluster analysis and random parameters logit model. Accident Analysis & Prevention 131, 316-326. Chen et al., 2019. Investigation on the injury severity of drivers in rear-end collisions between cars using a random parameters bivariate ordered probit model. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health 16(14), 2632. Mannering and Bhat, 2014. Analytic methods in accident research: methodological frontier and future directions. Analytic Methods in Accident Research 1, 1-22. Mannering et al., 2016. Unobserved heterogeneity and the statistical analysis of highway accident data. Analytic Methods in Accident Research 11, 1-16. Wang et al., 2020. Random parameter probit models to analyze pedestrian red-light violations and injury severity in pedestrian–motor vehicle crashes at signalized crossings. Journal of Transportation Safety & Security 12(6), 818-837. Waseem et al., 2019. Factors affecting motorcyclists’ injury severities: an empirical assessment using random parameters logit model with heterogeneity in means and variances. Accident Analysis & Prevention 123, 12-19. Zhou et al., 2020. Severity of passenger injuries on public buses: a comparative analysis of collision injuries and non-collision injuries. Journal of Safety Research 74, 55-69. Zhou et al., 2021. Factors associated with consecutive and non-consecutive crashes on freeways: a two-level logistic modeling approach. Accident Analysis & Prevention 154, 106054. Reviewer #2: The current study attempts to examine the injury severity levels of VRUs using machine learning models. The topic is interesting and the paper is overall well-written. There are some issues to be addressed before it can be accepted for publication: 1. for injury severity studies, the choice between statistical models and machine learning ones is often a tradeoff between model interpretation and predictive performance. The authors should add discussion about the interpretability of the chosen machine learning models. 2. The literature review should be strengthened, the following relevant severity studies should be acknowledged and discussed in the paper: [1] Shao Xiaojun, Ma Xiaoxiang, Chen Feng, Song Mingtao, Pan Xiaodong, You Kesi, 2020. A random parameters ordered probit analysis of injury severity in truck involved rear-end collisions. International journal of environmental research and public health. doi:10.3390/ijerph17020395 [2] Dong Bowen, Ma Xiaoxiang, Chen Feng, 2018. Analyzing the Injury Severity Sustained by Non-motorists at Mid-block Considering Non-motorists’ Pre-crash Behavior, Transportation Research Record. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Crash Severity Analysis of Vulnerable Road Users using Machine Learning PONE-D-21-14520R1 Dear Dr. Komol, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Feng Chen Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have no further comments, as the authors have adequately addressed my concerns. I therefore suggest it for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-21-14520R1 Crash Severity Analysis of Vulnerable Road Users using Machine Learning Dear Dr. Komol: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Feng Chen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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