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PONE-D-21-05497 Machine learning-based model selection and parameter estimation from kinetic data of complex first-order reaction systems PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Groma, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper the authors use sparse modelling techniques in order to infer rate parameters for first-order reaction networks. My recommendation is that this article is accepted with minor revisions. The paper argues its case very well, and they carefully lay-out the LASSO-type sparse regression procedure used in order to infer the model parameters. In particular, they take great care in optimising the hyperparameters of the LASSO procedure via Bayesian Optimisation, whereas often in other publications the LASSO parameters are ascertained empirically. Additionally, I was impressed by the quality of the figures in the paper which are stylish, colorful and easy to read. However, I do have some issues to raise that I would like the authors to respond to: 1. The introduction gives a too brief overview of the problem the authors are attempting to solve. They could add a schematic figure detailing exactly what question they are intending to answer, and the workflow of their intended procedure. Personally, I am unfamiliar with DADS and DAS and would have appreciated a more detailed introduction to them, which would help keep the paper self-contained. Also, to aid experimentalists you could detail exactly what you mean by the microscopic rate constants/matrix with respect to a simple reaction system for which you can write the deterministic rate equations explicitly. 2. Although not awful, the written English could certainly benefit from a thorough proof-reading as often sentences are awkwardly constructed. 3. Even though I really like the presentation of the figures the captions need to be much more detailed since it is sometimes unclear exactly what is being shown. For example, although they attempted to explain in the text, I am unsure of the meaning behind Fig 2B and D (and similar figures). I understand that they relate to the sparsity and amplitude of the basis functions but I am unsure exactly what is being shown to draw their conclusions from. Another example is the caption of Fig 3, where the authors need to write at least a sentence of explanation to accompany sub-figure and aid the narrative (currently the entire caption comprises around 10 words). Same comments can be made for the other figure captions. 4. The method is shown to (almost) correctly infer the number of components needed for their example model (Scheme 1) and additionally to infer the correct kinetic parameters from simulated data (Table 1). However, surely it would be the case that experimentalists do not know a priori whether their system is indeed made up solely of first-order reactions. Although the authors do make hints to future work dealing with non-first-order kinetics in the conclusion, as it stands the method seems to have little use where in reality reaction systems may contain bimoleular reactions, time dependent rate constants or non-exponential waiting time distributions. I would like the authors to show the outputs of their sparse regression procedure when applied to reaction networks including non-first-order kinetics. Interesting questions in the analysis of this include: (i) in reaction systems no solely consisting of first order reactions, are the reactions that are of first order correctly inferred?, (ii) for a reaction with a non-exponential waiting time distribution, say an Erlang or Hypoexponential distributed waiting time distribution, does the sparse regression procedure manage to effective infer the effective number of additional number of species introduced by these waiting time distributions and the associated hyperparameters? It is very important to address such questions, since if the sparse regression procedure works only for reaction systems we know to be first order a priori it could not be used on experimental data for which we do not know the underlying details. 5. The inference of the kinetic parameters is shown to be relatively robust with respect to the artificial noise added to the experimental data (Table 1). However, the choice of this ‘noise size’ is arbitrary, and a much better test of the robustness of the procedure to realistic stochastic noise would be to include it individually on each species, being specified by the linear noise approximation (LNA). If the authors are unfamiliar, the LNA gives an estimate for the intrinsic noise based on an expansion of the master equation in the system size, keeping only the terms to order Ω-1/2. Read “van Kampen, Stochastic Processes in Physics and Chemistry, Chapter X” for more details. Reviewer #2: Please see my PDF review and the scanned manuscript. My main contribution is to help with the English grammar in the authors' description. I specified "Minor revision", but a serious effort is needed to smooth the paper's readability. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Holehouse Reviewer #2: Yes: Michael A Saunders [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-05497R1 Machine-learning model selection and parameter estimation from kinetic data of complex first-order reaction systems PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Groma, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ramon Grima Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all of the concerns that I previously raised and the document is now much more improved. In particular the authors have put a lot of effort in addressing the query I had if their procedure is applied to systems with non-first order reactions - doing so with two examples. There are still two minor concerns that hopefully the authors can change before publication: 1. In the new Section from line 739-751 there is a conflicting notation in "A" which is used both as a species in (13) and as an algebraic parameter in Eq (12) - please change one of these. 2. The authors state that in response to query 5 that "As we argue in the revised version, however, the suggested consideration of the intrinsic noise due to the small size of the reaction system in the framework of NLA [sic] is impossible for real experimental data on the kinetics of the bR photocycle for which our simulations are presented. This is due to the fact that the noise level originating from a realistic measuring procedure is by more than four orders of magnitude higher". Could the authors please provide references in support of this statement? Reviewer #2: The original manuscript required many grammatical corrections as indicated with my previous review. The authors have dealt with these diligently. Just a few minor corrections are needed in the revision. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Holehouse Reviewer #2: Yes: Michael Alan Saunders [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Machine-learning model selection and parameter estimation from kinetic data of complex first-order reaction systems PONE-D-21-05497R2 Dear Dr. Groma, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ramon Grima Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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