Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 29, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-10299 Temporal Deposition of Copper (Cu) and Zinc (Zn) in the Sediments of Metal Removal Constructed Wetlands PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Elhaj Baddar, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 25 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I read the manuscript and found it very good, as it represents a scientific research of original data with an applied character that simulates the environmental treatment of heavy elements (Cu and Zn). Field experiments, statistics and chemical analyses have been performed in high technical standard and results were presented in a clear manner mostly except for some places of the manuscript. The manuscript meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. However, I recommend to accept the manuscript after major revision and the following points should be addressed: 1. Title must be concise and informative, so the abbreviation Cu and Zn should be deleted and title become “Temporal Deposition of Copper and Zinc in the Sediments of Metal Removal Constructed Wetlands”. 2. Line 59: The expression “media/soils” doesn’t be accepted, please change it in another style. 3. Line 103-104: The author stated “Briefly, the Tritium facility discharges wastewater through source pipes into a rectangular pool where water is retained to provide hydrological control”. How much is the tritium wastewater discharged through source pipes into a rectangular basin? 4. Line 123-124: Surface standing water was carefully siphoned off from the cores avoiding disturbing the flocculent layer. To what extent surface standing water can be siphoned? 5. Line 129-130: Dried sediments were passed through a 2 mm sieve. I think after sediments be dried will need gentle grinding to be sieved easily. Line 176-177: In the model selection process, we followed the protocol mentioned in Zuur et al. 2009, (Zuur et al. 177 2009). Please, it is better is not to repeat the reference “Zuur et al. 2009” twice, try to reformulate the statement. Line 181: Please do not use do not use the active voice and the pronoun “we” as mentioned in “Therefore, we only kept log10TC in the model”.by the same way, look at Line 184; “Fourth, we refitted the model with the generalized”; Line 188; “Fifth, we specified the optimum fixed structure using the backward selection”; Lines191 and 192 “first, we evaluated the homogeneity of residuals using graphic tools and the Bartlett’s test of homogeneity. Second, we checked the normality graphically and by using the….”; and lines 194-195 “We used α at 0.05 as the significance level”. 6. Line 198: I suggest to change that title to “Deposition of Cu and Zn on the interface water-sediments”. 7. In both models, we find ambiguity in which layers the copper and zinc are deposited more? and why? 8. Please explain the role of Total carbon in the absorption process and its absorption capacity. 9. The best was to analyze the minerals and diagnose the type of clay minerals. As is known, every clay mineral has specific value of cation exchange capacity. 10. It is better to make mineralogy study for the soil sample. 11. Line 351 “Heavy metal (Cu and Zn)”, I think lead and zinc represent a plural state, not singular, so it is better to write the term heavy metals, not heavy metal. 12. If you use British language, the Acknowledgments” write as “Acknowledgements”. Salih M Awadh salih.awad@sc.uobaghdad.edu.iq Reviewer #2: 1. Avoid using the first person pronouns "I or we” in your writing, and the most common reason given for this is that readers may regard such writing as being subjective, whereas science is all about objectivity. 2. manuscript should have some novelty in its work 3. remove “map” from the title of Fig S1 and line 101 4. fig S1 need to add the size and the scale 5. My suggestion to add Figure of study area to the manuscript 6. the methods section very long , please minimize it 7. the conclusion section very short and need more info, you need make balance between sections 8. Fig S5, S7, S8 and S9 titles need modify according to the charts type. Reviewer #3: This research predicted Copper (Cu) and Zinc (Zn) deposition patterns , the research examined and studied the effects of time, seasons, and total carbon (TC) on Copper (Cu) and Zinc (Zn) deposition in the surface sediments of the H-02 constructed wetland on the Savannah River Site . This research Covering both warm (April-September) and cool (October-March) seasons, several sediment cores were collected twice a year from the constructed wetland cells over 7 years, from 2007 to 2013. This research used the Generalized Least Squares (GLS) & Linear Regression Model (LRM), linear regression model explained the behaviour and the variability of Cu deposition in the sediments , using the (GLS) extension with the (LRM)allowed for unequal variance . Reviewer #4: This is an original research paper on developing a pattern evaluation of heavy metals (Cu, Zn) settlement in the surface constructed wetland by time and Total Carbon (TC). The topic selected by the authors is appreciated in the specific domain of science and engineering for several purposes like contamination treatment at a lower price and lower environmental impact concern. Nonetheless, the work needs to be improved to reach the level of publication for readers of the respected PLOS ONE journal. Abstract: 1. This needs precise information on how the outcomes of the linear regression model are going to be impacted. 2. Cu and Zn changed the value reported so TC needs to report as well. 3. Line 40: …On the other hand, using the generalized least squares extension with the linear regression model allowed for unequal variance, and thus was more successful in explaining Zn deposition pattern… what does mean ‘more successful’? rewrite it. Introduction: 4. Line50: … relatively cheaper… how? Explain it in detail. 5. The review assessment has been poorly drafted. Add more recent (5 years) papers. https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s11356-020-11775-z https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0048969721001388 6. There is no text belong why the authors used generalized generalized least squares extension with the linear regression model while there are more advanced approaches available? Methods: 7. Need more explanation in Study site: write all the tributary or contribution to the site. 8. Why authors used limited no. of influencing parameters? Is there any problem to get more no. of those parameters metrological and/or climatological? 9. Write all functions of the code used in the ‘Italic’ font. Results and Discussion: 10. Need statistical examination such as min, max, sd, etc in Table 1 11. FigureS1: replace with more presentable with all needed information 12. Better draw PCA Biplot to analyzed the dim strength between the factors. 13. Add regression equation in all scatter plots for showing the correlation mathematically how stronger? 14. Table S2: better add into the respective graph 15. In discussion: add how this changed value (within the used years) have an impact on the environment and local community and what measure should take to mitigate it for example several adsorption studies have been applied: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0045653521006317 https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s11356-021-12836-7 Conclusion: 16. Add the weakness of the study. 17. Add future objective of the research including the applying machine learning approach to predict the sediment for example https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0304389420314783 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S026974912036351X ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Temporal Deposition of Copper (Cu) and Zinc (Zn) in the Sediments of Metal Removal Constructed Wetlands PONE-D-21-10299R1 Dear Dr. Elhaj Baddar, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have reviewed the required amendments and found a good response from the researcher. He accomplished most of the basic points and answered some of them adequately. I therefore find the manuscript now is more quality, so I recommend to give an accept decision. Additionally, I advise the author that I prefer to remove the chemical element symbols (Cu and Zn) from the manuscript title. It doesn’t mean thing to be included in the title. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Salih Muhammad Awadh Reviewer #3: No
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PONE-D-21-10299R1 Temporal deposition of copper and zinc in the sediments of metal removal constructed wetlands Dear Dr. Elhaj Baddar: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Zaher Mundher Yaseen Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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