Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-23534 3,3'-Diindolylmethane induces apoptosis and autophagy in fission yeast PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ueno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers felt that the area of investigation was of interest and recognize that there is a substantial body of work represented in the manuscript. However, they had some concerns about the depth or rigorousness of the analysis of the study in its current form. These include the quality of the dilution tests, validity of the drug effects for long-time incubation, as well as the lack of appropriate control strains in each experiment, statistical analysis, or the logic of the experiments. If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point that is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript. I believe that you can easily address these concerns by experiments or editing the texts. Please submit your revised manuscript by the end of October. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the authors examine the effect of 3,3'-diindolylmethane, which has potential anti-cancer properties, in the fission yeast S. pombe. High concentrations of DIM induce apoptosis-like cell death in log-phase cells, while stationary-phase cells are resistant to high dosage of DIM. DIM impairs nuclear envelope integrity, and a knock-out mutant of nuclear membrane protein Lem2 shows higher sensitivity to DIM than wild-type cells. DIM also induces autophagy at a low concentration, as shown in human cells. Overall, the experiments are well conducted and the data presented is informative. Specific points: 1. Figure 1A shows that DIM inhibits fission yeast growth only for 1 day. The authors speculate from this data that "DIM does not inhibit growth when cells are in the stationary-phase" (Lines 203-204). It is difficult to draw the conclusion from Figure 1A, while this speculation seems correct from the other data such as Figure 1B and C. Do surviving stationary-phase cells grow in the presence of DIM? It is likely that DIM toxicity is lost after day 2 in the experiment of Figure 1A. The growth curve for the first 24 hours in the high concentration of DIM may be informative. 2. Figure 2C. Frequencies of cells with fragmented nucleus should be shown. 3. Lines 308-309 read that 10-minute DIM treatment can induce apoptosis. Does 10-minute incubation induce nuclear fragmentation? Reviewer #2: SUMMARY: DIM induces apoptosis and autophagy in a fission yeast. The authors observe that a high concentration of DIM disrupted the nuclear envelope and induced chromosomal condensation. This did not happen with a low concentration of DIM. Instead the cells were triggered to undergo autophagy. A atg7 mutant defective in autophagy was more sensitive to low doses of DIM. Similarly, a lem2 mutant defective in NE physiology was also more sensitive to the drug. Comments on the Figures: Figure 1A: Providing two dilution spots is not typical. The authors should provide at least four dilution spots so that they can quantify the loss of viability. Provide statistical analysis. When the authors comment that DIM did not inhibit growth after additional incubation, suggesting that DIM does not inhibit growth when cells are in stationary phase, how do they rule out the alternative explanation that DIM simply degrades within 24 hours and such is not present to mitigate cell growth after 1 day. Do they know the half-life of DIM in a DMSO solution? How do the authors know that the DIM is still present at day 5 or day 9? 1. Figure 1B: Once again, the authors need to provide at least four dilution spots so that they can quantify the viability of the cells and graph it. Provide statistical analysis. Also, this panel is not easy to understand. More labels are needed. Figure 1C: Once again, the authors need to provide at least four dilution spots so that they can quantify the viability of the cells and graph it. Provide statistical analysis. Figure 2: Can the authors include a positive control that is known to induce apoptosis in fission cells? Otherwise it is hard to know how to interpret the figures. Figure 3: Can the authors include a positive control that is known to induce nuclear condensation and NE disruption in fission cells? Otherwise it is hard to know how to interpret the figures. Can the authors quantify the NE disruption in Figures 3C and 3D in the same way they quantified 3A in 3B? Provide statistical analysis. Figure 5A: Can the authors include a positive control that is known to induce autophagy in fission cells to show lethality of the atg7 mutant? Also, can they quantify the loss of viability as they did in Figure 2B, for example. Provide statistical analysis. Figure 5B: Why did the authors expect autophagy induction by DIM to be dependent on Ire1p? The authors need to describe their expectations that link ER-stress and autophagy in the manuscript. Figure 6A: Can the authors quantify the loss of viability and graph it? Provide statistical analysis. Figure 6B: Can the authors quantify loss of nuclear envelope integrity and graph it? Provide statistical analysis. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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3,3'-Diindolylmethane induces apoptosis and autophagy in fission yeast PONE-D-21-23534R1 Dear Dr. Ueno, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Reiko Sugiura, M.D., PhD. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-21-23534R1 3,3'-Diindolylmethane induces apoptosis and autophagy in fission yeast Dear Dr. Ueno: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Reiko Sugiura Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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