Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-38491 Physician perceived barriers and facilitators for self-measured blood pressure monitoring- A qualitative study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gupta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study on the perspectives of primary care providers on barriers and facilitators to implementing SMBP. The authors use the theoretical domains framework (TDF) to organize the determinants, which has the potential to inform future interventions. Overall, while interesting, it's not clear that the findings are novel, generalizable or would add to the literature overall. I have included some recommendations for improving the study below. Overall, the introduction is very well written and makes a good case for the effectiveness and importance of SMBP. It would be helpful to quantify and reference the conclusion that SMBP has not been widely implemented, particularly in the telemedicine era that we find ourselves. The authors summarize several prior studies on the barriers/facilitators to SMBP implementation. It's not clear how their approach/focus on providers fills gaps in prior research. Have prior studies not examined provider perspectives? Is it clear that provider behavior is key to SMBP implementation? The authors provide a good definition of the utility of implementation science, but should provide a rationale for their use of TDF/COMB/BCW as opposed to CFIR for example in examining provider based determinants in the methods section. To really understand context, which is key to implementation science, more information is needed about the setting (urban, rural, large, small, academic, integrated?). The authors should include the start date of interviews. Did the authors assess pre/post covid changes in perspectives/attitudes? How was the interview guide developed. There are several examples of TDF interview guides in the literature. Did the authors explore each construct? What kinds of questions were posed of the participants (this should be included in the supplementary materials if possible)? Reporting should align with COREQ https://www.equator-network.org/reporting-guidelines/coreq/ In the results section, the authors note that many participants did not use the patient portal to collect SMBP measurements. This is again why it's important to understand context. Is SMBP available in your setting? Is the SMBP data integrated into the EHR currently? This is important because if widely available/financed but not utilized, then there may be a way to tie this into prior literature suggesting that SMBP was impossible because of lack of EHR integration, etc. Were there any differences (e.g., demographic) between individuals who agreed to participate in the interviews and those who did not? In the motivation section, the interviewers note that they prompted PCPs to answer questions about incentives. Again are these questions that you added to the TDF interview guide? To what degree did providers receive an introduction on SBMP prior to the interviews (i.e., the fact that nurse assisted SMBP has been shown to be particularly effective). In the discussion, I found it difficult to tease apart whether/how their findings are different from prior research or how their theoretical approach added to prior literature. The utility of using BCW is that you can map to intervention functions/BCTs. Are they any that the authors can glean that should be tested in future research? Do the authors have a sense for which one of the TDF constructs were the most salient (e.g, are underuse mostly driven by opportunity or motivation and less so capability?). Reviewer #2: This manuscript, entitled “Physician perceived barriers and facilitators for self-measured blood pressure monitoring- A qualitative study”, is an important contribution to the literature for self-measured blood pressure monitoring. As the authors note, there is strong science behind the use of SMBP for hypertension management but we have yet to achieve widespread implementation in the U.S. due to a number of patient- and clinician-identified barriers. There are a few publications on barriers but this manuscript helps to shore up physician-identified barriers and facilitators for SMBP implementation. Overall, this is a well-written piece, but it could benefit from some additional copy-editing (e.g. for missing hyphens in compound adjectives, at least one strange use of a semi-colon). A few copy edits of note: • Pg 15 of PDF – under “Opportunity” paragraph, third row, delete “expected”. • Pg 17 of PDF – “Under Behavioral Regulation…” paragraph, third line down, “recoding” should be changed to “recording” • Table 1 – For the question “Please rate the appropriateness of alternative strategies for improving HTN management”, second to last column heading needs to be changed to “somewhat inappropriate” • Table 2 – “HPBM” should be changed, at a minimum, to “HBPM” but better to change it to “SMBP” for consistency. (second column, first entry) Some additional suggestions: • Recommend editing your third paragraph in the background to mention home-blood pressure monitoring as follows: “Compared to in-clinic BP monitoring, out-of-office or self-measured blood pressure monitoring (SMBP), sometimes known as home blood pressure monitoring, …” I much prefer the term SMBP and much of the currently published literature uses this term but not all of it. • In your background, you mention the Surgeon General’s support of SMBP (as a strategy from the recent Call to Action to Control Hypertension). Could also consider a sentence acknowledging how national initiatives like AMA/AHA’s TargetBP and CDC/CMS’s Million Hearts have been working for years on widespread implementation of SMBP but have not been able to make much headway. • For generalizability purposes, this piece could greatly benefit from some additional contextual information about the respondents and their patient populations. For example, the authors provide some written demographic data about respondents (e.g. 15/17 women, 3 geriatricians, mix of both academic and community physicians) but it would be nice to have those data and additional data (age, race/ethnicity) in a table. Would also be nice to understand if any of these 17 key informants were among the physicians who supported SMBP or were they among those who had reservations about using it (from the survey)? Would also be helpful to have some ballpark estimation of what the respondents actual (and perceived if available) BP control rate is for their patient population, what percent of their population has HTN, etc. It would also be helpful to understand a little about the general patient population – e.g. low SES, inner city population; more affluent, mostly-white population. Physician perceptions of barriers and facilitators are skewed by the patients they serve. • You mention CPC+ but it feels almost like a non sequitur. Consider talking more generally about pay-for-quality initiatives because CPC+ is just one of many initiatives in that space. If you want to call it out, perhaps add a citation. Likewise, you parenthetically mention “A Million Hearts Initiative”. Would recommend changing that to “The Million Hearts Initiative” (or more correctly just “Million Hearts”) and perhaps adding a bit more context or a citation there as well. Million Hearts is a major supporter of SMBP but as an initiative, in general, doesn’t pay for monitors. Were you referencing their work with NACHC/federally qualified health centers or work through departments of public health? Unclear. It is still very much a live initiative (i.e. hasn’t gone away) so additional clarity would be helpful. • A potential limitation not noted is the fact that almost all respondents were women. While we don’t necessarily have any reason to believe women would have different perceptions about SMBP than men, it is fairly unusual for 88% of respondents in any study to be women and should at least be noted. • Another potential limitation is, depending on your response to one of my questions above, the respondents were likely all supporters of SMBP so their barriers are already skewed towards people who trust SMBP. Responses would have differed if respondents included physicians who don’t use SMBP with their patients or who don’t trust the readings, etc. • I would caution you in the future to separate the use of blood pressure kiosks (i.e. found in pharmacies/grocery stores) from SMBP performed on a patient’s own blood pressure monitor. Not a lot of evidence behind the former, lots behind the latter. If you discussed both of them equivalently with physicians in your interviews (the way it was denoted in the survey), that may have skewed their perceptions. May want to list this as a potential limitation. • Future research is not noted but there seemed to be some gaps in in what was asked of these physicians. For example, what were their feelings about blood pressure device loaner programs (where health care settings bulk purchase devices and loan them out to patients on a temporary basis)? Were they aware of the new CPT codes that were introduced in 2020 that would reimburse clinicians one time to train patients on SMBP technique/perform device calibration (99473) and reimburse physicians up to monthly to receive SMBP readings, interpret, and combine into a patient’s care plan (99474)? • References 30 and 46 appear to be the same reference. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-20-38491R1 Physician perceived barriers and facilitators for self-measured blood pressure monitoring- A qualitative study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gupta, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please incorporate the second reviewer's minor comments. Thank you. regards, Vijay. =============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: This manuscript, entitled “Physician perceived barriers and facilitators for self-measured blood pressure monitoring- A qualitative study”, is an important contribution to the literature for self-measured blood pressure monitoring. The authors have done a nice job addressing previous reviewer comments. A few minor comments: 1. Suggest reviewing it again for grammar editing – found multiple punctuation (e.g. inconsistent use of Oxford comma), spelling (e.g. “specifc”, “fulfil”), and grammar mistakes (e.g. missing hyphens in compound adjectives like “patient care related”, “evidence based”). Proper grammar and editing will add needed clarity throughout. 2. Suggest editing the sentence “A majority of patients are Caucasian, 6% Hispanic, 2.5% Asian, 1.7% Black, and 18% unknown or other.” to “The racial/ethnic breakdown of patients was XX% Caucasian, 6% Hispanic, 2.5% Asian, 1.7% Black, and 18% unknown or other. 3. “Approximately 49% of all patients with a BP reading had atleast…” – need a space in ‘at least’. 4. You use both “White” and “Caucasian” in describing race in your study. Suggest picking one (White). 5. Under the Opportunity section, the authors state “Physicians saw an opportunity for SMBP. Under Social Influences, most physicians identified published evidence as the major reason for using SMBP, and not peer influence. Since SMBP is backed by evidence, some PCPs found it concerning if others did not use SMBP. Only a change in evidence, and not the behavior of their colleagues, would make them not use SMBP (Table 3, social influences).” The finding that is more interesting than what would make SMBP users change their practice is what would make SMBP non-users change their practice. The way this paragraph is written, there is no opportunity on which we can act. 6. “Under Behavioral Regulation respondents elaborated differences in using SMBP for managing HTN.” Need the word “on” after “elaborated”. 7. “Despite their beliefs in the strong evidence behind SMBP, there was underutilization of SMBP due to logistical barriers, lack of resources and trained personnel to help with SMBP.” – need an “and” before “lack” 8. “…suggesting need for better strategies to monitor SMBP” – need the word “the” before “need” 9. “(such as use of patient portal for entering SMBP)” – need “the” or “a” before “patient portal” 10. “performance assessments, standardized protocols” – need an “and” after the comma 11. “With stakeholders; patients, physicians, health systems and insurers interested in adopting SMBP, practical strategies that are scalable are needed.” – this is an awkward sentence. Suggest rewrite of “With stakeholders such as patients, physicians, health systems, and insurers interested in adopting SMBP, practical, scalable strategies are needed.” 12. Table 2 says SMPB instead of SMBP ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Nathalie Moise Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-38491R2 Physician perceived barriers and facilitators for self-measured blood pressure monitoring- A qualitative study Dear Dr. Gupta: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vijayaprakash Suppiah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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