Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 15, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-23013 Kdm6a Deficiency Restricted to Mouse Hematopoietic Cells Causes an Age- and Sex-dependent Myelodysplastic Syndrome-Like Phenotype PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wartman, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. Your study has now been evaluated by two reviewers. As you will see both reviewers find your study of interest but also raise several points that would need to be addressed. Therefore, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscripts. If you were to provide me with a point to point response on how you have addressed all concerns raised by the reviewers inyour revised manuscript, I would be in a strong position to make a decision on publication or your study in PLoS ONE. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The histone H3K27me2/3-specific demethylase Kdm6a is mutated in many different human malignancies among them various blood cancers. Over the past years, several research groups have analysed the consequences of conditional Kdm6a deletion for adult haematopoiesis and tumorigenesis in the mouse. Tian and colleagues used the vav1-cre deleter strain, which has so far not been used for conditional mutation of Kdm6a in the hematopoietic system. The results reported in this study partially overlap with previously published findings but also add novel and potentially important new data, which make a significant addition to the knowledge published so far. The experiments are solid and convincing and the data support the conclusions. Nevertheless, I have a few comments that should be addressed before publication: 1) The vav1-cre transgene is not only active in hematopoietic cell types but also in endothelial cells, which potentially contribute to the hematopoietic niche. Therefore, the statement that only hematopoietic cells are targeted in the reported experimental setup should be toned down. 2) Results section page 11 line 265: The authors state that in the competitive transplantation assays Het-F and KO-M donor cells had a significant competitive disadvantage compared to WT competitor cells but did not have cell migration or engraftment problems. As no specific migration or homing assay was performed to support this statement, the authors should explain in a bit more detail how they came to this conclusion. 3) One of the most important findings described in the current manuscript is that Kdm6a mutant bone marrow stroma promotes the survival of hematopoietic progenitor cells. Unfortunately, the set of experiments that led to this conclusion is not explained in sufficient detail: i) given the differences in the male and the female HSPC compartment, it is rather surprizing that in the non-competitive transplantation experiments (Fig.5) male and female donors were combined in one cohort (cohorts 2-4). What was the rationale behind the combined analyses in this set of experiments? ii) Why did the authors choose to combine male and female recipients in cohort 2 while in the other cohorts only male recipients were used? Typos: Abstract: In line 26 it should read histone H3 K27me3. Discussion: In line 599 it should read …Kdm6a may normally act as a transcriptional activator… Reviewer #2: This paper presents an important refinement of previous studies to look at the role of KDM6a in haemopoeisis and myelodysplastic syndrome. Interestingly, they find a female sex bias in susceptibility to MDS and dysregulation of haempoiesis. Their analysis is extensive but does not reveal the epigenetic basis for the phenomenon they describe. Nevertheless, the work is an important contribution and seems well executed. Although KDM6a is an X-linked gene it is not clear from the present study what the underlying molecular mechanisms are, however, it is important that this work is published as it contributes to a further understanding of the generation of AML and other haemopoietic disorders. I would suggest toning down the last sentence of the abstract: "and that its inactivation may contribute to AML pathogenesis by altering the epigenetic state of HSPCs ." as no clear-cut change in epigenetic state has been identified as far as I can see. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-21-23013R1Kdm6a Deficiency Restricted to Mouse Hematopoietic Cells Causes an Age- and Sex-dependent Myelodysplastic Syndrome-Like PhenotypePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wartman, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. I have now read through the revised version and the response to the reviewers' comments. I find that you have addressed all earlier concerns. However, there are a few corrections needed before the study can be accepted ( Line 374 the figure S7A-C figure S6A). Therefore, we invite you to submit a further revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please use this revision to check once more that the figures are referenced correctly in the text. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Anton Wutz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The revised version has addressed the earlier concerns of the reviewers in a comprehensive manner. There are a few minor corrections that would be needed before the study can be accepted. Minor points a) Line 374 the figure S7A-C reference does not show an immunoblot of H3K27ac. Please, check the figure numbering and references in the text match up. b) Figure S6A shows survival curves for different genotypes. The curves of all but the control (black) are not obvious which might be caused by overlap. Please, check that this figure is a correct representation of the data. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Kdm6a Deficiency Restricted to Mouse Hematopoietic Cells Causes an Age- and Sex-dependent Myelodysplastic Syndrome-Like Phenotype PONE-D-21-23013R2 Dear Dr. Wartman, thank you for sending your further revised manuscript. I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Anton Wutz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-23013R2 Kdm6a Deficiency Restricted to Mouse Hematopoietic Cells Causes an Age- and Sex-dependent Myelodysplastic Syndrome-Like Phenotype Dear Dr. Wartman: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Anton Wutz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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